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[B][I][size=7]IN MY EYES I SEE NO OTHER[/size][/I][/B]
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:lol:
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Yeah guys, quick note:
Listen to maudlin of the Well. |
will add to list of things to hear
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I GOT A FEELING YOU DONT WANNA KNOW;
A CARBON 18 BRAIN TEST. Love Lost But Not Forgotten is epic. |
I have Kayo Dot. Haven't heard Maudlin, but according to wiki its similar but without the lucid dreaming or something.
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You've got it all wrong.
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maudlin of the Well is heavy metal.
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[I]I get metal wrong.[/I]
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Both bands rule.
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[size=1]WHEN IT COMES TIME TO PARTY WE ALWAYS PARTY HARD [/size]
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i wish s&l wasn't so dead
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It's ok, I'm here now.
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spice it up then, spice it up
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sup gice
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sup.
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hey guys
I've been recording a lot lately [I]a lot[/I] |
show us tojes.
show us! |
no but you see it sucks a lot =(
and I only have 5 songs ready and I want to finish at least 10 - 12 before sending it out |
Happy New Year S&L.
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A little too early.
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no it's not.
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It is for most amerika!
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tojes, give me some good tips on songwriting.
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Depends on what kind of music you're playing.
I like rhythmic dissonance and overall dissonance because I'm a fag and I truly believe that harmonic/melodic music sucks, so I try to keep my music shifting and what not. For the most part, I write very personal lyrics for the music, but some people like to keep it impersonal. So, what kind of musician are you? |
i dunno, i like personal lyrics so give me some tips on that
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Don't make them cheesy.
Don't make gay refrains. Don't use an excessive amount of "me" "her" "him". |
your advice is so inspiring.
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Well, there's no particular lineaments on how a personal piece should be written. Take Kayo Dot's A pitcher of Summer, for instance:
[I]One morning, before the leaves began changing I caught a piece of summer and poured it into a pitcher; This I placed in the cellar on a shelf collecting dust . Autumn, then winter, rose up from the sea, and my Garden was a garden filled with unbroken snow. No flower strained its face to the ice giants' whisper, No life coloured the vision of a newborn Spring babe. My cellar-water dripping into a pail And I lifted my piece of summer Like a piece of memory or a dream Like these, caught on film And carried it to the garden floes, The wind turning drifting stars to madness. Poured forth gracefully, this ctheric tincture Lifts winter's coat-of-arms with coaxing aromas and electricity. Used with vigilance, a Pitcher of Summer stirs a memory into swooning, And bravely, the flowers of the past will stretch their limbs into the sky While snow falls quietly all around.[/I] I personally think the lyrics are homo as fuck, but still it reads so awesomely I can stop wishing I had thought of this first. I mean they are not homo They're cool =( |
[I]It never hurt this much before,[/I]
[I][B]And I feel I'm courting Saturn[/B].[/I] [I]The Twelve-Eyed Secret gazes through a prism,[/I] [I]Staring into raindrops swirling slow[/I] [I]It lifts its horrible heads[/I] [I][B]With lidless orbs of limitless vision[/B].[/I] [I]I dream with fluid movements in a lake[/I] [I]The ripples cast from skipping stones[/I] [I]We speak below a gushing mind,[/I] [I]Crouching in a corner, hid behind a box[/I] [I]Full of Worms and stalking shadows.[/I] [I]Magnetism draws me to a cone of space;[/I] [I]I sift still through hours of its plasma,[/I] [I]Biding time until the clocks collapse.[/I] [I]Music shattered my spine on the steps outside;[/I] [I][B]I cannot move; my liquid breathing[/B][/I] [I]Is sculpted with this binding gel.[/I] [I]But come, my love, and rescue me[/I] [I]From failure.[/I] [I][B]Cover me with an opium sheet,[/B][/I] [I][B]Embrace me with gossamer;[/B][/I] [I]Kiss the moonstones from my eyes[/I] [I]And brush the cobwebs from my bones.[/I] [I]It all sings beautifully;[/I] [I]With all your strength believe this.[/I] [I]But I know you can't understand[/I] [I][B]Why I threw myself from the glass again.[/B][/I] those are better bold betterer |
yeah that one's cool
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erectile
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awesome
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I keep making these to do lists, but nothing gets crossed out.
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is it because life is like a bowl of oranges?
in fact it's more like jello pudding. |
life can be like anything you like, it's all perception.
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i think everybody should write something for the LC.
i just did. do it. now. |
Okay. Will post something now.
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I started work on something for it tonight, be good if there's alot of entries.
I'll hold off posting it in the main forum until after voting and stuff. Happy New Year guys, anyone do anything exciting? Edit: wtf minus is back - where've you been man? |
I fucked and that's as cool as I get.
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