Hey surf thanks again for the crit. I did mean decadent, I wasnt sure how to spell it though.

I made a critique and it felt goo.

We watched [i]Cabaret[/i] in class the other day. Great, great, great film.

i did a haiku for the lc, is that acceptable?

Sure but I bet it sucks.

It does but whatever.

I'm still on shaky internet at the moment. I'll try and get a few crits done, but it keeps cutting out.

Sup people?

Nothing much I'll critique your materials.

Because I have to moderate. :I

Meh my internetz is capped and i'm on dial-up and couldn't be arsed posting much. Will crit more next month i suppose, if im not too bust with school work.

Being in a house with six lazy guys means that not much gets done quickly, but we'll get internet eventually.

And our power might get turned off in a few days.

The downside of living with other guys.

:I

I prefer that over living with my grandmother, who spent last night TWO GOD DAMN HOURS praying, makingme go to sleep at 2 am.

Awesome, just bloody awesome.

But at least you're gonna have a clean soul.

Got my timetable for this semester:

Introduction to film
Creative writing module that I forgot the name of

Three days off so I'll have to get a job, and no actual english work.

I don't have free time.

Sick, internet is back up quicker. I will post some crits now. Why is And Nico's thread still up? I can't believe how much attention that has had.

WHy the hell cant i start my own thread??? i have an activated account! Anyway im trying to find a vocalist for my band where can i post to advertise!?

thanx.

Try the classifieds section, and you can't post threads because you just joined.

[QUOTE=evildaveuk;15359824]WHy the hell cant i start my own thread??? i have an activated account! Anyway im trying to find a vocalist for my band where can i post to advertise!?

thanx.[/QUOTE]
Wait one day, don't lose your breath.

There is no classifieds section.

But don't post it in here, that probably won't go anywhere and the thread'll spam up and people will laugh at you.

And tojes, can you close the 'i wouldn't breathe that air' thread? Its pretty much run its course I guess

Yer I said that in post 6671 like a week ago. It's a bit annoying having something pretty insipid get so much attention.

Ah well its closed now anyway.

Started a new piece using 'Objective Correlation', something they've been telling us about in lectures and that. Seems a cool idea, so might post up what I've got soon.

Is that something to do with T.S Eliot's 'Tradition and the Individual Talent'? Influenced by the philosopher by the last name of Bradley or something? I did an essay on objective correlative earlier in the but I can barely remember it now lol

Man, this place is the equivalent of roadkill.

Roadkill has a wider range of emotions.

I can't get over this song:

Aoki Takamasa + Tujiko Nuriko - Alien

/soulseeks

I've been in Paris this weekend. Awesome city. Watched the rugby final and visited some galleries (which were much more interesting)

I sat outside a Parisian cafe drinking coffee and smoking, wearing black and sunglasses and writing poetry.

I am a cliché.

You forgot the [size=7][B]BERET DUH[/B][/size]

sea canes

[QUOTE]
I sat outside a Parisian cafe drinking coffee and smoking, wearing black and sunglasses and writing poetry.

I am a cliché.[/QUOTE]

But did you feel cool doing it?

So I wrote something the other day. I might post it.

Hey BigMachine, what's with your avatar? You have a thing for freckled red-heads?

I felt very cool

and berets are for amatuers.

posted something, so I'll try and get some crits done.

and I still have no real internet, so it may take a while.

[QUOTE=RunAmokRampant;15440714]Hey BigMachine, what's with your avatar? You have a thing for freckled red-heads?[/QUOTE]

Call me Mitch bro it's all sweet.

I do have a thing for that particular freckled red head yes. But I am due a change. Am taking suggestions.

Edit: Small pic = freckles. She doesn't really have freckles though.

Yer fair enough. I was going to say that the chick who plays Hermoine is better looking but whatev man.

I'm Alan by the way too.

Awesome man.

So guys, writers block. Gay.

I think this whole forum is in a state of writers block. Free writing generally helps stir some ideas.

Ive tried, trust me.

It's really annoying actually, I had a burst where I wrote a piece a night of decent quality and havent written since.

Happens a lot it seems.

I was blocked during the summer, had an outburst come September and then went back into my writers block state.

Reading poetry helps, listen to music while writing can help too.

Mhm, though I find it's way better to have some guitar and drums sorta' instrumental stuff, or I find my favorite and best one is to check out a really cool quote, or short story or a point in History, put on a song (Usually for me it's Orchestral, or Chamber Choir stuff) that reflects best my chosen topic, and you just go with it.

It's a really cool way to go about it, as it gives you a topic, a emotion through music and if you just let it soak in, you can paint it back onto the page with it all combined, and your own stroke added.

[QUOTE=Wicked Train of Thought;15453698]Mhm, though I find it's way better to have some guitar and drums sorta' instrumental stuff, or I find my favorite and best one is to check out a really cool quote, or short story or a point in History, put on a song (Usually for me it's Orchestral, or Chamber Choir stuff) that reflects best my chosen topic, and you just go with it.

It's a really cool way to go about it, as it gives you a topic, a emotion through music and if you just let it soak in, you can paint it back onto the page with it all combined, and your own stroke added.[/QUOTE]

This...but electronica for me; some m83, mum, aoki takamasa, or other stuffs = beautiful.

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