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DeadReligion 12-25-2006 10:28 PM

F[U]u[/U]ck Christmas. Hanukkah is where it's at.

P.S. How come it takes so long for crits on my stuff now? Frickin' ignorant noobzorz.

P.S.S. Noobs, Crits are like oral sex. Give it to get it. Got it?

TheBigMachine 12-25-2006 10:38 PM

I agree. My stuff takes forever to get crits. Ill hook you up soon.

TojesDolan 12-26-2006 10:58 AM

Sorry brothers but I've been busy. But now I'm broken inside, so I have time to critique.

Surf 12-26-2006 02:43 PM

[QUOTE=False Advertising;13886541]quite simple

aim: False2Advertisin

if you need help or have questions[/QUOTE]

I had a fiddle and its not bad. I found some online tutorials which were helpful. I'll have another little mess around and see what I can do.

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 05:38 PM

Trying to self learn the fiddle?

Surf 12-26-2006 05:39 PM

got to learn to play along with the pogues.

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 05:42 PM

oic.
i need to crit more stuff again. but it's getting boring, all the pieces are so alike.

Surf 12-26-2006 05:46 PM

Rejected reply:
at the moment I'm just fiddling with myself

real reply:
If they're the same, say the same thing. then direct them to the guide. Its what I do.

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 05:49 PM

Good plan.

Surf 12-26-2006 05:55 PM

K go. I shouldn't advocate just posting somewhat generic replies but so many pieces suffer from the same problems. At least try to get to the end of some of them.

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 05:56 PM

I will do my best.

Surf 12-26-2006 06:01 PM

Godspeed sir, godspeed

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 06:09 PM

Gets me every time that saying.

Oh dear...where has the quality gone.

Surf 12-26-2006 06:20 PM

I blame christmas. Everyone is far too exictable and not depressive/poetic enough.

I'm thinking of posting the piece from the last challenge to get some crits, I'm no sure what else I can do with it.

TojesDolan 12-26-2006 06:57 PM

Hey! A friend of mine back stabbed me! And the love of my life is really a slut!

I wrote a shˇtload about it.

here are my two babies lel

[url]http://media.putfile.com/percusion[/url]
[url]http://media.putfile.com/Para-ti-Cachorra[/url]

I need to work on my songwriting. These are like bare-bones attempts. Dang.

Surf 12-26-2006 07:16 PM

What little I know about song writing tells me that the percussion is too loud in the first one. I could barely hear your godly guitar skills.
Second one was cool.

what little I know about relationships is in no way helpful/relevant/substantial

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 07:20 PM

Also, the first one is just that wee bit out of time.

TojesDolan 12-26-2006 07:37 PM

Yeah the mix resulted much higher than I expected for percusion (sic), and the second one just needs a lot more sections.

EDIT: I need to work on timing. Like, RIGHT NOW.

EDIT2: Uh yeah the second song was supposed to have a nice tritone riff for the lolz, but it didn't work out very well. I'm adding that tomorrow.

Surf 12-26-2006 08:22 PM

Apparently I have good natural time/rhythm.

Look at me go 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4

TheBigMachine 12-26-2006 09:14 PM

I is better look at me on the back beat 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and

TojesDolan 12-27-2006 02:32 AM

you're playing in 8ths ugh you don't understand music

TojesDolan 12-27-2006 03:45 AM

[B][size=7]OK GUYS THIS IS JUST A HUNCH BUT I THINK SURF IS SOME KIND OF VETERAN AND DOESN'T WANT TO TELL US.[/size][/B]

Surf 12-27-2006 03:59 AM

I fought in 'Nam.

And I did sleep for about six hours. But it wasn't enough. So I may go back to bed.

TojesDolan 12-27-2006 04:05 AM

Gah. I'll go sleep. I need it.

I need to write about my feelings. And make a thread about it.

i am the robots 12-27-2006 11:17 AM

Dude, you'd be like, a writer of sorts!

slack 12-27-2006 10:31 PM

Rejoice patrons of S&L! The names of thy offerings are fine atrocities!

pixiesfanyo 12-27-2006 10:33 PM

Surf is like fourty right?

TheBigMachine 12-27-2006 10:38 PM

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan;13895961]you're playing in 8ths ugh you don't understand music[/QUOTE]


yeah... :upset: pretty much
me, i stick to words and listening.

TheBigMachine 12-27-2006 10:43 PM

Ew grumpy the cat is a feg

TheBigMachine 12-27-2006 10:48 PM

I laughed at DMD jumping in.


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