No one cares bout my guitar or pants :upset:

[QUOTE=Untitled]No one cares bout my guitar or pants :upset:[/QUOTE]
I almost saw your p3n0r.

[QUOTE=allofmeoliveme][url=http://www.nioki.fr/site/Nioki/media/userphotos/original/4/578104.jpeg]Sully.[/url]

:naughty:[/QUOTE]


Hahahahaha

also

Butler how can you expect us to care about your pants while you're [i]still wearing them?[/i]

[QUOTE=allofmeoliveme]I almost saw your p3n0r.[/QUOTE]
You know am not in the pants?

the people of manchetser got a site on friday night, even though i had boxers on.

[QUOTE=PDWAB]Hahahahaha

also

Butler how can you expect us to care about your pants while you're [i]still wearing them?[/i][/QUOTE]
I dont have them on....

Im just giving people advice, and showing the consiqensies of not following it :upset:

I'm about to go play guitar. Peace out.

Double posting is frowned upon, Butler :angry:

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace]If you like crappy music, then he'll make fun of you. That's just how it goes, I spose. And you do like some crappy music. Liking good music doesn't cancel out crap too :p

(I like bands I wouldn't be caught dead mentioning in there anyway)
[/QUOTE]
Ha, I know. He actually took a shot at me for having stars. It had nothing to do with my music taste. He was just like "How the hell did that guy get stars?"

Now whenever he see's me posting he'll say something like "And ESP is still a gay" because I neg repped him. But whatever...

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]Okay I just finished this webpage for my English class tell me what you think. It is kind of a lot of reading, not really, but if at least one person could read it and tell me what they think it would be greatly appreciated.

[url]http://onethousanddollars.teach-nology.com/[/url]

I don't know why the picture doesn't show up.[/QUOTE]

Me critiques:

Get a less grainy photo if possible. If it's grainy because you enlarged it, then just use it at normal size. It will look better.
[QUOTE]
Bobby Gillian-(main character)-He is first portrayed to the reader as a character who is very a very selfless person and selfish when it comes to money.[/QUOTE]

You don't need to mention "First" portrayed unless he is later portrayed as something else.

And take out "To The Reader". I don't think the author is trying to portray a character to someone not reading the book.

"Very selfish person, especially when it comes to money" is a much better phrasing of that sentence, by the way.
[QUOTE]
Mr. Gillian-(Bobby's Uncle)[/QUOTE]

That's the only role he plays in the story :amaze:

[QUOTE]Marian Hayden-(Ward of Bobby's Uncle)-Received 10 dollars and a ring from Bobby's uncle's will.[/QUOTE]

What kind of ring? What's a ward?

[QUOTE]Old Bryson-Gillian confides in him on how to spend [B]his [/B]money.[/QUOTE]

Who is that 'his' reffering to? Bryson or Gillian? How does whoever plan on spending their money?

[QUOTE]Miss Lauriere-She is an actress who is mentioned briefly and asked by Gillian if she would like a gift.[/QUOTE]

What gift?

[QUOTE]Lawyer Tolman-Gillian's uncle's lawyer.

Lawyer Sharp-Lawyer Tolman's partner.
[/QUOTE]

Don't have first names? Why the hell does anyone need a lawyer in this story :amaze:

[QUOTE]Cab Driver-A driver of a cab[/QUOTE]

:p

-

I don't know how in-depth you're supposed to be at all, for all I know you have done exactly what you're sposed to. Teachers like specific as hell, from my experience. Even if you end up repeating things from the "about page". You should change the name of that, by the way. I thought it was just gunna be a "Written by blah blah blah" page. It ended being the most important part of the site :p

Also, leave out all "I's" and "me's" and anything that involved you. Teachers like formal shit.

[QUOTE=PDWAB]Double posting is frowned upon, Butler :angry:[/QUOTE]
Joel is frowned upon, Joel :evil: :p

[QUOTE=EmoScreamoPunk]Ha, I know. He actually took a shot at me for having stars. It had nothing to do with my music taste. He was just like "How the hell did that guy get stars?"

Now whenever he see's me posting he'll say something like "And ESP is still a gay" because I neg repped him. But whatever...[/QUOTE]

He's probably just judging you from your posts in hardcore/metalcore. Which may not be to his liking. Who knows?

Hahaha, don't neg rep, silly. There's no point. No wonder he's pissed at you :p

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace]He's probably just judging you from your posts in hardcore/metalcore. Which may not be to his liking. Who knows?

Hahaha, don't neg rep, silly. There's no point. No wonder he's pissed at you [/QUOTE]
I have no idea, but I don't really care. There are still a number of guys I like in there. I don't even bother responding anymore when he says something.

I think that's the only time I ever neg repped anyone, because I was in a bad mood, and I needed to test it out anyway.

You helped a lot, ya he is portrayed later as a differnent type of character, also the cab driver part on the next page I explain more about what his part in the story is, he really just drives the guy around the town and thats it, Mr. Gillian is dead so yes that is his only part and that is why their are lawyers, because the whole book is about his will. Everything else thanks a bunch I will change it. Also the lawyer's don't have first names.

You know what I hate.

peopleonmsnmsngerwhotypleliekdis.

Woah?! I'm on the circlejerk list :). Not for long though.

I like this yogurt that my mom gets and it is vanilla and you put oreo chunks in it.....ya random.

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]I like this yogurt that my mom gets and it is vanilla and you put oreo chunks in it.....ya random.[/QUOTE]

What exactly is oreo?

I don't know what to use as evidence for my account change. :(

Also, I don't want to sound conceded or anything, but I honestly can't think of reasons against.

It is a chocolate cookie with cream in the middle and its not like whipped cream it is like a special cream and it is very good. But in the oreo it is just the chocolate cookie.

[QUOTE=EmoScreamoPunk]I don't know what to use as evidence for my account change. :(

Also, I don't want to sound conceded or anything, but I honestly can't think of reasons against.[/QUOTE]


Say people in other forums give you crap for your name.

[QUOTE=EmoScreamoPunk]I don't know what to use as evidence for my account change. :(

Also, I don't want to sound conceded or anything, but I honestly can't think of reasons against.[/QUOTE]

Just say your a regular poster in Pop-Punk, and for reasons against, say you can't think of too many, but you post in community threads.

Thats what I did, and I got a name change.

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]It is a chocolate cookie with cream in the middle and its not like whipped cream it is like a special cream and it is very good. But in the oreo it is just the chocolate cookie.[/QUOTE]

Like a boubon cream?

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]Say people in other forums give you crap for your name.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, that's what I did. I'm just looking for specific posts to use as evidence for.

Thanks J.

[QUOTE=J-Cool]Like a boubon cream?[/QUOTE]

What exactly is boubon cream? haha

[QUOTE=EmoScreamoPunk]Yeah, that's what I did. I'm just looking for specific posts to use as evidence for.

Thanks J.[/QUOTE]

No problemo.

I kinda owe you for the albums, speaking of which...

/Goes on SLSK

It's pretty bad when I can't think of a ninth and tenth person to add my my top 100 list :-\

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]What exactly is boubon cream? haha[/QUOTE]

Its sort of what you described.

[url]http://www.sawa.co.uk/shop/images/biscuit_bourbon_cream02.JPG[/url]

If those are chocolate cookies on the outside and there is cream in the middle that is exactly what I mean.

[url]http://webdrive.service.emory.edu/users/jsgolub/www/misc/oreo-s.jpg[/url]
That is an oreo.
Those are double stuffed though I don't like the double stuffed.

Oreos = ew.

[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555]If those are chocolate cookies on the outside and there is cream in the middle that is exactly what I mean.

[url]http://webdrive.service.emory.edu/users/jsgolub/www/misc/oreo-s.jpg[/url]
That is an oreo.
Those are double stuffed though I don't like the double stuffed.[/QUOTE]

Thats what you get in Haagen-Dazs Cookies and Cream flavour.

I love that stuff

Oreos = The best thing ever.