Does anyone know the 23 flavors in Dr. Pepper?

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Sorry, I dont.
Dr Pepper isn't always readily available where Im from anyways.

Whiskey skylines rain into the spirit seas.
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?
The taste of stale blood and alcohol hangs on my unsuspecting lips -
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?

First stanza that i think I can use since I wrote 'reflections'.

Been drinking, huh?

Good inspiration source.

Always.

'sup hombres?

I've been enjoying a nice winter break, and as such have been away for a week or two.

Did we get a new mod yet? Or is there more chance of a haiku thread in The Pit?

Nahhh the haiku thread is going well.
No new mod.

Alls well.

Yeah things are pretty smooth. No new moderator, despite Jeremy being around sometimes and what not. He must be busy.

And uh inspiration comes and goes so whatever. =')

schweet.

Oh, and congrats on winning the ashes. It would probably have been closer if we'd have actually picked our best team from the start, but your lads were awesome. Well done.

Giles wouldn't get a game in Sydney B Grade. That was a mistake.


Whiskey skylines rain into the spirit seas.
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?
The taste of stale blood and alcohol hangs on my unsuspecting lips -
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?

What do you think, Jason?

Ah Jason, I hate you.. I have finals this week AND THEN I'm on break.

I've been out of school for about two weeks.

*sips coke*

Me too

*also sips coke*

student life for the win

Why do you guys critique?

A) boredom.

B) helps identify (and hopefully rectify) problems that you can fall victim to yourself. For example, if you can see when a rhyme is forced or a line is cliche in someone else's work, then you're more likely to be able to spot it in your own writing, and hopefully fix it.

I don't really critique.

[quote=surf]B) helps identify (and hopefully rectify) problems that you can fall victim to yourself. For example, if you can see when a rhyme is forced or a line is cliche in someone else's work, then you're more likely to be able to spot it in your own writing, and hopefully fix it.[/quote]This is what I would tell myself. I think it only works for a little while.

oh **** you guys! This week sucks!
It's only tuesday! AH!

a) Boredom

b) Point out very bad literature

But mostly to help, despite what I know about literature isn't that much of a huge amount of knowledge, but what I can I share it.

I think that my "This sucks" method works really well.

[QUOTE=Sloth;13851052]oh **** you guys! This week sucks!
It's only tuesday! AH![/QUOTE]This week has been strange, in a good, inspiring kind of way.

[QUOTE=slack;13851002]This is what I would tell myself. I think it only works for a little while.[/QUOTE]

Depends what you're critting; if its just rubbish stuff then you won't learn much, but the better the work you look over the better you can get. You can pick up ideas and see things you hadn't thought of. And mistakes you'd rather not make.

[QUOTE=Sloth;13851052]oh **** you guys! This week sucks!
It's only tuesday! AH![/QUOTE]

Week was awesome. I have literally accomplished nothing.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan;13851061]b) Point out very bad literature

But mostly to help, despite what I know about literature isn't that much of a huge amount of knowledge, but what I can I share it.[/QUOTE]

The helping thing was something I forgot, that can be nice as well.

[QUOTE=Eliminator;13851064]I think that my "This sucks" method works really well.[/QUOTE]

Its succinct and to the point. metaphorically it is the stiletto of crits, whereas the long ones are like sledge hammers.

I've never just said this sucks and left.

elims next response:

your mom sucks then leaves

One last final tomorrow and the break is mine...wooooooooooooo

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine;13851367]I've never just said this sucks and left.

elims next response:

your mom sucks then leaves[/QUOTE]

What's up?

Chillin
you

About to take a piss and then go to sleep.

Sweet
You been writing lately

brap

2 exams and 3 left...
UGH!

I had one this morning at 8, but it's all good because my prof. emailed me and told me I nearly aced the exam.. AWESOME! I just wish I could that on the rest...

I'm beginning to think that when I critique I'm overly subjective with the style which I always want to reminisce my own

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