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Eliminator 05-11-2007 10:41 AM

serf get to work

Surf 05-11-2007 11:42 AM

yes sir massa

ima doing it massa, i swears

[size=1]don't hit me again massa[/size]

Surf 05-11-2007 11:44 AM

I have no need for your silly chords, nor your silly garments.

Evacuate yourself immediately or I shall be forced to contact the authorities

TojesDolan 05-11-2007 02:37 PM

Advertising.

i am the robots 05-11-2007 03:59 PM

I'll advertise my boner, boy.

Surf 05-14-2007 09:33 AM

Tojes with mad deleting powers

sup s&l

TojesDolan 05-14-2007 01:42 PM

Actually I didn't erase that, it was the Black Fist.

>_>

SixStringKing 05-15-2007 01:03 PM

okay ive got a oral interpretation coming soon and i need a topic... i dont wanna do anything terribly cliche.. im think of something like existentialism but i dunno.. if anyone has any ideas let me know

TojesDolan 05-15-2007 04:56 PM

I usually talk about stuff like socks or cheese, but that's because I'm weird.

Minus The Flair 05-16-2007 05:40 AM

Finally, I have a new piece. So, comments on that would be sweet.

Recommend me some new literature people.

TheBigMachine 05-16-2007 06:10 AM

MTF - Crit for crit bro.

Surf 05-16-2007 06:22 AM

[QUOTE]Recommend me some new literature people.[/QUOTE]

William Burroughs - Naked Lunch

Schyma, if you're reading this, you might like it as well, very similar to Kerouac's style

And I'll try and get both of those pieces later. I've got presentations and exams and shi that scream for attention atm

Minus The Flair 05-16-2007 07:17 AM

Alright Mitch, thanks for the crit buddy, yours is done.

And thanks Surf, I'll check that out.

Surf 05-16-2007 10:00 AM

wait

wait

[QUOTE]oral[/QUOTE]

lol

...:(

God I'm bored.

Sloth 05-16-2007 11:02 AM

Hey, I see a lot of familiar people... Tojes is FINALLY a mod.. atta boy! :thumb:

Here's ome irony for ya'll... someone stole MY writing.
I found stuff I actually wrote (not the stuff I stole and said I wrote, but MY REAL stuff) on another website... It pissed me off..

So what goes around comes around, right? ugh!

Surf 05-16-2007 11:22 AM

IRONY LOL

how's sh[size=2]i[/size]t man?

TojesDolan 05-16-2007 12:16 PM

You should go tell the authorities there, just in case.

Anyway, sup dude it's been a while indeed.

class 05-16-2007 01:36 PM

sloth more like goth

Sloth 05-16-2007 01:45 PM

It's finals week at the Uni... I'm getting my *** kicked.
I write when I when have time and actually feel like writing... which is about once a week.

Anyways... just thought a few of you would find a little humor in that

bowl of oranges 05-16-2007 06:22 PM

[QUOTE=Sloth;14702437]Hey, I see a lot of familiar people...[/QUOTE]
I remember you.

TojesDolan 05-16-2007 10:25 PM

ty ty

Anyway, I had finals last week. It was fun.

class 05-16-2007 10:44 PM

i have finals atm...math is gonna pwn me on friday...i have western heritages tomorrow and that's just an in-class essay, so it won't be hard...

i am the robots 05-16-2007 11:24 PM

[QUOTE=Sloth;14702437]Hey, I see a lot of familiar people... Tojes is FINALLY a mod.. atta boy! :thumb:

Here's ome irony for ya'll... someone stole MY writing.
I found stuff I actually wrote (not the stuff I stole and said I wrote, but MY REAL stuff) on another website... It pissed me off..

So what goes around comes around, right? ugh![/QUOTE]

Hahaha, Karma!

TheBigMachine 05-17-2007 01:22 AM

[QUOTE=Sloth;14702437]Hey, I see a lot of familiar people... Tojes is FINALLY a mod.. atta boy! :thumb:

Here's ome irony for ya'll... someone stole MY writing.
I found stuff I actually wrote (not the stuff I stole and said I wrote, but MY REAL stuff) on another website... It pissed me off..

So what goes around comes around, right? ugh![/QUOTE]

i like your user title bro

Surf 05-21-2007 09:30 AM

So I got some stuff published, found out that I got on both creative writing modules next year and I've been unable to write anything for the last week or so.

And new Elliott Smith album is pretty bitchin'.

bowl of oranges 05-21-2007 09:42 AM

I was going to do a creative writing course start this September. I decided against it however as really i'm not that great a writer and quite a few of the courses required an English A-level, something which i don't possess.

Congrats on getting published man, which pieces were they, i wouldn't mind a read.

Never got into Elliott Smith too much, might have to give him a try.

Surf 05-21-2007 09:51 AM

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=502656
[/url]
and

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14241823&postcount=2[/url]

Elliot Smith, Ghostface Killah and Godspeed You! Black Emperor are all I've been listening to lately.

class 05-21-2007 09:52 AM

EitS

bowl of oranges 05-21-2007 10:07 AM

[QUOTE=Surf;14724347][url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=502656
[/url]
and

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14241823&postcount=2[/url]

Elliot Smith, Ghostface Killah and Godspeed You! Black Emperor are all I've been listening to lately.[/QUOTE]

I dig both those, maybe the second more than the first.

I've been listening to alot of rap and pop-punk recently. Sweet.

class 05-21-2007 10:09 AM

I'm going to a Minus the Bear show tonight...Chin up Chin up and The Honorary Title are opening...whiskey is to be drank during this time.

Surf 05-21-2007 11:30 AM

I missed minus the bear when they came to town. Going to see CocoRosie in a few weeks though, which should be chill.

i am the robots 05-22-2007 02:19 PM

Hey guys, critique my new band (this one doesn't share any members with my old projects [except me]).

[url]http://www.sendspace.com/file/zaifjp[/url]

/vocals

TojesDolan 05-22-2007 02:44 PM

Sorry, the free service is at full capacity.

:/

Eliminator 05-22-2007 02:48 PM

its ok.

TojesDolan 05-22-2007 02:57 PM

epilepsy.

RunAmokRampant 05-22-2007 11:49 PM

[QUOTE=Sloth;14702437]Hey, I see a lot of familiar people... Tojes is FINALLY a mod.. atta boy! :thumb:

Here's ome irony for ya'll... someone stole MY writing.
I found stuff I actually wrote (not the stuff I stole and said I wrote, but MY REAL stuff) on another website... It pissed me off..

So what goes around comes around, right? ugh![/QUOTE]

How do find out if someone's been heisting your work? Do you just google an excerpt from your piece as see what happens or is there something more specific for detecting plagiarism?

TojesDolan 05-23-2007 12:39 AM

Exactly my thoughts, I think I should run one of those internet hunts, just for the kicks.

Ganondorf 05-23-2007 02:36 AM

Hey I've got a question...rhyming is frowned upon so much here, but don't basicalyl all the ''great'' lyricists such as Bob Dylan use a lot of rhyme?

TojesDolan 05-23-2007 02:39 AM

Depends what you mean by "great".

I personally hate it because a) it makes your songs extremely predictable lyrically-wise, and b) usually, rhyming is only used in a very basic level, as if written for a junior high presentation.

Nonetheless, I can appreciate a good rhyming pattern if it's well made, but I try to stay away from it because it usually makes my writing weird and common place.

I'll make a write-up on rhyming, anyway. But that will be tomorrow.

Ganondorf 05-23-2007 03:41 AM

Cool :thumb:


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