[QUOTE=AH]Sorry, I just wanted to say that as a joke. That's my last one for now.[/QUOTE]

Let's make love.

Heyyy, InColdBlood got the name change too!

[QUOTE=ICB]Let's make love.[/QUOTE]

Please read my user title.

Ah, gotta go home. Seacrest out.

[QUOTE=Cain]Heyyy, InColdBlood got the name change too![/QUOTE]

So did DN.

NP Anyone - Dear Sylvia

[quote=GurS]poem[/quote]

Wow, that was really powerful stuff. What needs fixing, exactly?

[QUOTE=Cain]Heyyy, InColdBlood got the name change too![/QUOTE]


:cool:

[QUOTE=AntiHero3314]Wow, that was really powerful stuff. What needs fixing, exactly?[/QUOTE]

cheers. I feel that the second stanza definatly, and possibly the third, is too blunt.

Does anyone know how to turn the sound off on Madness, without just turning all sound on the computer off?

[QUOTE=Bartender]Does anyone know how to turn the sound off on Madness, without just turning all sound on the computer off?[/QUOTE]

Sorry. Put headphones in the jack and put the headphones around your neck as opposed to your ears?

[quote=GurS]2nd and 3rd are too blunt[/quote]

Let me read it over, but I think the first half was the part that drew me in most.

Of course, I'm more blunt and straight-forward in my writing. I don't try to beat around the bush as much. I mean, yeah, I'll have symbolism and personification, but I think I prefer bluntness over ambiguity.

[QUOTE=AntiHero3314]Sorry.[/QUOTE]

Why? :-/

[QUOTE=Antihero]Put headphones in the jack and put the headphones around your neck as opposed to your ears?[/QUOTE]

Nah, I'm trying to find a way to listen to music through the computer, without hearing Madness sound effects :) Thanks for the suggestions though.


NP Cult of Luna - Further

[QUOTE=AntiHero3314]I hate having writer's block. I haven't been happy with something I've written in weeks :([/QUOTE]

same, i havent written in like 2 weeks now

I think me trying to write as other people instead of me writing as myself is the biggest monkey wrench in my mental cogs being jammed up.

I'll explain what I mean in a minute.

Okay, when I write, I try to write through the eyes of different people. Usually, it gives me a creative edge, but obviously, I'm going to hit a roadblock or two since I don't know the experiences these people have had. That's when I get stuck, and if I write a bunch of BS, the work is going to read awful.

seeing as there's three writers here, shall we do a chain-poem? four lines each?

You can start AH

[QUOTE=Antihero]
Okay, when I write, I try to write through the eyes of different people. Usually, it gives me a creative edge, but obviously, I'm going to hit a roadblock or two since I don't know the experiences these people have had. That's when I get stuck, and if I write a bunch of BS, the work is going to read awful.[/QUOTE]

Do you mean specific (named) people, or just a different type of person (like a farmer, a banker, a secret agent, etc)?

Uh oh... pressure's on for me not to suck :)

I'll edit in my lines when I write them.

EDIT @ Bartender: it depends... both, really. I try not to be so specific as to name a specific person in history, but sometimes I have done so. I would say that I pick a general person, though, moreso than not.

EDIT:

Why bother with faith if you refuse to believe?
After I've been in the lowest of valleys
Or been fed to the dogs to feast on my pride
I’ll be born again, untouched and alive

EDIT: Yesssssssss! What a lousy way to start a poem!

Why bother with faith if you refuse to believe?
After I've been in the lowest of valleys
Or been fed to the dogs to feast on my pride
I’ll be born again, untouched and alive

I've seen all there is to know
I've understand all that is before me.
You can believe in what you believe; you fail to see
That this knowledge, dark and sacred, is mine alone.

[sorry to interrupt the poem, but can anyone add lines, or how is this working?]

...?

I think the idea was that Eleventeen would add the next four lines.

[QUOTE=Bartender]I think the idea was that Eleventeen would add the next four lines.[/QUOTE]

But he's gone :eek:

This masterpiece* is unfinished !

*random rough draft that probably won't be published anywhere

Pretend it's like Kubla Khan, then.

hah

i think anyone can add the next four lines, but they gotta copy and paste what's been done so far so that it's like one long poem.

'Tender, give it a go.

[QUOTE=Bartender]Pretend it's like Kubla Khan, then.[/QUOTE]

Hahaha.

A vision in a dream, or a fragment? :p

Heh, whichever :)

[QUOTE=GurS]
'Tender, give it a go.[/QUOTE]

Nah, I'm no good at poetry or lyrics. I'm alright at stories, creative writing, but not verse.

The poem is "eh"

/prefers to write about own experiences/people's own experiences, rather than through the eyes of someone else

I still have trouble writing...I have started a few songs, but none of them have gone anywhere.

One of 'em was ehh, the other was Illmatic. That's a one hot album every ten year, average.

[QUOTE=Bartender]One of 'em was ehh, the other was Illmatic. That's a one hot record every ten year, average.[/QUOTE]

And that's so LAAAAAME

I don't know the next line :-/

Now that you have your name changed though, I have no chance of ever not thinking of that song when I see you.

[QUOTE=Bartender]I don't know the next line :-/

Now that you have your name changed though, I have no chance of ever not thinking of that song when I see you.[/QUOTE]

Interesting...

(and it's, "Nigga, switch up your flow/your sh[size=2]it is garbage, but you try and kick knowledge?"[/size])