[QUOTE=DepthsOfDreams555;14405781]
It's a guy haha, and I KNOW exactly its like so structured and stuff we have an exact topic to write out the paragraphs already have topics to them and we have to find quotes and explain ourself. The problem is I got the worst topic and the quotes outta the book are really scarce.[/QUOTE]

Well damn who would've thought a guy could be that dumb?

A good persuasive writer can make anything say what he wants it to ;)

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution;14405820]Well damn who would've thought a guy could be that dumb?

A good persuasive writer can make anything say what he wants it to ;)[/QUOTE]

Haha ya ya ya.

I have to turn in a research paper tomorrow. I did mine on the collapse of Enron and I have to say I did a pretty damn good job on it.

I know more than my English teacher does.

Today she said that "dewdrops" and "snowflake" rhyme.

i can't make **** like that up either

[QUOTE=Eliminator;14405938]I know more than my English teacher does.

Today she said that "dewdrops" and "snowflake" rhyme.

i can't make **** like that up either[/QUOTE]

Are you serious???

That's terrible, I hate s[SIZE="2"]h[/SIZE]it like that. That lady definitely should not be teaching.

yeah

i was really close to just saying

"you are an idiot"

haha you really should have. I wouldn't be able to take that. My math teacher is kind of retarded but she definitely knows what she's teaching. So we just make fun of the way she acts. She's so clueless about everything.

Hey guys, who wants to Crit. my Poem/Lyrics.

:D

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14406049#post14406049[/url]

Pleaaase lol.

Stewart: Crit mine and I'll get you ;)

lol i haven't written a song since summer

Give me a link Paulo and I'll crit your s[size=2]h[/size]it.

That rhymes. Not like dewdrop and snowflake, but it works.

Ok, I'm crittin' now there Paulo.

I've been writing again lately. I was on hiatus for like a year =\

This is me: [url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=518259[/url]

brb time to make dinner yumm

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i think that's the last one i wrote

Dang Nick that's pretty damn good man. Why did you stop writing?

V: Done :thumb:

Nick: That is pretty good man, write more.

haven't felt the need to write at all

I haven't felt so much the NEED to write for my own sake much either.

I more so just know I have to write something, whether it turns out crap or alright or whatever.

"I will fashion a lady out of minerals"

I like that line, Elim. That's a good song all around.

And Vince, your song was a little more straight-forward then I remember them being. That's a good thing, though, at least in my opinion.

I haven't written a song in a long time. But I'm not very good with lyrics, so it's not really a loss.

i always come up with my things in my head

but i never feel like writing them down

like

whats the point. i'll never sing these lyrics myself and thats the only way i'd want them to be

When you guys write, do you come up with the lyrics first and melody later, melody first and lyrics later, or do you even have a melody?

I cant help but have a melody in my head while I'm writing, and I think that really ends up hurting my writing. It's tough to fit what you want to say into a pre-conceived format.

Nick, you're the last person I'd expect to write poetry.

Then again I generalize people like a mother****er.

Cheers, mate. Wish I could write poetry worth the ink it was written in.

Which is a lie, I just want to be able to write a full song, complete with vocals and ****.

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace;14406266]Nick, you're the last person I'd expect to write poetry.

Then again I generalize people like a mother****er.

Cheers, mate. Wish I could write poetry worth the ink it was written in.[/QUOTE]

Nick is quite surprising at times.

He acts stupid and all that all the time, and then he writes poetry and you're like..[I]Ohh..[/I]

Takes you by surprise.

[QUOTE=Lightning Strikes Twice;14406273]Nick is quite surprising at times.

He acts stupid and all that all the time, and then he writes poetry and you're like..[I]Ohh..[/I]

Takes you by surprise.[/QUOTE]

Like Jared and philosophical essays?

Maybe not.

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i never write lyrics to melody. i've never put any of my songs to music. probably never will.

And I never write music to lyrics.

But I might, since my bassist is suddenly good at everything and can write lyrics and do 3d animation. Like, overnight.

[QUOTE=MattSharpIsCool;14406240]"I will fashion a lady out of minerals"

I like that line, Elim. That's a good song all around.

And Vince, your song was a little more straight-forward then I remember them being. That's a good thing, though, at least in my opinion.

I haven't written a song in a long time. But I'm not very good with lyrics, so it's not really a loss.[/QUOTE]

It was more straightforwardly written than my older material, but if you think you got it you probably didn't actually get it tbh. I'm still a pretentious *** at heart ;)

I'm returning yours stewie. Nick did you want nything back? I liked some of your changes I think. I might keep some O:-)

That was probably the best thing I've read by you, though Vince.

Even if I'd rather read it in pros.

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution;14406322]It was more straightforwardly written than my older material, but if you think you got it you probably didn't actually get it tbh. I'm still a pretentious *** at heart ;)

I'm returning yours stewie. Nick did you want nything back? I liked some of your changes I think. I might keep some O:-)[/QUOTE]

The true meaning is probably lost on me. But I was talking more about the simple four line verses and easy rhyme schemes. From what I remember, your writing is normally a little more "out there" than that.

I'm decent at writing music, but my lyrics just aren't great, at least when I try to pour my heart out. I wrote a song about war once (yes, cliche) and it turned out alright. I'm just bad at being emo, I guess.

[QUOTE=MattSharpIsCool;14406354]The true meaning is probably lost on me. But I was talking more about the simple four line verses and easy rhyme schemes. From what I remember, your writing is normally a little more "out there" than that.

I'm decent at writing music, but my lyrics just aren't great, at least when I try to pour my heart out. I wrote a song about war once (yes, cliche) and it turned out alright. I'm just bad at being emo, I guess.[/QUOTE]

Oh yes yes. The structure is far simpler than usual. I'll probably work back into my abcdb ebfgb etc rhyme schemes later on but I found the idea of a complex idea presented in simplicity quite fun.

I'm an emo cliche incarnate.

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i never write lyrics to melody. i've never put any of my songs to music. probably never will.[/QUOTE]

same

I have a few sets of lyrics that im going to show my band (AKA my drummer lol). I have a general idea of what I want the music to be like. Im writing the music to one as we speak.

Songs eh? Sweet.
Man i been a regular in SL for a long time. i got like two front page songs up "Its Hard To Break The Spitit Of A Ghost" as well as "Soundscapes And Lullabies" you dudes should check em out.

Stew brings teh lolz.

I just can't write lyrics :( I'm a good writer and I like writing but just not songs. I also can't compose songs, I can come up with riffs but I'm hopeless when I try and put it all together.

i like to freestyle

I write cheesy lyrics and make poppy songs out of them. <-<

[QUOTE=Neoteric;14408549]I just can't write lyrics :( I'm a good writer and I like writing but just not songs. I also can't compose songs, I can come up with riffs but I'm hopeless when I try and put it all together.[/QUOTE]

I have this problem too sometimes.

I have trouble putting together stuff for guitar..Anything else I can patch together fairly nicely.

i write everything

even in multiple instruments

speaking of which i'm getting new harmonicas pretty soon and i'm getting the hands-free headgear so i can play me some tom petty on harmonica while playing my guitar

I'd say i'm ok at writing lyrics, but i cannot compose a song (on guitar) to save my life.

Which kinda sucks 'cause i chose GCSE Music. :\

I write in multiple instruments too man.

I really couldn't ever limit myself to one instrument, because you can't always say what you want with a guitar, or with a piano, or with a violin, or bagpipes (:p:D) and so I really like being able to switch about and even write them all in together.