my nickname i dublin...how i wish to visit my place of origin....here me comes IRE-LIND

[QUOTE=Eliminator;13636944]i just wrote some of a song, but i don't want to make an individual thread for it yet. this is what i have

[I]malachite, you gaze so heavily
through envy i harvest you
and weave the threads of our past

let us take it and shovel the remains
away from this burrow in the hills
let us craft it into something of worth

and from here we'll move forth for
every motion has become fallible
as we bury every step in the dirt[/I][/QUOTE]
Been listening Opeth quite too much, uh?

i was switching from folk stuff to maudlin of the well

thinking about it earlier i decided that it would be good for a metal song

go tojes!

It's good to see that you are taking some stuff seriously again.

= 0

what do you mean?

Elim be banned? Lame.

That song is [I]sort of[/I] Opethy, sort of old Underoathy... like, the topic of choice and the way it comes out is very much Dallas Taylor-esque, but the vocab usage and sentence structure is like Akerfeldt.

I quite like.

[quote="Kent"]I like how you're not really specific; I find the best lyrics to be very metaphorical and force the reader/listener to interpret the bulk of them for themselves. Spoon feeding your meaning to people is catering to the lowest common denominator.[/quote]UGH. As if specificity and metaphor were mutually exclusive.

[QUOTE=Eleventeen;13641964]Elim be banned? Lame.

That song is [I]sort of[/I] Opethy, sort of old Underoathy... like, the topic of choice and the way it comes out is very much Dallas Taylor-esque, but the vocab usage and sentence structure is like Akerfeldt.

I quite like.[/QUOTE]

yeah elim be banned

hopefully i'll get those lyrics into a song or maybe expand on them more

Yeah, they're pretty good.

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=499166[/url]

I thoroughly revamped Leinadia.

[QUOTE=slack;13638943]Random lyrics because I am super bored and this board is so dead, dead, dead lately[/QUOTE]

I love the harmonica line in that song, but, overall, the album lets down in too many places.

[QUOTE=Cygnus Inter Anates;13643408]yeah elim be banned

hopefully i'll get those lyrics into a song or maybe expand on them more[/QUOTE]
Ugh why'd you get banned, pit nonsense or something

according to ydload i trolled alt/indie

Alternative and Indie is a bit of a closed community that won't allow new users to come in because the indie factor would be lost.

Go figure.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet;13644062]I love the harmonica line in that song, but, overall, the album lets down in too many places.[/QUOTE]Yeah. I don't know why I posted that song, it's not even my favorite. :/

Hey...everyone?

I've been checking out other forums lately and I found this one...

The other places I've been are too chummy and exclusive to actually get into a community for writing...

What's this place like? You like them?

This place has been dead as hell lately

But please feel free to write stuff and critique other people so long as you read the rules

We need more active people :|

[QUOTE]This place has been dead as hell lately[/QUOTE]
Well, at least most of these writing forums are consistent with each other...I probably won't post anything for a little bit, but I'll get on critiquing stuff soon

This place is awesome when people actually talk and stuff :/

:7|

Look at you trying to sabotage my chances in the LC :upset:

I voted in there because I'm tired of there being like five to seven entires with three people voting or something

Maybe if I get involved other users will too -_-

yeah, I think forum moderators should try to be as involved as they can... but NEVER sacrifice real life for it... damn!
Mods have lives too! haha

Yes CERTAIN people seem to forget that

/looks at entire community thread

Because we all know Burton is the soul of the party.

EDIT: Hey in mi defence, I could do everything.

EDIT2: I think Burt is really migraines covering his own bottom.

Tojes, you just need to chill out

It's like if anything bad goes unclosed in the eternally dead S&L forum IT MUST BE ATTENDED TO

Also if I ever say anything it always applies to you in every instance

Chill pills

Haha... if THAT were the case TojesDolan, I say things like, "SubtleDagger is the pimp****! He mods my socks off!" ooooorrrr "guys, chill out...Subtle's got it figured out...TRUST him"

haha... whoa... He just said chill out as I was typing it!

*darty eyes*

>_>

<_<

quit spamming or i'll ban you

Actually I'm chill but I'm coughing like a dog.

And yes, I know that it just happens that I'm the one bitching about everything all the time.

And yes, maybe I should just show interest in the forum by making critiques, building a community and making threads about it.

Pretty much what I do so far, except referring to you on every post, since ou can't take a joke because I thought we were coolios enough to make jokes and laugh and all that jazz.