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mshort813 04-15-2005 05:42 PM

[QUOTE=zeppelinfan2k3][url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=327808[/url]
Whoring out for crits from people who won't give me tens :([/QUOTE]
donee. :thumb:.

thirdeyeblindislit 04-16-2005 12:44 AM

Hey all. I'm back. Finally. I missed you all so much! So what's happened since I've been away. I heard that Subtle isnt mod anymore, is that true? And what's with all the noobs? Who's cool and whos a new great addition. Fill me in. :thumb:

Spectrum 04-16-2005 12:48 AM

Subtle is demodded, and DFelon has taken his place. I've been on writing hiatus until only recently, after I had one piece that went multi-page that was followed by a page-slider (11 views, no crits). I only recently posted something, and reactions have been mixed-positive. zepplinfan and APS have proven to be worth a dam[color=white]n[/color] to look at when they post, especially their most recent offerings. We've had a lot of n00bs, which has been responsible for many vet "page-sliders", but there have been high-quality newcomers. I'm starting to get back into S&L again.

And I'm really going to bed now.

thirdeyeblindislit 04-16-2005 12:51 AM

Well thanks for filling me in on alot of that. Anything else. I really want to know what noobs to look at. I know corupt is not a noob, but just recentally while I was gone, it seems as though he's making himself known. Also before I forget I have my new song up.

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=329304[/url]

Thanks.

IOWNU200 04-16-2005 08:35 AM

AH yes, thirdeye, the return of some of my old friends :). You know sparky right?...he's not really around anymore. Corrupt is deffinately a cool guy though, by the way where have you been for so long?

metaliq 04-16-2005 11:30 AM

I would consider myself a decent noob. Mediocre at best.

Well accourding to how many people crit mine, or return crits.

Oh, RollerQueen quit S&L.

mshort813 04-16-2005 10:43 PM

[QUOTE=metaliq]I would consider myself a decent noob. Mediocre at best.

Well accourding to how many people crit mine, or return crits.

Oh, RollerQueen quit S&L.[/QUOTE]
:( I like him. and his band.

how's your band doing, metal?


Good to see that your back, thirdeye.

i am the robots 04-16-2005 10:55 PM

I have returned, what's up everybody?

A_Perfect_Sonnet 04-16-2005 10:57 PM

Erections, stars, the sky, ceilings, birds, and clouds.

morrissey 04-17-2005 12:30 AM

[QUOTE=mshort813]:( I like him. and his band.

[/QUOTE]
Do you have a link?

He was/is awesome. :(

mshort813 04-17-2005 12:58 AM

[QUOTE=morrissey]Do you have a link?

He was/is awesome. :([/QUOTE]
No, APS may be able to hook you up with a link, though.

Rushki Smushki 04-17-2005 03:24 AM

'arr...welcome back Thirdeye...always liked your stuff.

I just got back from Workies...(yeehaw!) and its my first post in here. I've been on here a while, just reading alot of work from you guys. Its pretty impressive, but then again, joke threads even things out as usual...but i think we've only had one or two since Thirdeye left, we're keeping a good track record these days. :D

Anywho, what've you all been up too?

I've been on holidays :D (gotta love that smilie...)

theredwonder 04-17-2005 06:50 AM

[QUOTE=metaliq]Oh, RollerQueen quit S&L.[/QUOTE]

He quit Mx as a whole.

metaliq 04-17-2005 10:48 AM

[QUOTE=mshort813]:( I like him. and his band.

how's your band doing, metal?


Good to see that your back, thirdeye.[/QUOTE]

Dan (RollerQueen) is my homie, so I talk to him all the time anyway... hehe.

I am kinda in a stalemate on a band right now. Been trying to organize something lately, and I jammed with a few friends last weekend. My friend matt (who plays guitar) laid down this generic drum beat and Joe did some work on bass, and then I just started singing Bobby Brown by Frank Zappa and it sounded pretty sweet. Haha, but that was just messing around.

They may have found another guitarist and a drummer so I may have a spot to fill...


Tonight: The Chariot, Fear Before The March Of Flames, some other band, and Underoath (i like the older stuff A LOT better).

thirdeyeblindislit 04-17-2005 11:23 AM

[QUOTE=IOWNU200]AH yes, thirdeye, the return of some of my old friends :). You know sparky right?...he's not really around anymore. Corrupt is deffinately a cool guy though, by the way where have you been for so long?[/QUOTE]

Thanks IOWNU, dont know what I'd do without you dude. :thumb: Yeah Sparky has been busy just like me, with our work and things like that, but now that summer is coming up we can have oh so much more time. It feels great to be back. :thumb: I'm hoping to get all the "veterans" from last summer on here. Like, theredwonder, you, sparky, Zep, APS and there are problibly others I have forgot, but you problably get the picture. :lol:

thirdeyeblindislit 04-17-2005 11:28 AM

So why did rollarqueen quit. Also Metaliq you arnt a noob. :lol: Also nice avatar APS. Thanks rushki, it really means alot to me that you like my work. Maybe this summer you will be apart of my "summer squad" its the norm of people on here during the summer. Also thank you Mshort, I missed you to. You and morrissey as well are considered part of my "summer squad." So is there any other news I should know about?

P.S- Yes rushki, we need to keep an eye on those joke threads. :lol: :thumb:

metaliq 04-17-2005 11:34 AM

[QUOTE=thirdeyeblindislit]I'm hoping to get all the "veterans" from last summer on here. Like, theredwonder, you, sparky, Zep, APS and there are problibly others I have forgot, but you problably get the picture. :lol:[/QUOTE]

/dies self

[QUOTE=thirdeyeblindislit]So why did rollarqueen quit. Also Metaliq you arnt a noob. :lol: [/QUOTE]

Oh, whew. :whipes forehead:


I will make this one time offer ;) . I will return crits to anyone who crits my song I wroted. :)

thirdeyeblindislit 04-17-2005 12:34 PM

Metaliq you know that you are part of my "summer squad veterans" :thumb:

thirdeyeblindislit 04-17-2005 01:04 PM

Also I have just given my first THIRDEYE'S VERDICT AWARD in a while to this noob named Dan... something sorry I forgot his name. But you guys should check out his song.
[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=329912[/url]

Also I forgot to mention eleventeen as one of the "summer squad", sorry buddy. :thumb:

Corupt2057 04-17-2005 06:53 PM

eww.. the "summer squad"
lmao anyways 3rd eye welcome back and theredwonder you need to post something when you can if I remeber right I liked reading your stuff anyways
some of the new guys I like there are like two of them that actually crit in full depth like we do lol anyways yeah I think it's refreshing to have all them in here but I wish the song posting off all them would slow down and a little more critting and reading going on
blah anyways 3rdeye if you wants an in-depth crit on your stuff from me I'll hook you up but you gotta pay back lol I'm a tight wad like that for this mood that im in

Corupt2057 04-17-2005 08:24 PM

ok just posted a song
this is my masterpiece describing my feelings in life with perfection..
you're going to feel it
anyways check it out
[url=http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=330230]I am not who I am[/url]

thirdeyeblindislit 04-19-2005 07:31 PM

:lol: Corupt, I like your style. I'll check out your song. Maybe you can be on this years "summer squad". :lol: :thumb:

Corupt2057 04-19-2005 11:07 PM

lol oh my
Do I get one of those cool patches to put on my sleeves?

Corupt2057 04-20-2005 08:00 AM

ah doesn't matter I may not be aloud around here long enough to make the induction ceremony lol.. theres alot of arguing going on in the challenge 86 replies thread and it just happens to be agianst an old forum member that is an immature child, DFelon, and me

IOWNU200 04-20-2005 05:09 PM

okay, so we have our first battle of the bands tomorrow, and we're play against kids 3 years older than us (we're all 14 playing with 17 year olds), but we feel we really have shot because we wrote two new prety good songs and we practiced the hell out of it, does anyone have any good advice for swaying judges at a battle of the bands?

thirdeyeblindislit 04-20-2005 07:21 PM

IOWNU- Good luck. :thumb: you'll kick a$$ no matter what. Some suggestions are, just put alot of energy, or as much as you can, into your performance. That's what my band did, and ask sparky, we took battle of the bands home. We did everything we could possibly think of to make people go "wow!". But with your lyrics, it doesnt matter how old the other band is, it's all up to how YOU are on stage. You can do it, and tell us how it goes. :thumb:

Corupt- If you want a patch, sure :lol:. Now what's the situation with Dfelon? You should explain it, and maybe I can help you. I heard he's a cool guy. :thumb:

IOWNU200 04-20-2005 07:31 PM

thanks thirdeye, btw, do you think you could hook me up with some of your band's stuff, i don't believe i've ever heard any

thirdeyeblindislit 04-20-2005 07:36 PM

Yeah, no problem. Do you want me to email it to you? I think I can do that. :thumb:

thirdeyeblindislit 04-20-2005 07:50 PM

I have once again brought back, the UPDATED WRITER'S GUIDE TO A GOOD SONG. Read it when you get the chance. :thumb:

Corupt2057 04-20-2005 09:45 PM

[QUOTE=thirdeyeblindislit]
Corupt- If you want a patch, sure :lol:. Now what's the situation with Dfelon? You should explain it, and maybe I can help you. I heard he's a cool guy. :thumb:[/QUOTE]
nah screw the patch it's childish
let's just get drunk and go get tattoos
:chug:

as for the situation
a truce was proposed

Corupt2057 04-20-2005 09:46 PM

by the way Slaveboy after that battle you need to get to work I already have two soings you haven't critiqued

Heavenly Crush
and
I am not who I am

IOWNU200 04-21-2005 05:12 AM

sure, e-mail is [email]IOWNU400@yahoo.com[/email]

thirdeyeblindislit 04-21-2005 08:25 PM

Ok IOWNU, will do. I'll get them to you as soon as I can. :thumb:

IOWNU200 04-21-2005 09:08 PM

we lost :upset: . We played a great show though. Where some of the other bands killed us in overall talent we made up ground in crowd support and crowd activity. In the end though, we just dind't have quite the talent.

mshort813 04-21-2005 09:41 PM

So tomorrow, my jazz band is competing in Bridewater. Actually, it's not even my band, I'm just doing a feature with the other guitarist on "Oye Como Vay." I get to miss all of school. :) And then I get to miss next Friday again for my original jazz band at school. And sometime I believe I am trying out for Newark jazz band.

So besides jazz, I'm working on a lot of stuff lyric-wise but I can't seem to put it together as a whole. I have great lines but I can't seem to connect them and make a whole song out of them. I also tried to change my style so it is not as boring and cliche as I used to write. So I may be posting soon.

And I just started a band with an awesome bassist, a decent vocalist, and a drummer that doesn't listen to anything besides hardcore. So we're pretty much limited to stuff along the lines of Minor Threat, Bad Brains, Black Flag, and maybe some newer hardcore such as Refused. I actually like playing that style a lot, it's easy to write, sing, and fun to play shows.

And that is all. Sleep.

A_Perfect_Sonnet 04-22-2005 05:18 AM

[Cameo]Hi errrbuddy![/Endcameo]

pixiesfanyo 04-22-2005 07:05 AM

[QUOTE=mshort813]

So besides jazz, I'm working on a lot of stuff lyric-wise but I can't seem to put it together as a whole. I have great lines but I can't seem to connect them and make a whole song out of them. I also tried to change my style so it is not as boring and cliche as I used to write. So I may be posting soon.

[/QUOTE]

Ha, I hate when that happens man.

I come with some great lines and try to write songs around them but it never works.

I'm thinking about pulling a Burroughs and just starting to cut and paste lines into a song. :p

Corupt2057 04-22-2005 11:10 AM

[QUOTE=IOWNU200]we lost :upset: . We played a great show though. Where some of the other bands killed us in overall talent we made up ground in crowd support and crowd activity. In the end though, we just dind't have quite the talent.[/QUOTE]
you'll develop it over time don't get down

thirdeyeblindislit 04-23-2005 12:33 PM

I have a question guys.

If there was to be a top ten of the best S&L er's of 2005 so far, who would it be do you think? My list is:

1. Zeppelinfan
2. Pixiefanyo
3. APS
4. Sparky
5. IOWNU
6. Spectrumguitarist
7. Mshort
8. Morrissey
9. Attaboy Skip
10. Corupt (for a noob that's not to bad. Well a sort of noob anyway.)

And I have to say that one of the best newcomers I have seen is Corupt. :thumb:
And the village idiot is Thirdeyeisgod.

thirdeyeblindislit 04-23-2005 12:57 PM

Oh yes and also, not as though anybody might care. But it's my birthday today! Just thought that I would throw that out there. :thumb:


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