mmmmmmmhmmmm

Those nights suck.

Krispy Kreme fixes that.

Or a pack of parliaments.

Man I didn't realise Cult of Luna released another album since "Salvation". It freakin rocks.

I have writer's block and am not impressed.

I'm going to crit some, see if anything inspires me.

I have a question... how the hell do you manage to bruise a bone, and why the hell does it hurt so damn much? :(

I might write an emo cutting song about it.

I've only ever broken one bone; my elbow. And it hurt. But brusing sucks =/

I take back what I said before. I've written something and I may post it in the future, but right now its very raw.

And I've had quite a few drinks so excuse my spelling.

[QUOTE=Sloth;14007982]ugh... you know "those" nights that drag by lonely and depressed?
It's the perfect feeling to write, but you don't. You just waste away staring at your computer or tv and wish you were being blown by some hot girl?
Yeah, this is one of those nights[/QUOTE]

Yeah, it honestly is.

I'm taking it for what it is though for once, gotta make the most of things, right?

NP: As Cities Burn - Bloodsucker, pt. II

Their guitarist shouldn't sing at all, he should just do his really improper scream that sounds awesome.

meh

NP: the pogues - If I Should fall from the grace of god.

Shane mcgowan should'nt technically sing. but he really should.

I start school in forty-something hours.

*pulls out party hat*

On a related note woah! Our future mod got banned that's baaaaaad. :(

On an even closer related note, I ate at Peter Piper's Pizza. It was good.

Banned for doing what?

Don't know.

ergh my head hurts. So today is a day of sitting in the dark, trip-hop and healing.

And I managed to write something yesterday which was nice.

the pogues rule

Rum, Sodomy and the Lash

did you get syph down in cologne

'bout the same time I pissed myself in Frankfurt

Alright, 1 crit, (thanks to Surf) 44 views, and it's sinking towards the bottom of the page.... who wants to trade a crit for a crit?

Here's my piece: (Small Tree On Franz)
[url]http://sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=509686[/url]

Just post a link to your piece and I'll begin critting.

I might have a look at it a bit later, your stuff's usually pretty good. I don't have anything I particularly want critting, so don't worry about that. :)

sup fags

np: the black keys - no trust

nm - everything I try and crit, I can't find anything to say about.

u?

[QUOTE]nm - everything I try and crit, I can't find anything to say about.[/QUOTE]Well surely you have an opinion on it; was it good, bad, what? At this point, I'll take anything.

[QUOTE=Schyma;14017005]Alright, 1 crit, (thanks to Surf) 44 views, and it's sinking towards the bottom of the page.... who wants to trade a crit for a crit?

Here's my piece: (Small Tree On Franz)
[url]http://sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=509686[/url]

Just post a link to your piece and I'll begin critting.[/QUOTE]
Forums are slow, good reviewers and critics are scarse and usually busy with life, or gay fags like myself occupied being engineers more than anything.

Patience, young lad.

*whistles sad tune*

yeah, it was good, I enjoyed the writing in parts, but I disliked the subject intensely. I always hated the slightly melodramatic aspect of recounting the death of someone, as it just feels like it's constantly trying to tug at your heartstrings and make you feel bad for the reader as opposed to the person that died. Almost as if saying "nevermind the guy that died... what about ME??!?!"

Yeah, but it was well written and stuff. :)

I watched Deliverance for the first time last night. Now I know where all the redneck stereotypes hail from.

[QUOTE]np: the black keys - no trust[/QUOTE]

np: the black keys - your touch.
My friend showed me this bands, they're pretty safe.

[QUOTE]everything I try and crit, I can't find anything to say about[/QUOTE]

I'm having that problem. I'm not even bothering to just direct people to the guide anymore. I enjoyed doing that, it was easy :( Nowadays the only time I really sit down to crit things is when I'm hung over and tired. Like now. Ugh at student cliche.


[QUOTE]I always hated the slightly melodramatic aspect of recounting the death of someone, as it just feels like it's constantly trying to tug at your heartstrings and make you feel bad for the reader as opposed to the person that died. Almost as if saying "nevermind the guy that died... what about ME??!?!"[/QUOTE]

It can work, it can be done so that the death isn't the main focus, just the reaction to it. 'Mid Term Break' would be a classic example - the narrator is too young to comprehend the concept of death, but the poem is very good in its telling of his reaction to it. It does have to be dealt with delicately though or, like you said, it comes of as narcissistic and egotisical. But I thought schyma did well.









Hours later edit: I've written something, but its about fertility/miscarriages. bleh. And its pretentious. And i had to put religion in it again. Mayeb see it sometime soon. I don't know.

what are you discussing
 

i'm confused as to what the topic of your forum thread is. I guess if I were your teacher I'd ask, ummm i don't see your thesis. in response i'd imagine and forecast the following response: "do you think I'll check the replies to my post? and as my writing is a product of my reality, and being as it may that our realities are fairly similar due to our shared capacities... when has your reality ever had a thesis?"
to this forecasted response I would invite you for a drink, or to hang out with me... bars often have mirrors behind their booze collections... and conversations often have hints of well, 'respond to me this way'.

Check out my recording i made tonight. guitar and keyboard, see if you think things about it..
[url]www.myspace.com/steveno39toole[/url]

Where is my familiarity?

STEVEN O'TOOLE WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?

aps: dunno

Steven o' Toole consumes it ITT

On some other forums - art ones, for instance, you have each member basically making a 'collection' thread - saves for people having to find every thread you make so they can crit.

I just thought it would be a nice idea for me to type a few of my favourite songs into one thread instead of filling up a few pages with them.

Follow suite because it is obviously more convenient.

anyway i haven't typed up my thread yet so bear with me.

Search > User: Jon > find: threads > go!

That's about it.

Anyway, that would be plausible if the community was tighter, which would probably be boring. So no. I like criticizing different threads and making new threads evey time I come up with interesting sh¡t.

well tbh i want all my lyrics in one thread and my joindate is older than you so I don't really think its a problem.

I'm not asking you to crit all my lyrics but I'd prefer all my lyrics to be in one porfolio rather than strewn around the forum.

That doesn't make you a better songwriter than me so OK.

And uh OK then go ahead we'll make an exception with you I guess.

*sigh*

Also Microsoft Word or Notepad are your friends.

I think that's a terrible idea. More news on why in your thread.

And please don't use the join date arguement. I am older than you. Does this mean that I am better at life? And joindate is really a great indication of either time spent on the forums or actual writing ability.

Oh well

03 > 06 get out.

I'm joking :)

ugh i tried catching up on this page by reading from the top but posts became full of paragraphs and such...and long...so here I am..

and surf

black keys woot

THICKFREAKNESS

i'm thinkin of changing my username to that

woot indeed.

listening right now

i had a chance to see them not long ago, but i didn;t know who they were. ghey.

lame

i'm workin on this new electronic song...it's bad news bears

i'll post it in a bit lol

Join date affects literary capacities ITF.