[QUOTE=TheBigMachine;13839841]Im digging Green Carnation at the moment, also.[/QUOTE][i]Light of Day[/i]? Pretty cool album.

yeah, I remember that FA... but I think Subtle was just annoyed that he didn't think of it, so he closed it. haha

probably, burt's a dick

Tojes, have you gotten anywhere with they critiques?

meh. depressed.

omfg. same.

i have you ignored so i can't read your posts.

fun

[QUOTE=Eleventeen;13840963]Tojes, have you gotten anywhere with they critiques?[/QUOTE]
Yeah I made comments on some but I didn't do like three.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]And Surf, give me your number and your address =o [/QUOTE]

Just come to Wales and ask around, you'll find me.

hi.

hi.

s'up?

I have a migraine. :upset:

i feel like ****

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v381/pawn/crybaby.jpg[/img]

I'm ok. I've just had a microwave curry. So I won't be for long.

Sounds delish

I don't know what I'm going to eat. Probably chicken enchiladas. :):):)

It really wasn't, but the microwave is the extent of my culinary prowress. That and toast. I make the best toast.

So, when I got to work today, there were cops all around. Apparently someone found a body out in one of the fields.

[url]http://www.wowt.com/home/headlines/4943722.html[/url]

Being the morbid fellow I am, I wrote a small poem about it, and posted it in the haiku thread.

[QUOTE=slack;13840424][i]Light of Day[/i]? Pretty cool album.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, pretty much. That and [I]The Acoustic Verses[/I]

Does anyone know the 23 flavors in Dr. Pepper?

:\
Sorry, I dont.
Dr Pepper isn't always readily available where Im from anyways.

Whiskey skylines rain into the spirit seas.
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?
The taste of stale blood and alcohol hangs on my unsuspecting lips -
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?

First stanza that i think I can use since I wrote 'reflections'.

Been drinking, huh?

Good inspiration source.

Always.

'sup hombres?

I've been enjoying a nice winter break, and as such have been away for a week or two.

Did we get a new mod yet? Or is there more chance of a haiku thread in The Pit?

Nahhh the haiku thread is going well.
No new mod.

Alls well.

Yeah things are pretty smooth. No new moderator, despite Jeremy being around sometimes and what not. He must be busy.

And uh inspiration comes and goes so whatever. =')

schweet.

Oh, and congrats on winning the ashes. It would probably have been closer if we'd have actually picked our best team from the start, but your lads were awesome. Well done.

Giles wouldn't get a game in Sydney B Grade. That was a mistake.


Whiskey skylines rain into the spirit seas.
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?
The taste of stale blood and alcohol hangs on my unsuspecting lips -
If I bowed my head now, what would I see?

What do you think, Jason?

Ah Jason, I hate you.. I have finals this week AND THEN I'm on break.

I've been out of school for about two weeks.

*sips coke*

Me too

*also sips coke*

student life for the win

Why do you guys critique?

A) boredom.

B) helps identify (and hopefully rectify) problems that you can fall victim to yourself. For example, if you can see when a rhyme is forced or a line is cliche in someone else's work, then you're more likely to be able to spot it in your own writing, and hopefully fix it.

I don't really critique.

[quote=surf]B) helps identify (and hopefully rectify) problems that you can fall victim to yourself. For example, if you can see when a rhyme is forced or a line is cliche in someone else's work, then you're more likely to be able to spot it in your own writing, and hopefully fix it.[/quote]This is what I would tell myself. I think it only works for a little while.

oh **** you guys! This week sucks!
It's only tuesday! AH!

a) Boredom

b) Point out very bad literature

But mostly to help, despite what I know about literature isn't that much of a huge amount of knowledge, but what I can I share it.

I think that my "This sucks" method works really well.

[QUOTE=Sloth;13851052]oh **** you guys! This week sucks!
It's only tuesday! AH![/QUOTE]This week has been strange, in a good, inspiring kind of way.