Its a story im currently 75 pages into writing. Since this is a first draft i might just skip all this hobo crap and get to the wifebeating.

[QUOTE=lunch998]Shutup.[/QUOTE]
:(.

[QUOTE=CemetaryGates9]Its a story im currently 75 pages into writing. Since this is a first draft i might just skip all this hobo crap and get to the wifebeating.[/QUOTE]

Why don't you make a plot? Make it involve the pushiing of crack on the streets, which is why the guy is homeless. Then have the beaten wife turn out to be a fed.

[QUOTE=Suprapeer]
NP : Therapy? - Black eye, Purple Sky

I think at least one person (Read: Bartender) will agree that this band is much better than Pink Floyd.[/QUOTE]

I wish I had my copy of Troublegum with me :(

NP Arghoslent - Quelling the Simian Surge

I find myself as a good writer, and once i get started, i can go wild on even a basic plot, but i lack creativity in all aspects of my life, so it sort of makes up for it. But when it comes to crap like thesis statements, transition sentences, and stuff like that, im not so good. I cant stand having to write reports and absolutely having to write in a specific way. Is writing sopposed to be a unique form? Theirs poets that lower case every word, dont use commas, and repetitivly use words in their poems, and their considered geniuses...if i do it though...im a failure

i just cant stand things like that

[QUOTE=Distant Echoes]I find myself as a good writer, and once i get started, i can go wild on even a basic plot, but i lack creativity in all aspects of my life, so it sort of makes up for it. But when it comes to crap like thesis statements, transition sentences, and stuff like that, im not so good. I cant stand having to write reports and absolutely having to write in a specific way. Is writing sopposed to be a unique form? Theirs poets that lower case every word, dont use commas, and repetitivly use words in their poems, and their considered geniuses...if i do it though...im a failure

i just cant stand things like that[/QUOTE]

I'm not going to brag, but I write a mean thesis statement.

Well, I'm getting my kitchen renovated, and because they didn't finish it by the time they expected, they had to leave it unfinished over the weekend, and leave all the wiring out etc. Well last night I was fumbling for a light switch and because all the wiring was everywhere I accidentally touched the wiring behind the switch, and got mass electrocution. Now i can't type with my left ring finger :(

p.s hello all

[QUOTE=Distant Echoes]I find myself as a good writer, and once i get started, i can go wild on even a basic plot, but i lack creativity in all aspects of my life, so it sort of makes up for it. But when it comes to crap like thesis statements, transition sentences, and stuff like that, im not so good. I cant stand having to write reports and absolutely having to write in a specific way. Is writing sopposed to be a unique form? Theirs poets that lower case every word, dont use commas, and repetitivly use words in their poems, and their considered geniuses...if i do it though...im a failure

i just cant stand things like that[/QUOTE]
It all comes down to preference. I'll put an excerpt from my autobiography to explain this a bit more.

[quote=me]That’s right, all the recycled, insipid stories we read in English 101 are the same. No difference at all, you could open two different stories up, and they would be the exact same. Of course, no English teacher will admit this, but they come to realize it at some point or another. Never wonder why a teacher seems as bored with a book as you are. They are even more bored with it, but these “classics” are fundamental to society, and so they are recycled over and over again in an attempt to control thinking. Unfortunately they are successful. [/quote]

[QUOTE=Bartender]I wish I had my copy of Troublegum with me :(

NP Arghoslent - Quelling the Simian Surge[/QUOTE]

You have infernal love though. :evil:


Anyway, I should be going to bed, early class tomorrow. :(

I think I'll be sleeping with the 'Semi-Detached' album playing. :)

[QUOTE=AntiHero3314]Sup replica :wave:[/QUOTE]

hawo

NP Max Bygraves - show me the way to go home

Well, it has a plot, but its the most childish, immature, unrealistic plot ever. If youd like to hear it, i could tell you it but youd make fun of me forever.

[QUOTE=lunch998]I'm not going to brag, but I write a mean thesis statement.[/QUOTE]

then maybe you could give me a pointer or two.

I scored a 95% better then all PA students on the PSSAs i took a few years ago...which was awsome, but didnt do so well on the other essay (which they gave you somethin specific to explain)

And my sonnet for english class didnt come out too bad, but i totally blew off the iambic pentameter, but other then that, i thought it was pretty good. From all that lyric writing i do for my original songs :cool:

[QUOTE=CemetaryGates9]Well, it has a plot, but its the most childish, immature, unrealistic plot ever. If youd like to hear it, i could tell you it but youd make fun of me forever.[/QUOTE]

Tell me about it. I can't make fun of you, you're writing a book and I'm doing nothing.

[QUOTE=lunch998]I'm not going to brag, but I write a mean thesis statement.[/QUOTE]
That was, for some reason, hilarius. :lol:

[QUOTE=Superpeer]
Anyway, I should be going to bed, early class tomorrow. :(

I think I'll be sleeping with the 'Semi-Detached' album playing. :)[/QUOTE]

Night :wave:

NP Arghoslent - Archaic Invincibility

[QUOTE=Bartender]Night :wave:

NP Arghoslent - Archaic Invincibility[/QUOTE]


Smooth move, leaving the Infernal love part out.


Goodnight Bartender and everyone else :wave:


NP: Tiger Army - True romance

[QUOTE=lunch998]Tell me about it. I can't make fun of you, you're writing a book and I'm doing nothing.[/QUOTE]
You're posting on mx.

Ok, here goes.

Its about an evil being which appears in peoples' dreams and if you dream about him you die. Then some people develop a system to go into people's dreams and prevent them from seeing the thing.
Characters:

Tommy- Ten year old mental patient
Sean-COmputer program that has a body and personality
Charlie-Guy that acts normal but in actuality is a psycho killer/wifebeater/heroine addict
Darwin-Charlie's hot wife.

[QUOTE=Another Emo Kid]You're posting on mx.[/QUOTE]

That counts as nothing in my book.

[QUOTE=CemetaryGates9]Ok, here goes.

Its about an evil being which appears in peoples' dreams and if you dream about him you die. Then some people develop a system to go into people's dreams and prevent them from seeing the thing.
Characters:

Tommy- Ten year old mental patient
Sean-COmputer program that has a body and personality
Charlie-Guy that acts normal but in actuality is a psycho killer/wifebeater/heroine addict
Darwin-Charlie's hot wife.[/QUOTE]

Sounds like it's been done before. As long as Tommy is deaf, dumb, and blind, then it should still be good.

Well...hopefully ill get a snow day tomorrow. We were sopposed to get 9 inches, but now their saying 3" and a mix, but whatever.

Bye All

[QUOTE=lunch998] Tommy is deaf, dumb, and blind, [/QUOTE]
That, I believe has been done before. :thumb:

Hey everyone im new to the thread but ive been here for some time (sort of) here and there. I neglected my account and i realsized i that i could post here in december. but ne ways ive been posting here and there stupid crap but o well.

well idk where this conversation has gone and i physically cant read 1453 pages of posts so ill join here.

by sayin that i suck at writing essays and my PSSA essay was the dumbest thing yet funny to read cause i started talking about ppl throwing trash in my neighborhood and making a big deal outta of it.

but o well greetings to all of u

[QUOTE=CemetaryGates9]That, I believe has been done before. :thumb:[/QUOTE]

Yea, it was fu[COLOR=White]cking[/COLOR] well done too.

[QUOTE=paco999]Hey everyone im new to the thread but ive been here for some time (sort of) here and there. I neglected my account and i realsized i that i could post here in december. but ne ways ive been posting here and there stupid crap but o well.

well idk where this conversation has gone and i physically cant read 1453 pages of posts so ill join here.

by sayin that i suck at writing essays and my PSSA essay was the dumbest thing yet funny to read cause i started talking about ppl throwing trash in my neighborhood and making a big deal outta of it.

but o well greetings to all of u[/QUOTE]
:wave: greetings.

[QUOTE=lunch998]That counts as nothing in my book.[/QUOTE]
You count as nothing in mine, call it even? :)

CG: I wouldn't read it, but it's not really my style, good luck anyways.
/prefers sci-fi with a little more substance

:wave: @ paco

[QUOTE=Another Emo Kid]You count as nothing in mine, call it even? :)

CG: I wouldn't read it, but it's not really my style, good luck anyways.
/prefers sci-fi with a little more substance[/QUOTE]

Deal.

My dad had to read it because my counselor confiscated it and said it was innappropriate "About sex and death" Dad liked it.

Greetings to the internet folk.