get mad

change his entire identity to meet n2p's approval

gonna be unphased, probably mosh for the other bands i'm playing with in deleware this weekend

mosh youw wittle heawt out mappu :)

def will, chinga is playing... they're basically an autopsy rip off with slams

[QUOTE=kitsch;18845324]change his entire identity to meet n2p's approval[/QUOTE]

happens

love me some autopsy

i'm not talking about the band

lol haz

The teacher was going on about something called Adversary. Sally wasn’t paying attention; she was trying to sleep. She had had three hours of rest last night, and was in no shape to be in bible class taking notes. When Mrs. Rochella noticed her dozing, she gave her permission to go to a bathroom and splash water on her face. Like that would do anything.
Rather than go to the restroom, Sally slipped behind the cafeteria building and rummaged in her purse. She found one of the two beaten and weathered cigarettes her older brother had given her the night before. “This better last you at least 24 hours,” he had said.
“Damnit,” she muttered. She had forgotten her lighter, and there was nothing that could be done about it at school.
Footsteps rang out behind her. She snatched the cigarette out of her mouth abruptly and turned around.

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18845330]def will, chinga is playing... they're basically an autopsy rip off with slams[/QUOTE]

sounds awesome so i'm checking them out

[QUOTE=BethanyLizard;18845353]The teacher was going on about something called Adversary. Sally wasn’t paying attention; she was trying to sleep. She had had three hours of rest last night, and was in no shape to be in bible class taking notes. When Mrs. Rochella noticed her dozing, she gave her permission to go to a bathroom and splash water on her face. Like that would do anything.
Rather than go to the restroom, Sally slipped behind the cafeteria building and rummaged in her purse. She found one of the two beaten and weathered cigarettes her older brother had given her the night before. “This better last you at least 24 hours,” he had said.
“Damnit,” she muttered. She had forgotten her lighter, and there was nothing that could be done about it at school.
Footsteps rang out behind her. She snatched the cigarette out of her mouth abruptly and turned around.[/QUOTE]

terrible

mappu, this chinga band rules

what's wrong with it? :upset:

n2p is a hater, alex, don't worry about him

had chad posted that he would've came all over it and explained in [I]excruciating[/I] detail why it was genius

alex this is a perfect time to namedrop the I Ching

the i ching is gypsy nonsense

i remember one time i quit drugs for like a year and rolled the I Ching asking if i should start doing drugs again

it said "a tree grows in my Western suburbs" so i got addicted to robitussin

[QUOTE=BethanyLizard;18845394]i remember one time i quit drugs for like a year and rolled the I Ching asking if i should start doing drugs again

it said "a tree grows in my Western suburbs" so i got addicted to robitussin[/QUOTE]

:lol:

fuckin' alex

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best forum on the planet

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[QUOTE=BethanyLizard;18845380]what's wrong with it? :upset:[/QUOTE]

it's just not good

terrible use of commas

misuse of a few words

[QUOTE=NEEDTOPOST;18845418]it's just not good

terrible use of commas

misuse of a few words[/QUOTE]

my style is very choppy and uncomfortable i'll admit but what worcds did i use wrong ?

was thinking of turning this in to school tomorrow for a grade

rang

weathered


perhaps not strictly wrongly but definitely poorly

[url]http://youtu.be/6FEDrU85FLE[/url]

[I]the only thing I know is she got sex appeal[/I]

lol haz

and yeah i didn't use weathered poorly only rang

no you used weathered poorly

weathered implies degradation through age and use, that's the fucking word

you said that these cigarettes that she was just given yesterday from her brother are weathered

that's a fucking poor use of the word

i know what you're trying to say and you're saying it poorly

it's for english 2 im not trying to win a pullitzer

you couldnt even handle my more scholarly works that aren't about young girls smoking cigarettes