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justin: no, not ok.
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I'ma cut you into a Spicy Sushi Roll! :mad:

Gav: oshi

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jon: you're cool sometimes.[/QUOTE]

That's way better than what I expected from Vince. thanks, man!

[QUOTE=Theo B]So you decided to do it then? That's cool. I wish I had the skills to write a mad song.

Instead I'm going to have to play As Long As She Doesn't Smoke by OTMOP because holy **** that song rules so hard.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, thanks man.

That song DOES rule hard. I love the chord in that intro...

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution]sometimes i wonder why everyone can't be as cool as gav

night j[/QUOTE]

Vince, ilu. <3

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace]I show work in progresses all the time...just ask Vince or Ash...[/QUOTE]

I know you do. Listen to my work in progress. Lemme know what you think please, thanks.

[QUOTE=AZNGuitaristDude101]Because we don't live in Mass and don't have crazy cool Boston accents k?[/QUOTE]

Man, my accent rules so hard it's not even funny.

-Gav

[QUOTE=Mute Print]:confused:

I mean that the songs that are acoustic on their CDs are better than the electric ones, in general.


Jon is always cool.[/QUOTE]
but truthfully most of their songs have some electric in them. it's just not dominant in most.

justin: i want sushi :(

jon: i'm in a generous mood, in a few hours i'll probably be all pms-y and not so nice :p

[QUOTE=I0Play0Bass][url]http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=F964E0B05AAA8C8D[/url]

Any input is welcomed.[/QUOTE]

Well, first think I noticed is for the finger picking riff I could tell where you were going before you went there. Kinda predictable with the bass note changes. If you don't care about that, then it sounds fine.

The strummed part is pretty.

The part after that is nice. Sounds like you're blowing into the mic the whole time, though :p

Oh, and no vocals wtf!?

Not something I'd remember in a few hours, but it's by no means bad. The lyrics and such will probably be the focus of the song anyway.

You know what would get my panties off? An acoustic bass song.

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Man, my accent rules so hard it's not even funny.

-Gav[/QUOTE]
Haha, I think I heard it once.

The rest was you screaming.

Oh, and the song was nice. Very soothing. I could probably fall asleep to it. :)

Vince: Me too. :(

I think I'm going to listen to some more OTMOP and go to bed.

The song is good Gav but like Jon said the intro type part was extremely predictable if that matters. Sounds really nice though.

I was thinking the intro's predictable too. I may rewrite it to something a bit more different and original.

The whole song's fingerpicked/finger strummed. I don't use pics 'cuz I play bass and I literally just can't use a pic anymore. I hate the feeling. :p

That's my mom washing stuff in the sink; that's what the blowing noise is. Sorry guys. :(

I hate acoustic bass. :(

-Gav

2 things:
you can't be expected to be real original in your first song on an instrument

and

predictable is catchier. lets all look at the unpopularity of progressive music versus the popularity of pop.

I am way better at bass than guitar. Bass is my main instrument and I'm still learning guitar. It's a lot of fun, though. :)

I was thinking of it; playing a Potrait of Tracy type song but I figure this is better. I may just do that, though, but I don't want to overdo it.

Where's a girl's input when you need it. :(

Vince: The first part isn't all that true. It's not my first song on guitar. It's my first solo acoustic guitar-type song thing because usually I'm writing riffs for my band or something (well...ex band).

-Gav

You came in right when she left. :p

I'm off. Have to work at 9 and I probably won't get to sleep until like 6 so I need to like at least lay down or something.

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution]2 things:
you can't be expected to be real original in your first song on an instrument
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Ha, I've been writing for months and I still can't write something original! I didn't know that was his first song on guitar. That's better than it should be, then :p

...bassists who use picks are the worst...

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Vince: The first part isn't all that true. It's not my first song on guitar. It's my first solo acoustic guitar-type song thing because usually I'm writing riffs for my band or something (well...ex band).

-Gav[/QUOTE]
well it's still your first song imo because it's your first solo effort

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace]Ha, I've been writing for months and I still can't write something original! I didn't know that was his first song on guitar. That's better than it should be, then :p

...bassists who use picks are the worst...[/QUOTE]

Haha, thanks, Jon.

Justin Chancellor uses a pic but I hate Tool...so...:p

Vince: I guess you're right. What did you think, though?

-Gav

[quote]Vince: I guess you're right. What did you think, though?
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Vince never likes anyone's music but his own >_<

Woo, yeah I'm heading off in a few. Gotta get up early for band stuff manana. :-\

Night Pop-Punkers.

Jon: Hahaha, well, hopefully he'll think this is decent. :p

Night, Justin! :wave:

-Gav

[QUOTE=I0Play0Bass]Haha, thanks, Jon.

Justin Chancellor uses a pic but I hate Tool...so...:p

Vince: I guess you're right. What did you think, though?

-Gav[/QUOTE]
I didn't listen yet. I'm listening to Big Wig because Jon made me.

I will though.

I like other music besides my won Jon..silly. I'm just picky.

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution]I didn't listen yet. I'm listening to Big Wig because Jon made me.
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I only wanted you to listen to one song that showcased his talent! Not a whole album!

Bigwig, the band from NJ?

Sellout's a great song.

-Gav

[QUOTE=BridgeToSolace]I only wanted you to listen to one song that showcased his talent! Not a whole album![/QUOTE]
shush you

gav: sellout's on this album :D

I'm off to bed. Goodnight! :wave:

-Gav

night gavin

i'll post a critique of your song later so be sure to read back tomorrow.

ATTN: GAVIN

The intro has so much potential if you had more notes in it. More notes doesn't mean speedier or anything, I can just hear so many more notes in my head filling out the sound and making it uber pretty.

Strumming: meh, this is what bores me about acoustic bands tbh.

The second picking pattern was neat but with the current lack of transition it's awkward so I'd like to hear it in the context of the song itself before judging. (Yes I know it's a work in progress)

I'm [I]so[/I] not getting banned again.

Ah, it's late.

Good evening pop punk.

Sup, Mitch.

I got my new trainers this morning, they = secks

Chillin.
Oh, I so desperatley need some new trainers. Mine are like three sizers to small...Not fun, especially when your doing sharp turns and the like. Ouch.

[url]http://www.fender.com/products/search.php?partno=0260700595[/url]

This is the guitar i've decided to get now :D

It's £700, HOPEFULLY, if my guitar teacher gets my money through, I should be ordering it sometime next week :D:D:D