on a similar subject, when's the voting on the challenge starting?

In exactly two day and zero hour. :)

i thought it was a week? doesn't matter anyway.

still going to enter slack?

Probably not. I bounce between drawing, writing, and playing guitar and I haven't felt like writing much lately.

I have discovered a cure for that loathsome writer's block, however. Complete and utter apathy.

pessimist. but cynicism [I]is[/I] the way forward

Serious. I notice when I start actually caring about the outcome, or how it will be received, or any other list of stupid things, then I become overly critical of myself and it all goes to hell.

Thank God I don't drink or do drugs. I'd be completely fuc[font="verdana"]k[/font]ed.

that's why i can only write in isolation. no music (maybe some eno or classical - nothing with lyrics); just me a pad and a pen.

I'm overly critical of myself anyway. comes from being a mix of paranoid, narcissitic and cynical. not a good thing to read in an online psychological profile

(random cut into whatever conversation is going on)

But I'm trying to come around here more now that I have a little time...so feel free to leave a link so I can crit it...Also, feel free to crit my stuff too :naughty:

[QUOTE]feel free to crit my stuff too [/QUOTE]

i did, and man it's a bit sick.

:naughty: - i hope not. more :eek: followed by :amaze:

Ya Guys I just got done my first song ever, and I do like it, but I find it appears to come off...............santanic in a way. I'll write it up later but at the time I just wondered what it would feel like to live a life away from god (seeing as I am reading the book "Final Events Of Bible Prophecy") and then when I am sentenced to a life in hell for eternity how it would feel.

So ya, there is just one line I find comes off satanic so im thinking of taking it out (yes the song would work with out it) it just says

"as I sit here in fear
of the first of my eternal sentence"

I don't like the quick rhyme with "here" and "fear" and it just doesn't sound good. so ya, I'll post up the song soon for some crit

That line doesn't really come off satanic at all, I though. Put it up, and Ill be sure to get to it, only because your a good poster on D&P :p

NEWSFLASH: I'm not dead.

'sup community thread. Discuss having three weeks off from work and how awesome it was.

You don't get paid, and money is important to be happy, so good times at writing.

*gets sad and writes a song about the rain*

[QUOTE]'sup community thread[/QUOTE]

[SIZE="7"]sinuous cum[/SIZE] according to one song

[QUOTE=Surf;13300553][SIZE="7"]sinuous cum[/SIZE] according to one song[/QUOTE]
S&L meme lolol

Ah, but I do get paid. It was paid holiday. :D

And I feel I'm missing out... linkage, good sirs?

[URL]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=493235[/URL]

I'm out. I don't really feel like getting feedback on my newest piece. I'll save feedback for a serios song.

<_<

Haha, good old Sloth. One of my favourite writers on here. :)

Hahaaaa!
Surf, love how you keep bringing that up!
Makes me laugh whenever I see you mention it.

Why thank you Nightvision.
It's good to see you again.

its the best description of semen i've ever read.
and i really like your song - do not edit that part out. nor the part about pissing on the ceiling

And you, good sir.

I wish I was still writing as well as you seem to be. I've been the antimidas recently.

well you better get on that man!
If/when you post your next piece (which should be SOON), mention it on here, just in case I don't catch it on the forum page.

Everyone should mention new pieces. :-0

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine;13299777]That line doesn't really come off satanic at all, I though. Put it up, and Ill be sure to get to it, only because your a good poster on D&P :p[/QUOTE]

Haha thanks, but ya I edited it a little last night and there is some editing still left to be done, and I am working on a new one that I'll call "My Friend In The End (The Light In The Tunnel) "

The one I am editing is called "The Great Deception" so look for a thread with either one or both of those in the title

Ok i'll mention my new 'piece'... Seriously, everyone should totally check it out. It's called 'The Nothing'. Venture inside you may find out why. God it feels like I'm still rhyming. Blegh, get it off! But seriously, DO NOT DELETE IT. It ain't a joke song, just a new method of beating the writers block. Even though I didn't really have it anyway. Check it out!

done. but i think you stopped free writing too soon. then it became a bit too post-modern-y. anyway, read the thread, rather than me posting the crit in here

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan;13302173]Everyone should mention new pieces. :-0[/QUOTE]

I have a new piece....

Will I post it?

Maybe...soon...maybe...I'm not really that happy with it for some reason...I may later tonight...we see..

I have a new piece, called Pools. Sloth and Surf have seen it, but yeah I'm still after some more opinions.

Someone come pick me up and drive me to Minneapolis on the 29th...I'd like to get to a show but I can't drive atm due to the law...and such...Anyway, you pick me up and I'll pay the 10 bucks or whatever to get into the show...it'll be a glorious time...None of my friends are free and those who are don't like the music I like or are as fond of concerts as I am..Furthermore...

Playing:

LUCERO
ROCKY VOTOLATO
WILLIAM ELLIOT WHITMORE

In closing...I will now have missed 3 shows I wanted to see this month...:( Yet I still hit the big one with seeing Dylan..wooo