ugh, I am having toughest time writing anything over 1,000 words. I was going to enter that short story competition, but it ain't looking so good. :upset:

Meh, I'm sure everyone is writing about a harlot.

Bastards.

So I just bought Grizzly Bear's album [i]Yellow House[/i] and it is amazing. Anyone else heard of this band?

They're bland.

Never heard, don't think I want to.

I don't really listen to Ursine-related bands aside Minus The Bear.

Right. That settles that, I guess :/

i've had song ideas in my head all day

i don't want to write anything down because i don't feel like it

but i don't want to lose them

walk it out...west side walk it out, south side walk it out, east side walk it out, north side walk it out...etc

I'm hitchhiking to Dublin for a few days. So I'll be gone from the forums. I'm sure you'll miss me...

ugh I have to get up at six in the morning and rely on truckers all day. Loads of fun.

Just for the hell of it? Sounds fun.

Take it easy. :wave:

Have fun Surf.

:)

[size=1]say something about my new piece before you leave >->[/size]

There's some sort of charity involved, but I haven't raised any money.

I'm just going for the guinness. And the fact that I love the Pogues, I'm sure they'll be playing Fairytale of New York everywhere. Best Christmas song ever.

[size=1]Tojes, I'll get on it now. [/size]

the pogues \mmmmmmm/

i just wrote some of a song, but i don't want to make an individual thread for it yet. this is what i have

[I]malachite, you gaze so heavily
through envy i harvest you
and weave the threads of our past

let us take it and shovel the remains
away from this burrow in the hills
let us craft it into something of worth

and from here we'll move forth for
every motion has become fallible
as we bury every step in the dirt[/I]

Yeah.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan;13634705]I don't really listen to Ursine-related bands aside Minus The Bear.[/QUOTE]

I [B]haet[/B] Minus the Bear with more passion than the loli haet pizza.

haet eh?

It's kind of like 'teh'

Random lyrics because I am super bored and this board is so dead, dead, dead lately[quote][b]TINFOIL HATS[/b]

he reminded me that the only way to
keep aliens from reading your mind
is to wear a tinfoil hat friend and wear it all the time
life keeps on changing
tell it to stay still but it won't listen
I just want you near me like you are now for good
transistor tape recorder, tell me about everything that I've lost
I know you've got it all stored somewhere
at least I'm keeping my fingers crossed
life keeps on changing
tell it to stay still but it won't listen
I just want you near me like you are now for good
kid I'm gonna be with you longer than the world can stand cause
there's a light that's stronger
shinning out of your eyes I see it
and it won't be long now
life keeps on changing
tell it to stay still
but it won't listen
I just want you near me like you are now for good[/quote]

my nickname i dublin...how i wish to visit my place of origin....here me comes IRE-LIND

[QUOTE=Eliminator;13636944]i just wrote some of a song, but i don't want to make an individual thread for it yet. this is what i have

[I]malachite, you gaze so heavily
through envy i harvest you
and weave the threads of our past

let us take it and shovel the remains
away from this burrow in the hills
let us craft it into something of worth

and from here we'll move forth for
every motion has become fallible
as we bury every step in the dirt[/I][/QUOTE]
Been listening Opeth quite too much, uh?

i was switching from folk stuff to maudlin of the well

thinking about it earlier i decided that it would be good for a metal song

go tojes!

It's good to see that you are taking some stuff seriously again.

= 0

what do you mean?

Elim be banned? Lame.

That song is [I]sort of[/I] Opethy, sort of old Underoathy... like, the topic of choice and the way it comes out is very much Dallas Taylor-esque, but the vocab usage and sentence structure is like Akerfeldt.

I quite like.

[quote="Kent"]I like how you're not really specific; I find the best lyrics to be very metaphorical and force the reader/listener to interpret the bulk of them for themselves. Spoon feeding your meaning to people is catering to the lowest common denominator.[/quote]UGH. As if specificity and metaphor were mutually exclusive.

[QUOTE=Eleventeen;13641964]Elim be banned? Lame.

That song is [I]sort of[/I] Opethy, sort of old Underoathy... like, the topic of choice and the way it comes out is very much Dallas Taylor-esque, but the vocab usage and sentence structure is like Akerfeldt.

I quite like.[/QUOTE]

yeah elim be banned

hopefully i'll get those lyrics into a song or maybe expand on them more

Yeah, they're pretty good.

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=499166[/url]

I thoroughly revamped Leinadia.

[QUOTE=slack;13638943]Random lyrics because I am super bored and this board is so dead, dead, dead lately[/QUOTE]

I love the harmonica line in that song, but, overall, the album lets down in too many places.

[QUOTE=Cygnus Inter Anates;13643408]yeah elim be banned

hopefully i'll get those lyrics into a song or maybe expand on them more[/QUOTE]
Ugh why'd you get banned, pit nonsense or something

according to ydload i trolled alt/indie

Alternative and Indie is a bit of a closed community that won't allow new users to come in because the indie factor would be lost.

Go figure.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet;13644062]I love the harmonica line in that song, but, overall, the album lets down in too many places.[/QUOTE]Yeah. I don't know why I posted that song, it's not even my favorite. :/

Hey...everyone?

I've been checking out other forums lately and I found this one...

The other places I've been are too chummy and exclusive to actually get into a community for writing...

What's this place like? You like them?

This place has been dead as hell lately

But please feel free to write stuff and critique other people so long as you read the rules

We need more active people :|

[QUOTE]This place has been dead as hell lately[/QUOTE]
Well, at least most of these writing forums are consistent with each other...I probably won't post anything for a little bit, but I'll get on critiquing stuff soon

This place is awesome when people actually talk and stuff :/

:7|

Look at you trying to sabotage my chances in the LC :upset: