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TheBigMachine 08-29-2006 06:46 AM

Heh, lol @ me for spell asterisk like the french cartoon character Asterix.

TojesDolan 08-29-2006 10:38 AM

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine]Asterix goes at the front :p[/QUOTE]
[IMG]http://www.asterix.co.nz/asterix_box2.jpg[/IMG]

Yeah I see what you did there.

drumass04 08-29-2006 11:29 AM

Asterix is awesome...I've still got loads of the comic books. I never understood half of the jokes and playing on words when I was younger...I was a bit dumb back then.

Timmy

Nightvision 08-29-2006 11:37 AM

I saw one of the old Asterix cartoons a few months ago - I was sick as a dog that day with tonsilitis and remember sitting there watching it thinking 'I haven't seen this for years'.

Isn't it funny how stuff tends to come round a few times if you see it for the first time in ages?

Uh, I'm rambling. Stupid flu.

TojesDolan 08-29-2006 03:14 PM

Especially at the internets, Jason.

haha.

FA 08-29-2006 04:56 PM

Anyways...M. Ward is god....

TheBigMachine 08-30-2006 01:17 AM

I have every single Asterix comic that I know of, and most of the game books. W00t!!

TojesDolan 09-01-2006 08:21 AM

Yeah so... Widerstehen Sie is very full of wrath huh?

TheBigMachine 09-01-2006 09:40 PM

Uh, who?

El_Goodo 09-02-2006 03:01 AM

Hey...not sure if this is the right place. But I'm looking for someone to collaborate on some lyrics with. I've written pretty much everything in basic form, and I really like the idea of the lyrics, but I need someone to help me express the idea better.

The lyrics are about the 7 deadly sings, each verse is about the different sins...and it's also in a bluesy format..I'll give you one verse and the rest follow the pattern.

[QUOTE]
I know that it's a sin,
to feel such greed within,
But seeing you walk away,
I cannot help but feel,
that nobody else deserves to even look at you,
You belong only to me,
Your heart will stop only for me,
And so if they don't let me in,
for commiting one deadly sin,
then I guess we'll both be swimming down the lake of fire[/QUOTE]

slack 09-02-2006 12:44 PM

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]Yeah so... Widerstehen Sie is very full of wrath huh?[/QUOTE]I guess.

Just so everyone knows, S&L was better back in the day. Nobody knows when that was exactly, but man was it rockin'.

:rolleyes:

TheBigMachine 09-02-2006 10:45 PM

It's occured to me that the average number of crit's has gone down...Meaning, that people are posting songs with out critting enough..

Surf 09-03-2006 05:18 AM

best crit ever:

[QUOTE= some thread]You need to work on the lyrics, other than that good job[/QUOTE]

maybe its a good thing some people aren't critting

TheBigMachine 09-03-2006 05:23 AM

That is so good.
Maybe Timmy needs to finnish his crit guide...
Maybe people need to stop flaming each other when they get bad crits, and then stop retalliating when they get flamed(yes Im guilty of that, unfortunatley...the second bit I mean...)

But yeah. Methinks Im gonna throw up part four of my epic, and Im still working on part three.

drumass04 09-03-2006 10:44 AM

Maybe Timmy needs to start crit'ing more himself :P

A friend and I have just started up a new forum for our school, due to being joint creator I'm also a Moderator. This means that I spend every minute I'm online on the forum. It's doing ridiculously well considering it's only been online three days, we already have over 600 posts.

But yeah, I should hopefully get around here a bit more now that all the creation is done, and once the initial increase in members slackens a little I shouldn't need to spend so long on there...that's the problem with having only three Mods on there!!!!


I'll go crit something now.

Timmy

drumass04 09-03-2006 03:30 PM

Widerstehen Twatface is on a roll :rolls eyes:

Seems like a real nice guy :sarcasm:


Edited my new piece...take a look if you get the chance. Surf, I'm heading to yours now.

Timmy

Surf 09-03-2006 03:40 PM

i'll have a look at your revised one; i've got all evening, so i should be able to find something

drumass04 09-03-2006 03:51 PM

I've just finished your crit...really enjoyed it :)

Thanks a lot!

Timmy

Surf 09-03-2006 04:35 PM

thanks man. i'll probably be revising it tomorrow, so thanks for the comments.

Widerstehen is starting to push it, but i find the people who leave a two or three word crit more annoying; at least Widerstehen does say the occasional releveant thing. i'd like to see him post something though (i.e. lyrics)

also, to anyone, What's up with the Lyrical challenges? i tried working out the scores (subtledagger won), but it seems to have been dead for the last few days..........

TheBigMachine 09-04-2006 01:16 AM

Waiting on Subtle to put a new word up, I think.

Eliminator 09-04-2006 01:17 AM

Meh. Lyrics.

TheBigMachine 09-04-2006 01:18 AM

Sup Nick.
Lyrics are wild, the last two things i've written have been all angsty and stuff...

Eliminator 09-04-2006 01:29 AM

Who cares about lyrics? YNGWIE 4 LIFE.

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=487305&highlight=young+female+rebbonia[/url]

My last song I wrote.

TojesDolan 09-04-2006 12:37 PM

[QUOTE=Surf]thanks man. i'll probably be revising it tomorrow, so thanks for the comments.

Widerstehen is starting to push it, but i find the people who leave a two or three word crit more annoying; at least Widerstehen does say the occasional releveant thing. i'd like to see him post something though (i.e. lyrics)

also, to anyone, What's up with the Lyrical challenges? i tried working out the scores (subtledagger won), but it seems to have been dead for the last few days..........[/QUOTE]
No, Widerstehen just arrives, puts some pseudo-funny picture and leaves. That's not constructive, that's not destructive either, it's just annoying and childish.

Eliminator 09-04-2006 09:26 PM

Oh Tojes, ilu.

drumass04 09-05-2006 09:28 AM

Don't we all?

TojesDolan 09-05-2006 09:42 AM

Oh hush guys.

drumass04 09-05-2006 12:54 PM

b b b b b b b bbut...*hushes*

TheBigMachine 09-06-2006 01:09 AM

I am the hardcore, we had the 'ol school athletics carnival...First in 800, second in 100, third in 400, fourth in shot put, first in long jump(by 80 centimetres, I jumped 4 60), first in the sack race(a highlight, for sure), and my relay team also came first. What a day.

FA 09-08-2006 10:10 AM

no I am the hardcore, the internet up here at school is all funked up and it won't let me do certain things....I'm very dissapointed....


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