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I'm still learning the art of the semi colon
No, man, I'm talking like you have "of" where it should be "off" and sentences that just don't
agree. For example:
The overly 80's tone of No World For Tomorrow coupled with the heavy and serious, yet stale
sound of Year of the Black Rainbow, many fans were crying foul at the band's sense of direction and
seeming lack of passion in the band, especially after losing their original bass player and drummer.
This sentence's latter half does not agree with its first half. Just read it aloud and you'll hear
what I mean. You do this a lot. Sorry, but I get pissed every time I see something featured that
hasn't been checked for shit like this. It makes the site look poor.
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Album Rating: 3.5 | Sound Off
I need a had in there thanks for the heads up
I need to stop writing these on paper
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Album Rating: 2.5 | Sound Off
gay queef
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Album Rating: 2.5 | Sound Off
ben is that u
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
I need a had in there thanks for the heads up
Remember to kill the "were" as well. And re-read and edit this. That's far from the only issue I encountered, man.
I get that you're proud and stuff, but proofread and edit before posting and requesting a feature. I'm not a mod or anything, so I can't speak to their approval of featuring things, but I do get pissed off when someone gets a review with a bunch of errors featured. I'd say it's just me being anal retentive, but it's really bad publishing practice and it's holding this site down and making it look unprofessional.
Again, the content's not bad (it's actually quite eloquent throughout) but poor grammar makes it read like shit. Sorry for being the resident asshole.
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god i love sputnik trolls
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Album Rating: 3.5 | Sound Off
I know I know man, I need to get my mom to proofread these things
No offense taken
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Album Rating: 3.5 | Sound Off
Yeah she's an english major and would probably call me a hack if she read my reviews
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
Sometimes I wonder if I have rose-colored glasses or if I actually remember a time when this site wasn't a bunch of high schoolers jacking it in a circle and trying to be funny.
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Album Rating: 4.0
It's always been that way, just we were the high schoolers circle-jerking and we were actually pretty funny sometimes.
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Album Rating: 2.5 | Sound Off
trebs mom is cool she taught me how to use semicolons and made me a really good turkey sammich one time after school
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Album Rating: 3.5
jackin it jackin it smackity wack
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Album Rating: 3.5 | Sound Off
My mom complains that her boss uses semi colons incorrectly all the fuckin time
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
Kurt Vonnegut: Here is a lesson in creative writing. First rule: Do not use semicolons. They are transvestite hermaphrodites representing absolutely nothing. All they do is show you've been to college.
And then he goes on to use one at the end of the section.
I use them here and there, but I tend to agree: avoid them whenever possible, use them only if you have two idea which cannot seemingly be joined by a dash, comma, or by splitting the sentence in two with a period. Most people just use them to try to look smart and it makes them look retarded to those of us with English degrees.
Of course, when we show up delivering the pizza, we look retarded to everyone else...
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Album Rating: 2.5 | Sound Off
itt you post pics of ur mommy
u guys go first
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Album Rating: 2.5 | Sound Off
ok ill go first
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Album Rating: 4.0
Where them mum pics bro
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
I've been out of high school for 3 and a half years bro nd im funny as fuck
Your attempt at a Godspeed troll review proves you wrong. Also: learn to type. Fuck.
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Album Rating: 3.9
Pos'd, great review bro
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Good review man, really looking forward to hearing this.
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