 | Jonny Craig A Dream Is A Question You Don't Know How To Answer
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Album Rating: 2.5
"edit: 'haven't' should be 'don't have' in your summary"
Haven't should not be don't. Both are technically correct, but haven't wins for style.
"renouned is spelled as: renowned"
I think he was going for renounced.
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"I think he was going for renounced."
Oh, okay.
| | | Album Rating: 3.0
this is a very very guilty pleasure
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lamest album name ever
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← my face
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LOL andcas
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I didn't even know he had solo stuff. I actually like new dgd. I just have to try not to think about what a douche he is when I listen to it.
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Egotisitcal ass..
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He is fantastic live I'm not sure what you're talking about
| | | Album Rating: 3.0
He can sing very well live.
I just have to try not to think about what a douche he is when I listen to it. [2]
| | | Album Rating: 3.0
Abracadabra holmes!
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He is ginger and has a mullet.
WHY?
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I only ever listen to the last song on this
| | | Album Rating: 3.0
heard a couple songs off this and it sounded GAY
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Welp here I go again
Jonny Craig is renouned for being one of the most hit & miss vocalists on the scene right now, hits in the studio, and misses in live performances.
Not a complete sentence
He's been kicked out of two bands; Dance Gavin Dance (Although reformed with them late 2010) and just recently, Emarosa (2011).
This is closer to how your opener should be formatted; this sentence, however, needs a colon, not semicolon
In any case, with DGD or Emarosa, or any other band he's been affilated with or provided guest vocals for, has always been an average listen, his voice sometimes screeching, sometimes flowing out of the listeners speakers.
This sentence isn't complete either, *listeners
But Jonny Craig being Jonny Craig has recorded a solo record, and even though at time of review, this record has been floating about a bit, it's only just recently come into the public eye, and people are still discovering it.
I don't know where you got that idea from, I even saw this at Hot Topic once
Whereas before, you had an excuse to listen to his voice, because he was part of a band, now you don't.
Improper use of 'whereas', comma splice
Besides all of this, there are 3 tracks on this album that are worth even mentioning, and they seem to be the 3 that have been shunted out for video/single release.
Bad way to open a paragraph and sentence. I understand this is a negative review but we shouldn't perceive your review in the same way you perceive this album
7AM, Two Bottles and the Wrong Road, a hefty title you would admit, is probably the albums selling point, as it's a genuinely good song.
*album's, omit that "a hefty title" phrase
It has a rhythm, it's not bad vocals at all, and he doesn't mention himself in it, as is Jonny Craig's forte.
You just seem to follow up bad sentences with worse ones
I must admit, (I have no time girl, To play this game with you) is a lyric that managed to embed itself in my brain for a while, and made me keep coming back to the song.
Quotes, italics, damn near anything conveys this much better than fucking parentheses. You could've just written a sound-off saying "I don't like it because it's Jonny Craig, 1.5" and I would respect you much more than I do after reading this "review"
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Boom
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lol no reply
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i agree this album blows. but your write up is possibly worse
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