I listened to it three times before writing it, and I listened to it like two times during.
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I find this to be too conversational with some questionable paragraph lengths and structure. The main problem I have is asking the audience a question within the introduction; 99% of the time it never works.
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Yeah, I can see how that would make the review fall apart, but what's wrong with the paragraph lengths? Too long or short?
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The first and last two are too short. They're just kind of sitting there.
Now let's give it a closer listen.
And I'm guessing you had a hard time finding a transition here, because this is crutch filler.
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No, I was making that ridiculously short for effect, but I guess it kind of backfired.
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But yeah, thanks for the feedback, it's really helpful!
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No problem. Just keep writing and you'll continue to improve.
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Album Rating: 3.5 | Sound Off
Blue Dream is my favorite song off this, one of their best easily as far as I'm concerned.
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Album Rating: 4.5
whats up!? its dance gavin dance bitches. love it
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Loving this so far.
Would have liked the review to be a little more specific, but it's a good review nonetheless.
Predicting 6 reviews for this album lol.
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album might be a 5.
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Album Rating: 3.0
prob. a 3.5/4. can't decide yet.
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Album Rating: 4.0
Album has it's moments for sure, but I'm not sure it has enough of them...
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Album Rating: 4.0
Dance Gavin Dance always takes at least 7 or 8 listens to fully sink in
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Album Rating: 2.5
Pounce Bounce is the only song I really dig. Thug City's good too.
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Mmmm I love all of these negs without explanation.
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Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off
^^ totes hahaha.
excellent review though. i agree with the whole idea of them kind of resorting to similar formulas and tricks this time around, but for me, at least, the catchiness and fun factor of the songs still forces me to give this a high rating.
the album does a good job of combining the sounds from all of their previous albums and i've loved all of dgd's releases, but that's also the reason why this probably won't ever be my favorite from them, because most of it has already been done by them before. regawwwdless, this is right up my alley
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Album Rating: 3.5
"hello? what colour are your fuckin eyes?
blue? you sure?
alright let's go"
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Album Rating: 4.0
Sorry Defeater but "99% of the time it never works"....lol
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Album Rating: 3.5
I loved a few of the songs from the first Downton Battle Mountain (like Lemon Meringue Tie and The Backwards Pumpkin Song.) Is this worth checking out?
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