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Yeahtoast
April 19th 2010


2041 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

As always guys, constructive criticism appreciated!

Metalstyles
April 19th 2010


8576 Comments


ok so my thoughts on what can be improved upon (as requested by you):

1) sentence flow - there are many sentences that, while understandable, could use better wording

2) length - not necessarily a problem itself, but you seem to repeat yourself quite a few times. There's no need to say something that can be said in one sentence, in 3 sentences ;). Also, conscise reviews are often better to read and are favored by quite many members of the community. There's nothing wrong wtih long reviews, but you gotta make sure you don't repeat yourself and that you don't sound stagnant.

3) run-on sentences - you've got quite many. This is something you'll definitely improve upon when writing more, since it takes some experience to fully "feel" when it's fitting to end your sentence.

4) read your writing out loud, when you've finished writing. Again, there are some sentences here in which I can see what you're trying to say, but you're expressing yourself in a rather awkward manner.


Still, this is a very solid first review. You've got good descriptions and have writtena very detailed overview about an album; a one that really gives me an idea what this would sound like. Good job on your first, and keep writing - you'll get better with each review, I promise.

Yeahtoast
April 19th 2010


2041 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

Thankiiiiiiiing you Mr. Styles ;)

jake20589
May 7th 2010


82 Comments

Album Rating: 5.0

recommended songs: every song.





i barely consider this deathcore

Yeahtoast
May 7th 2010


2041 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

Muha, I considered writing that but I chose not to as it may have sounded weird on my first review. It is deathcore for me, just different deathcore than all the generic stuff, fresh sounding.

oresttt
June 23rd 2010


1180 Comments


This album is awsome!

kevcommander
June 29th 2010


21 Comments


it was like love at first sight ... very nice recording, one of my 2009 favs

Yeahtoast
July 21st 2010


2041 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

One of my favourites from 2009 also.

Ssssssss
August 22nd 2012


683 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

Is this band even still together?

oresttt
August 22nd 2012


1180 Comments


Nope, I don't think so.

thechodewarrior
November 6th 2012


62 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5

band sounds like children of bodom

oresttt
January 16th 2018


1180 Comments


ye, this still rules

necropig
January 16th 2018


7424 Comments


5 year bumps

MotokoKusanagi
June 11th 2020


4290 Comments


just listened to this for first time in like 3 years, little cheesy but m/

Get Low
August 25th 2020


14381 Comments


"gay" - KILL 2010

This is literally Children of Bodom with breakdowns. I'm surprised this has a 4 avg, but then again this didn't sound like a lot of the deathcore at the time.



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