While I like the idea of poetry mixed with sentence structure, it did come off as a bit wordy I think and (for me) the message kind of got lost in the translation (so to speak).

Other than that I thought it was a good review, I like your style nonetheless, (this is the first review I've read of yours)and it makes for an interesting read. (Other than "guitars sound like this, bass sounds like this, vocals sound like the love child of Gerald Way and Britney Spears" etc.)

Ok thanks for the criticism guys, I'll work on that. So would you guys say it was well-written or was it terrible.

Album Rating: 4.5

Put away the thesaurus next time and just write on a level you are capable of. A lot of the adjectives you used were contradictory.



Exhibit A:

plummeting at you in a somewhat slithering speed

Album Rating: 5.0

Alright, I can't really work on it right now, but I might revisit it tomorrow.



Edit: Didn't use a thesaurus, just used words that I haven't used in a long time.This Message Edited On 02.09.09

Album Rating: 4.5

It was a good effort and it wasn't badly written, but you went over the top with the prose and because of that:

the message kind of got lost in the translation (so to speak)

Album Rating: 5.0

btw, Cesar, just listened to the single from Salvation, I like.

Album Rating: 4.5

I do my best to spread the joy :chug:



Pelican plays the same type of music Isis and Cult of Luna play, just completely instrumental. So after those two, if you like the type of music then you should also enjoy Pelican.This Message Edited On 02.09.09

review is terrible. and you said there's poetry in this thing? all i saw was words that you obviously don't know how to use/what they mean, and like chan said, you can't even write a regular review well. and then there's this:

plummeting at you in a somewhat slithering speed

Album Rating: 5.0

At Joshuatree (idk how to quote), that was harsh

Album Rating: 4.5

review is terrible. and you said there's poetry in this thing? all i saw was words that you obviously don't know how to use/what they mean, and like chan said, you can't even write a regular review well.

Album Rating: 5.0

Yeah actually, I'm a senior.

yeah so am i h5
and it wasn't that harsh, you really just need to get better. write shorter, more descriptive reviews without all the bullshit, and make sure you know what you're writing and do your research so you know (or at least sound like you know) what you're talking about.

Album Rating: 4.5

I'm a junior. Class of 2010 represent muhfuckaz!

Album Rating: 5.0

Ok, I don't really know much about the aspects of how to play an instrument, but I try, since my buddy Kratzer attempts to explain it to me.

no i had my palms read today im gonna have a long life so i get to listen to isis for a long time

as much as i love giving album a 5-star rating

Album Rating: 5.0

Hey, this album is awesome, DON'T JUDGE ME!!!!

Album Rating: 5.0

lol Such a sarcastic sense of humor on the review site, much better than the forums.

Album Rating: 4.5

I remember when I first joined and I started talking about COF in the black metal thread. I thought those motherfuckers were going to murder my family lol.

Album Rating: 4.0

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