Daylight Dies
Idle

I'm probably single-handedly the biggest Daylight Dies fan on sputnik and I regret not writing a review for this album. That being said, it is their weakest effort. Hope the new album kicks ass!

also...this is a really weak review. You mentioned 'death metal' way too much, descriptions are bland and un-interesting and overall I'm guessing English is not your first language. It's cool, you'll get better with time.

saw your name by this review and thought you wrote it

^see what I mean?

Absolutely incredible band. So underrated around these parts. Dismantling Devotion is a metal classic IMO.

I didn't get into DD too much before, I might try it again later.

I'm not sure what the best feedback would be, because it is hard to identify what the root cause of the review's issues are. There are a lot of things one could say, but i'm going to try to maybe identify a few things.

The misuse of words, or use of incorrect words, can be easily attributed to unfamiliarity with the language. However, a limited vocabulary and understanding of grammatical structure shouldn't limit you from (if even in a roundabout way) getting your point across.

I think the main issues are that the concepts you present, and the points you touch on, are somewhat superficial and don't carry much meaning or weight. You also move from one point to another very quickly, before the reader would even have enough information to really know what you were starting to say.

In the case that your English isn't strong, I understand the inherent flaws in my attempt to point out problems in English... but that is an unavoidable problem haha!

Not that great a review, but won't neg. Needs way more detail.

While Dismantling Devotion is a good album, it's no classic. While there were parts on the album which I would call classic, some parts were rather lackluster, which dragged it down imo. But I'm by no means a fan of the genre, very samey. They haven't reached their fullest potential yet. Atleast, I hope.

Album Rating: 3.0

try using appropriate vocabulary. be sure what a word means before you use it.

also try to make it a more interesting read rather than it flowing like a newspaper article. i'm sure there is much more to this EP than just their lyrics and amazing riffs. try describing the music more