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User
Reviews 3
Approval 41%
Album Ratings 3
Last Active 10-09-17 3:07 am
Joined 10-09-17
Review Comments 0
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NF, Spite, Linkin Park, Woodkid, Of Monsters and Men, Icon For Hire, Nonpoint, Paramore, The Neighbourhood, Chelsea Grin, Attila, Thousand Below, Eligh,
 | TheSonomaDude Sorry for the late response man. Honestly, the review isn't awful, it just needed some tweaks. First, I'd just make sure to separate each paragraph, the way it looks now makes it come off as a giant blob of text that's very unappealing to the eye. Next, make sure to use the correct homophones and to closely examine your sentence fluidity. Just keep trying because you're close to something good :)
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 | BlackMalachite Hey man! It's no worries, one of the things that was shaky was the formatting. Labeling sections with "Lyrics" "Instrumentation" and such, looks a bit clunky and unprofessional. You're better off just typing out in base paragraph form.
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 | Lucman Hey man. I thought your review was great but yeah really wasn't a fan of that album. Songs like "My Life" and "Know" are almost unlistenable to me and when there is 16 tracks with little to no variation it can get awfully tedious. Again, just my thoughts on it. I loved Mansion and liked some of Therapy Session but Perception fails for me.
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 | Cygnatti i was referring to the artist NF, not you lol. you seem new here, you should comment and do some more reviews. :]
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