Album Rating: 4.0
First review all criticism and advice is appreciated. I'm going to go ahead and assume that this review is bad due to it being my first.
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learn how to use "you're"
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Album Rating: 4.0
oops small typo
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"oops small typo"
I DECLARE WAR.. jk
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please learn the difference between "its" and "it's"
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this is a new vocalist? i wouldn't have noticed..
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Album Rating: 4.0
small typos lol you'll live, but i'll fix them because I love you
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Album Rating: 2.0
Did you read this one outloud to yourself? There are some awkward sentences here and there. I've made this run-on sound less awkward and split the sentences up.
"This self-titled release also possesses something the previous album did not have, which is atmosphere. Throughout the multiple listens I couldn't help but feel this album would be what the apocalypse would sound like, absolutely devastating and maintaining an overall eerie feel."
Summary: If it ain't broke, blast beat the f*** out of it.
"Additionally, the album has quite a few memorable moments whether it be the opening of 'Misery Cloud' "They came, they f***ing conquered" or the "iced f***ing Earth," the main hook on Human Waste."
Personally I wouldn't include lyrics in the review itself unless given a quote box of text further, just a preference I suppose.
"An aspect of the band that really made these standout moments for me is the new vocalist who sounds like a mix between Oceano and Molotov Solution."
You should probably mention he is the ex-vocalist of Those Who Lie Beneath.
"The guitars are heavy and have the typical I Declare War sound, but at times can be excessively chuggy which I don't mind that much."
Bad idea to talk about what you like, describe the sound and not if you mind it or not.
"This album doesn't do anything to reinvent deathcore, but it does do a lot of things right. If you are a deathcore fan you're probably going to like or even love this album. If you're not a fan of deathcore you're probably just going to think this is a fairly average release."
Really overused statement on deathcore reviews, probably should avoid this in the future.
Hope I helped bro, stick around and write some more reviews.
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i declare terrible
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Album Rating: 4.0
@Carnifex Thanks for the advice. I didn't know he was the ex vocalist of Those Who Lie Beneath, I just knew that he was the new vocalist for I Declare War.
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Dece review btw. :D
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Album Rating: 4.0
Thanks :D Most likely gonna write another one tomorrow. I'll definitely take more time on it and iron out some of the kinks I had in this one.
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Sweet, I'll read it when it drops.
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Album Rating: 2.0
yeah no problem man, I don't write a lot of reviews but I like helping out the new guys.
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Album Rating: 4.0
If it drops gotta pick an album first, maybe Grieves - Together/Apart since it doesn't have a review yet
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"This album doesn't do anything to reinvent deathcore, but It does do a lot things right. If you are a deathcore fan your probably going to like or even love this album. If you're not a fan of deathcore your probably just going to think this is a fairly average release."
one of the most cliche things I've ever read
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Album Rating: 4.0
Cliche but for the most part true
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Album Rating: 2.0
80% of this genre in a nutshell tbh.
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HiLion's true statement about his true statements is true.
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I do declare
Digging: The World is a Beautiful Place And... - Whenever, If Ever
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