The Paper Chase Someday This Could All Be Yours Vol.1

Album Rating: 5

Let me know any mistakes/awkwardness. My spell checker is broken and stuff.

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

good review, could be better though. but we agree on a lot of the same points on the album, especially the lyrics (and you chose my favorite one too). Only mistake(?) I caught: "experimenting with progressions". Doesn't make sense really; could be "experimenting with strange chord progressions" or something like that. Or maybe I'm just not getting what you mean. Keep reviewing.

Uh oh, might have to check this out!

Digging: Porter Robinson - Spitfire

Digging: Porter Robinson - Spitfire

Album Rating: 5

Fixed that part. I still don't understand how you don't know what the word 'progressions' implied. Fixed now though so it's all good.

For sure Cirq, this album rules.

Album Rating: 5

Some small grammar mistakes here and there. I gues it should've been listening to an orchestra at the end of the 2nd paragraph. Also, for everyone's death.

Secondly, it's a good thing to throw in some names of musicians. Like in ...his voice isn't always in tune, what does 'his' refer to? I know, but the readers? Not exactly.

Digging: Hawk Eyes - Ideas

Digging: Hawk Eyes - Ideas

Album Rating: 5

I'll go fix those problems now. I don't know what you mean by "evereyone's death" though. Thanks for the find.

Just felt this album needed another review, no one was putting their hand up to do it, So I did.

Album Rating: 4.5

Best of 09' for me. Glad to see another review, definitely check this out cirq!

Album Rating: 5

Ah. Sorry for that. I was only thinking about an apostrophe.

Yeah. This album/band needs more attention for sure. Therefore, your review is very welcome.

Album Rating: 5

2nd best for me. =)

Thanks greg, I'll get on it. I thought you meant there was a spelling mistake.

Will check out.

Digging: Haggard - Eppur Si Muove

Review is awkward, doesn't address the music beyond some genre labels. Your wording seems rushed, and
it doesn't read like it's been reviewed before publishing.

(bitter because you stole my reviewing glory)

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

oh, yeah, progressive elements makes a lot more sense. my bad.

Album Rating: 5

@Avirov No need to be bitter because I reviewed an album you wanted to review, go review it if you want, it's not like I'm stopping you. That's very bad reasoning behind your motives if that's the case.

However, I'm very interested in your criticism in which you have described. Care to elaborate a bit more? I don't see how this review is a bunch of genre labels since I spent the time to go into the general feel and focus on the strong emphasis on the world ending which this album seems to ooze out through it's somewhat evilness and lyrics which is the main point.

Sure I went out and called it "Evil Indie Pop" and I was unsure on whether I should include that in the review when I wrote it since I'm not a fan of making up genres. The main reason I kept it is because some people, when reading reviews like to have implementation of genres because that's just how they are.

I'd much prefer you let me atone for the issues you have from this review as I really enjoy this album and I would like it to be an easy read, so further advice is much appreciated.

First paragraph is too informal, needs more examples, and should have less vague commentary. Second paragraph doesn't say enough to justify being there. The rest is just generally too informal and awkward. When I read this out loud I have to pause and look back.

Album Rating: 5

Fair enough. I'm not a formal reviewer at all. I will clean this up when I have the time as I do see what you're saying about the flow of it in some parts and I could of worded some things differently.

The more reviews, the more this band will get noticed though. My main reason I jumped in and reviewed it. I was still unsure if you were reviewing it. I'm sure yours will be better anyway, I'm not really suited to reviewing. =)

Well I definitely can't disagree with that. Especially not with a band as innovative as The Paper Chase.

Album Rating: 4.5

My first review would probably be similiar to this, though i've been here three years and still havent written one haha. Looking forward to your review Avirov, if you do do it.

I've been saying I would write a review on this for a long time, but ever since another one sprung up,
I've become determined to write a standout review, and it's taking really long because pulling my
thoughts together on an album this dense and cryptic is fucking hard.

fucking just getting into this. onto 2nd listen and hitting me like a ton of bricks. this will make a massive late play for AOTY

Album Rating: 5

Sweet as. That's the whole reason I made this review for. Very very very fucking underlooked. One more rating will get it into the charts at about 4th or 5th for the year.

I'm sure it's 20 votes before it gets on there.

All I can say is...

ALL OF THE BEAUTIFUL BODIES