CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | I appreciate it guys. I'm wanted to really perfect the sound I want to create so I'm confident with everyones feedback I can get there. |
mindleviticus
08.06.12 | sounds sweet. is the volume meant to sound a little distorted? if not, maybe you should turn the master volume down a bit. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | also keep in mind that the production phase isn't complete yet. With everyone feedback I may make some needed adjust like lowering the bass guitar levels down a bit and I noticed when I played it on my car speakers I had to turn the treble up a tad. I personally enjoy heavy bass in my rock but I may still bring it down a bit. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | thanks for the feedback mind, yea that fuzz or buzz is not intentional, that's actually from the high bass levels, the master is actually fine because I want people to be able to really bump it if they wish to so dropping the bass levels will solve that problem. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | def check this song Riff, I can you digging it. It's diff from my previous work.
Also feedback on the drums would be greatly appreciate. They are not programmed, they are manually performed live with a drum kit link to my keyboard. |
TheNotrap
08.06.12 | Cool vibe man, congrats.
In my humble opinion you should go step by step. First create a solid music structure and then the leads. I miss a solid riff here. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | That's good feedback Notrap, I appreciate that, yea a lot of the other stuff on the album will be like that, per my mentioned in the feature paragraph, This was more of a jam rock kind of song with a more raw productive style. But yes I agree I def wouldn't make every song off this in this same structure. |
seedofnothing
08.06.12 | Track is solid and I love the melodies. I agree bass could be lowered a bit but the reverb on the guitar sounds great and the raw feel is definitely there.
I look forward to your future release. This could be really enjoyable. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | Thanks man, for the feedback. Yea I double reverb laced the guitar to get it to sound like that. I wanted it to have a bit of dissonant feel. |
Scoot
08.06.12 | good job sir that was most enjoyable |
seedofnothing
08.06.12 | Regarding the drums: yeah I like the vibe to them, I can't really stand programmed drums so much so I'm glad you did the manuel ones.
"I miss a solid riff here"
@Notrap - I personnally see several solid riffs here, such as 1:34, bass riff at 1:58, 2:23 is a super sick solid riff, 3:40 harmonizing riff, 4:06 sick, 6:25 bass riff. That's more solid riffs then I typically get in rock so I'm happy.
Good job Captain. It's cool to see you playing different styles and staying solid. That's the mark of a true artist. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | @Scoot - cool thanks man, I'm sure you dig this as you're the original youtube shredder huh
@Seed - thanks man I agree, manual drums are much better, and cool thanks for noticing those specific moments you mentioned. |
JamieTwort
08.06.12 | Gonna check this later. I'll let you know what I think. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | Koo thanks JT :] |
SgtPepper
08.06.12 | Pretty lo-fi compared to the album. The guitar work is excellent, its got a very trippy vibe. |
CaptainDooRight
08.06.12 | cool, yeah that was goal Paper, I wanted it to have that raw feel of the old school rock styles and even a blend of stoner-rock/sludge
but it's just one track, not all will be like this, but it's just a really fun project, more like a hobby so when it's done I'll be posting it up |
JamieTwort
08.07.12 | Really cool track, loving the old school vibe of the production although I do agree that there is a little too much "fuzz" although it does seem to fit the music to some extent. The melodic guitar playing is excellent, there seems to be a lot of feeling and emotion conveyed through it. Great job bro, can't wait to hear the full album. |
CaptainDooRight
08.07.12 | Hell yeah JT you're the man! Thanks for the feedback and yea it's a simple adjustment, all I have to do is lower the bass levels and any fuzz will be gone. I can't wait to share bro. Again thanks for getting back to me bro :] |
Shuyin
08.07.12 | sounds pretty cool, cap.
im making a song too, on FL, doomy shit.. gonna suck hard :D |
CaptainDooRight
08.07.12 | Thanks bro doom sounds pretty cool can't wait to hear it man
What is FL? |
Shuyin
08.07.12 | Fruity Loops, its a great program to write some tunes.
even tho the guitar samples suck ass and its hard as hell to learn. |
CaptainDooRight
08.07.12 | oh yeah i remember you mentioning that to me once before, cool man, can't wait to hear what you do
i've personally never used fruity loops before
doom sounds like a fun genre to jam |
Shuyin
08.07.12 | its fun alright but its hard as hell to compose some dark funeral doom with that grimm atmosphere, imo.
anyway, cheers cap. good luck with this stuff youre really kicking it man m/ |
CaptainDooRight
08.07.12 | thanks bro, you too man and keep my posted hard, can't wait to here it |
DarthMann
08.07.12 | fl sucks man |
CaptainDooRight
08.07.12 | i had a friend who used it back in the days and he said it was good because i think it might be free or what not but compared to professional programs yeah it prolly fails in comparison, what do you use darth |
