witchxrapist
12.21.13 | 5/5 album art cause Crossbearer didn't have album art on any of their EP's.
my ego travels on crutches
sleep walk dreams; bodies of water
cause i'm drifting into nothing
and my mind's been floating away
and who owns what of the ocean?
and aren't we all just souls in the sea?
and what of the others lost in the waters?
and how lost can they really be?
i need to find a solution
for all the problems encountering me
or i'll be ripped out with the tide
because nobody's answering my pleas
it feels so strange
to pick up the pieces
of a person that you're fucking
so desperate to be
i've been down and out
i'd give anything
just to change the mundanity of my days |
Relinquished
12.21.13 | needs more oceanic metaphorz
and i think i got 3 cuz of you a while back, it's cool |
witchxrapist
12.21.13 | Crossbearer is seriously the most underrated band in that vein... and I should probably should write a verse about starfish and crustaceans cause yolo. |
witchxrapist
12.21.13 | FUCKIN POOFS CRITIQUE THIS SHIT |
jdennis31
12.21.13 | i liked it. not sure what critique I can offer. write me lyrics for my songs and i'll credit you. thanks. |
jdennis31
12.21.13 | it will be credited as witchxrapist though. |
zakalwe
12.21.13 | "It feels so strange to pick up the pieces of a person you are fucking"
Jesus did they explode when you stuck it in?
"So desperate to be"
Quite good that. |
witchxrapist
12.21.13 | hahahahahha |
witchxrapist
12.21.13 | jdennis the thing about writing lyrics for other people is everything i write is personal and i have trouble motivating myself to write as is idk its weird |
jdennis31
12.21.13 | yea, i was sort of kidding. been trying to write lyrics lately but it's real hard, everything just sounds dumb and cheezy.
you should think up another word for mundanity. too many syllables or something, breaks up the flow. or it might just be the way i'm reading it. |
witchxrapist
12.21.13 | it works well with the ending ill post this when i record vox
but on the scratch recording i did omit the just hmmm
|
InbredJed
12.21.13 | Good on ya mate |
TomArnoldsArmpit
12.22.13 | eh I don't like it |
witchxrapist
12.23.13 | fuck you |
TomArnoldsArmpit
12.23.13 | so defensive. must be all that angst that seep through your childish lyrics. chin up, kiddo. things do get better |
Polyethylene
12.23.13 | Are you 14? |
witchxrapist
12.23.13 | pit fuck you bro lets go meet me at the swingset ill fight you irl |