UnnamedOcean: Critique My Music

UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Link is above. So far I'm going for a very layered, heavily sidechained, ambient style.
SupercolliderMusic 03.01.13	I love it. "Marrella" was my favorite.
UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Thanks, that one is definitely the weirdest song I have done. Most of my other stuff is more like the first two tracks.
CaptainDooRight 03.01.13	sweet bro, I'll have to def give this a listen. I'm at work right now but when I get home I'll try to give it a listen asap.
UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Sup cap'n. Tell me what you think (:
CaptainDooRight 03.01.13	hey bro, just chillin, I sure will I've always loved your music so...
UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Also have a soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/f4wn5
MikeC26 03.01.13	sounds good dude! the recordings seem a bit nasally in the upper register, do you hi-cut eq at all?
StallionMang 03.01.13	That was fantastic! I swear I could feel the album art moving along with the music. Excellent, and a step in the right direction for sure!
UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Thanks guys! Yeah, I'm not too knowledgeable about mixing, so I probably messed something up with the EQ. Which song did you notice that on? Luckily a good friend of mine is majoring in production, so I'm gonna get him to master for me.
MikeC26 03.01.13	Yeah, I've been working on mixing a lot of my own stuff, it's an art form in itself! The last song, Marella sounds pretty harsh in the high end to my ears. I'm sure a simple hi-cut eq on the instruments that are copious in that range would do the trick! Other than that I dig the production a lot
UnnamedOcean 03.01.13	Okay I'll keep that in mind, I agree that song is a bit harsh.
CaptainDooRight 03.01.13	Really cool tracks here bro. Definitely WAY different than your past material. Like SupercolliderMusic I dug 'Marrella' the most but each track was tasty and had its own flavor. Everything about the music was solid and although there were common ambient qualities that were used your use of layering was delicious. Also, the subtle mood-crescendos are pleasurable. I also agree with Mike. The high end[treble to be exact] would gel better if it was reduced a bit because at high volumes it can sometimes be ear piercing. However, to be more specific, you may not want to lower the entire tracks high end because this may depreciate certain track layers that don't need altering. Rather, only focus on the layers that are causing the high end distress and you should be perfectly good.
UnnamedOcean 03.02.13	Thanks for the pointers! I'm working on my third and final demo now, so I'll fix up some of those things and then start thinking about a debut EP. It's funny you say it's so different than my past material, because technically all these songs are older.
UnnamedOcean 03.02.13	To be more specific, they were all discarded Wolves in Aramid tunes.
CaptainDooRight 03.02.13	Interesting, I didn't have that prior knowledge.
Scoot 03.02.13	liked
UnnamedOcean 03.02.13	:o)