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Old 11-09-2010, 02:04 PM   #1
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this

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these are but sagas for lovers and haters in love
who love to hate but are in hate with love

these poems

of couples who exist to exist
and to redefine Is

these are but stories for the sons of bleary eyed fathers
who tread the same threads across dilated garters

and heroic stoics be proud!
these are but fables of folly
and of transparent whim

of hunters’ beguilement
of huntresses’ quim

of mechanical males who practise old tricks

these are but tales of maidens and heads
of neverending aims nevertheless transfixed

these are but poems
of Envy and Trust

poems that unbe the unfair
for the sake of unlove

and while mechanical feelers probe seas of flesh dealers
and reels of film cast doubts of Enough

these are still
but poems of Trust
is garbage
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:05 PM   #2
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MA in English
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:05 PM   #3
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of hunters’ beguilement
of huntresses’ quim

of mechanical males who practise old tricks

these are but tales of maidens and heads
of neverending aims nevertheless transfixed
kill yourself
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:14 PM   #4
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All Aliens allign along an axis.

Spinning selflessley supressing screams.

Tolerating total tasteless tasks.

Descending, diluting drastic dreams.

Waiting while we wake.

Wishing we wouldn't wage wars.

People perpetuating pompus postures.

While wearing withered waists.

Hips happily helping/humping heroes held high.

Destroying delicate deitys.

Bowing before blatant brutes.

Bending beside blasting bombs.

Terror tested today.

Eyes eyeing everything.

Ignorantly irrationally irritated.

Attacking All Alienated Aliens.
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:16 PM   #5
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well that's pretty dumb but at least you probably know that
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:18 PM   #6
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All Aliens allign along an axis.

Spinning selflessley supressing screams.

Tolerating total tasteless tasks.

Descending, diluting drastic dreams.

Waiting while we wake.

Wishing we wouldn't wage wars.

People perpetuating pompus postures.

While wearing withered waists.

Hips happily helping/humping heroes held high.

Destroying delicate deitys.

Bowing before blatant brutes.

Bending beside blasting bombs.

Terror tested today.

Eyes eyeing everything.

Ignorantly irrationally irritated.

Attacking All Alienated Aliens.
Someone is still haunting the boards trying to make up lost posts.

Although I actually like this poem, if you knew how my mind worked you would understand

Hatas happily hate
Eventually everyone elevevates
Live love life.
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:19 PM   #7
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oh did you write that
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:20 PM   #8
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if you knew how my mind worked you would understand
it works in a way that creates bad "poetry" at least you're hearing this early in your burgeoning career
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:27 PM   #9
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ACKACKACKACK ACKACKACKACKing All ACKACKACKACKs
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Old 11-09-2010, 02:27 PM   #10
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::grabs some popcorn for the roast::

Who we cookin?
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Old 11-09-2010, 07:26 PM   #11
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your taking the time to post means more than you think
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Old 11-09-2010, 07:47 PM   #12
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