Band/Lyrics Promotion Thread: Post your band, get critiques! - Page 3

Starar · 05-11-2010, 06:42 AM

Starar
Pop/Urban/Soul
http://www.myspace.com/stararband
Starar are a sibling duo and we have a new album coming out, 'Who'. Our music is urban/pop/rock/soul with songs similar to Lady Gaga, Alicia Keys, Pixie Lott etc. I play guitar, keyboards and sing, and Steven is the drummer and bassist. We both write the songs and perform everything.

Give our music a listen and let me know hat you think. Our album is available for pre-order through Amazon aswell.

witchxrapist · 05-11-2010, 07:29 AM

Father
Depressive/atmospheric black metal

Me and my one friend just u no grimdarkin it up. Lyrics are introspective I guess idk.

http://www.mediafire.com/?thndznwhwyt

boobooi · 05-11-2010, 11:20 PM

Band name-Dylan Panek
Genre-PSYCHEDELIC/PROG ROCK
www.myspace.com/psytrious
www.youtube.com/boobooi
I am an independent artist who writes and records all the music myself.I also play all the instruments for my songs.They are pink floyd/jimi hendrix sounding.
Lyrics-None

calthephenom · 05-16-2010, 02:36 PM

here's my entry
"...We're Going" by 'Spassm', my band
mind giving critique?
i may redux the vocals, fyi
http://spassm.bandcamp.com/track/were-going

calthephenom · 05-16-2010, 02:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by boobooi

Band name-Dylan Panek
Genre-PSYCHEDELIC/PROG ROCK
www.myspace.com/psytrious
www.youtube.com/boobooi
I am an independent artist who writes and records all the music myself.I also play all the instruments for my songs.They are pink floyd/jimi hendrix sounding.
Lyrics-None

pretty nice, produced professionally.
pretty trippy, actually.
damn nice.
also, you really shouldn't charge people for this stuff, take the NIN way =D
on a side note, how did you get this up on itunes? i was reading about it on some tuts, but couldn't figure it out

Elmo McCheese · 06-10-2010, 10:42 PM

Havent been on this forum in years but heres some new **** i wanted to show off. My friends and I casually recorded these three songs over our winter break (on acid for a good part of the time lol)

theyre all decent but i like the 2nd two better, the first needs a rerecording and ****

http://myspace.com/ilovespacegoat

appreciate any comments a lot <3

Meninx · 06-17-2010, 04:37 AM

Hi Guys,

Just signed up. Info provided below:

Band name : Meninx
Genre : Hip-Hop/Rap/Spoken Word/Alternative
myspace: www.myspace.com/meninxmusic
Small description: emotions/outlooks/opinions/regrets...

Meninx

idantelaviv · 06-21-2010, 11:08 PM

This a song i wrote about the crap we hear on the radio sometimes.
I'd love to have your opinion:
Visit this link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CY2UbPXxsYY

bizzly_beanstalk · 06-25-2010, 09:09 AM

Obie - Liverpool UK

jusat signed up, so thought id show a few of my oldest tracks
i now do vocals to electro/funky/scouse house in the dance genre

these 2 are from back in the day along with a remix of one

http://www.myspace.com/scousemadness

Precipice · 11-29-2010, 10:13 PM

Precipice
Heavy Metal/Hardcore
http://www.reverbnation.com/precipice
We self released a demo and due to not having a whole lot of money we didn't have access to high quality recording equipment. However we did get interest from a few small record labels from it and we'll be signing a contract in January. With that said I was wondering if we could get a critique on our demo's musical and lyrical aspects (as well as any other lyrics on our blog you happen to want to critique), so that we can have an even better album release when the time comes.
Lyrics- http://precipicemetal.blogspot.com

witchxrapist · 12-05-2010, 08:21 PM

We need a mod again.

rachymie · 01-01-2011, 12:43 AM

Hi there,
where's the best place to post new music??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4Q7Rpd4ias

voodoosteve · 01-18-2011, 03:26 PM

Band name: Voodoo Steve
Genre: Hard Rock, Alternative
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Voodoo-Steve-Band-Page/
We're trying to bring back guitar-driven rock to the mainstream.
Lyrics:

Take All I Can Get

The scene for chicks ain't so hot today
But I think I got an excuse
They can't believe that I am cool
It is all just a clever ruse

So I'm on the market and I'm
Desperate for someone to come
Even if it's bad or just sex
I'm just waiting to have some fun

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

The scene for love ain't so hot today
I'm afraid that I'll have to go
I don't care if you cheat on me
Just baby never let me know

I'm housebroken and come in style
And if you hurt me it's okay
I'll never have enough of pain
I'm never gonna make you pay

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

And in that small window of time
I'll be yours and you'll be mine
We can share our lives together
And if you dump me then it's fine

(solo)

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

I'll take all I can get
Even if she is a slut
I'll take all I can get
I hate being in this rut

I'll take all I can get
Even if she's in an episode
I'll take all I can get
I'm so ready to bear the load

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

Haryer · 03-04-2011, 02:06 PM

accualy i am not....i just dont like them.
i do like punk, but i also saw the who and eric clapton last summer....
ANd jello kicks as.s.....but no i am not punk and i do not try to be one...but i do go to shows and support the scene...
but your just mad becasue i dont like your band, get over it

Canon · 03-23-2011, 10:18 PM

hey my bands called Eyes on Skies!
check out this song lol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81mOjOrm2DY&feature=channel_video_title

and if you want to download our ep free (legally): www.noisetrade.com/eyesonskies

BringMeTheWaffles. · 03-28-2011, 08:49 AM

Hey! I know it's a little late, but let's try this out.
Band:This Glorious Tragedy
Genre:Metalcore
Link: www.myspace.com/thisglorioustragedy
www.facebook.com/thisglorioustragedy
Song: As The Bridges Burn
Lyrics: I actually don't know them, and I'm fairly certian our singer doesnt either.
But, we've gotten a better screamer since the EP was recorded, and we'll be going to a new producer soon.

ShopLocal · 04-17-2011, 12:48 PM

i'm a big fan of unsigned music so can i post a few gems i've uncovered?

sellmetheroad · 04-18-2011, 11:19 PM

http://www.facebook.com/desertersmusic
http://www.soundcloud.com/deserters

Broken Knuckles and No One's Proud:

(You failed yourself)
I spit in every mouth that offered help
(We all lost out)
I've broken both my hands just beating myself
(Everyday)
Another mountain blocks the son from my eyes.
(I can't see)
A reason to keep up this joke of a life.

Fuck you, look me in the fucking eyes.
I refuse to be beaten by myself.
So alone, I don't believe my only own lies.
I'd smash you, the reflection's gone,
but I can only
see
hate
clearer
than it's ever been before.
I've lost every battle to end the war.

Broken knuckles and no one's proud.
Shattered glass,
Shattered glass and no one's proud.

Spec · 05-05-2011, 02:26 PM

Plant a little seed and nature grows
Niagara falls and the pyramids
Everything you believed in as kids
Fucking rainbows after it rains
there's enough miracles here to blow your brains
I fed a fish to a pelican at Frisco bay
It tried to eat my cell phone, he ran away

illska90 · 07-17-2011, 02:40 PM

I need feedback please, if you'd be so kind

the album is already out but we're starting to record again as soon as we've rehearsed the new songs ... so any review of the mix, sound, song, lyrics or whatever comes to mind would be greatly aprecciated

http://soundcloud.com/danarbed/understanding-the-freedom-1

Understanding the Freedom

Understanding now how it is
I can and I will do whatever I please
Learning so much in a short amount of time
Going away these feelings that suffocate

Can't you see? Or more like “Can't you hear?”
I'm wide awake, though I may
not be here but I am someplace else,
Where you'll probably never see

Happiness tires me
I'm not afraid, but I am drained
I know my soul is deflated
I'll get some music and recharge it.
I am free to stay happy
Stay living, keep dying.
I could do anything
I'm free to do anything

Don't want what I need
Don't need what I want
I can see myself bleed
From poor decisions and circumstance

I'm so glad, I'm not sad, it isn't any fun
Goodbye stress I'll miss you less, than night misses the sun.
Learning to use and falling in love with freedom
I'm afraid when I open my eyes all this will be gone

It's all so easy now
'Cause I know exactly how...
Know what to say
Finding my way
There's only today
No fucking yesterday!

05-11-2010, 06:42 AM	#41
Starar Registered User Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1	New duo: Starar Starar Pop/Urban/Soul http://www.myspace.com/stararband Starar are a sibling duo and we have a new album coming out, 'Who'. Our music is urban/pop/rock/soul with songs similar to Lady Gaga, Alicia Keys, Pixie Lott etc. I play guitar, keyboards and sing, and Steven is the drummer and bassist. We both write the songs and perform everything. Give our music a listen and let me know hat you think. Our album is available for pre-order through Amazon aswell.

06-17-2010, 04:37 AM	#47
Meninx Registered User Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 1	Meninx- UK Artist Hi Guys, Just signed up. Info provided below: Band name : Meninx Genre : Hip-Hop/Rap/Spoken Word/Alternative myspace: www.myspace.com/meninxmusic Small description: emotions/outlooks/opinions/regrets... Meninx

06-21-2010, 11:08 PM	#48
idantelaviv Registered User Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 2	fed up with mainstream music on the radio? This a song i wrote about the crap we hear on the radio sometimes. I'd love to have your opinion: Visit this link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CY2UbPXxsYY

06-25-2010, 09:09 AM	#49
bizzly_beanstalk Obie Von Beanstalk Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 2	My samples Obie - Liverpool UK jusat signed up, so thought id show a few of my oldest tracks i now do vocals to electro/funky/scouse house in the dance genre these 2 are from back in the day along with a remix of one http://www.myspace.com/scousemadness

01-01-2011, 12:43 AM	#52
rachymie rachymie Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Australia Posts: 2	New Music, Hi there, where's the best place to post new music?? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4Q7Rpd4ias

05-11-2010, 07:29 AM	#42
witchxrapist spuitnuk pls Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 610 Posts: 39,864	Father Depressive/atmospheric black metal Me and my one friend just u no grimdarkin it up. Lyrics are introspective I guess idk. http://www.mediafire.com/?thndznwhwyt

05-11-2010, 11:20 PM	#43
boobooi Registered User Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 6	Band name-Dylan Panek Genre-PSYCHEDELIC/PROG ROCK www.myspace.com/psytrious www.youtube.com/boobooi I am an independent artist who writes and records all the music myself.I also play all the instruments for my songs.They are pink floyd/jimi hendrix sounding. Lyrics-None

05-16-2010, 02:36 PM	#44
calthephenom Registered User Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 2	here's my entry "...We're Going" by 'Spassm', my band mind giving critique? i may redux the vocals, fyi http://spassm.bandcamp.com/track/were-going

06-10-2010, 10:42 PM	#46
Elmo McCheese I are a serious cat Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Wintersun is the best metal band. Posts: 733	Havent been on this forum in years but heres some new ** i wanted to show off. My friends and I casually recorded these three songs over our winter break (on acid for a good part of the time lol) theyre all decent but i like the 2nd two better, the first needs a rerecording and ** http://myspace.com/ilovespacegoat appreciate any comments a lot <3

11-29-2010, 10:13 PM	#50
Precipice Cincinnati-Style Metal Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Cincinnati, Ohio Posts: 4	Precipice Heavy Metal/Hardcore http://www.reverbnation.com/precipice We self released a demo and due to not having a whole lot of money we didn't have access to high quality recording equipment. However we did get interest from a few small record labels from it and we'll be signing a contract in January. With that said I was wondering if we could get a critique on our demo's musical and lyrical aspects (as well as any other lyrics on our blog you happen to want to critique), so that we can have an even better album release when the time comes. Lyrics- http://precipicemetal.blogspot.com

12-05-2010, 08:21 PM	#51
witchxrapist spuitnuk pls Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 610 Posts: 39,864	We need a mod again.

01-18-2011, 03:26 PM	#53
voodoosteve Most Awesome Band Evar Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: New York Posts: 1	Band name: Voodoo Steve Genre: Hard Rock, Alternative http://www.facebook.com/pages/Voodoo-Steve-Band-Page/ We're trying to bring back guitar-driven rock to the mainstream. Lyrics: Take All I Can Get The scene for chicks ain't so hot today But I think I got an excuse They can't believe that I am cool It is all just a clever ruse So I'm on the market and I'm Desperate for someone to come Even if it's bad or just sex I'm just waiting to have some fun I'll take all I can get Even if it's bad I'll take all I can get Even if it drives me mad Let me hook up once or twice Then you can see I'm mighty nice For now you and me never met I'll take all I can get The scene for love ain't so hot today I'm afraid that I'll have to go I don't care if you cheat on me Just baby never let me know I'm housebroken and come in style And if you hurt me it's okay I'll never have enough of pain I'm never gonna make you pay I'll take all I can get Even if it's bad I'll take all I can get Even if it drives me mad Let me hook up once or twice Then you can see I'm mighty nice For now you and me never met I'll take all I can get And in that small window of time I'll be yours and you'll be mine We can share our lives together And if you dump me then it's fine (solo) I'll take all I can get Even if it's bad I'll take all I can get Even if it drives me mad I'll take all I can get Even if she is a slut I'll take all I can get I hate being in this rut I'll take all I can get Even if she's in an episode I'll take all I can get I'm so ready to bear the load Let me hook up once or twice Then you can see I'm mighty nice For now you and me never met I'll take all I can get

03-04-2011, 02:06 PM	#54
Haryer Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 6	Band/Lyrics Promotion Thread Post your band get critiques accualy i am not....i just dont like them. i do like punk, but i also saw the who and eric clapton last summer.... ANd jello kicks as.s.....but no i am not punk and i do not try to be one...but i do go to shows and support the scene... but your just mad becasue i dont like your band, get over it

03-23-2011, 10:18 PM	#55
Canon Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Montana Posts: 2	hey my bands called Eyes on Skies! check out this song lol http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81mOjOrm2DY&feature=channel_video_title and if you want to download our ep free (legally): www.noisetrade.com/eyesonskies

03-28-2011, 08:49 AM	#56
BringMeTheWaffles. Registered User Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 3	Hey! I know it's a little late, but let's try this out. Band:This Glorious Tragedy Genre:Metalcore Link: www.myspace.com/thisglorioustragedy www.facebook.com/thisglorioustragedy Song: As The Bridges Burn Lyrics: I actually don't know them, and I'm fairly certian our singer doesnt either. But, we've gotten a better screamer since the EP was recorded, and we'll be going to a new producer soon.

04-17-2011, 12:48 PM	#57
ShopLocal Vocal Coach Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 2	does it have to be your own band..? i'm a big fan of unsigned music so can i post a few gems i've uncovered?

04-18-2011, 11:19 PM	#58
sellmetheroad Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 1	Deserters http://www.facebook.com/desertersmusic http://www.soundcloud.com/deserters Broken Knuckles and No One's Proud: (You failed yourself) I spit in every mouth that offered help (We all lost out) I've broken both my hands just beating myself (Everyday) Another mountain blocks the son from my eyes. (I can't see) A reason to keep up this joke of a life. Fuck you, look me in the fucking eyes. I refuse to be beaten by myself. So alone, I don't believe my only own lies. I'd smash you, the reflection's gone, but I can only see hate clearer than it's ever been before. I've lost every battle to end the war. Broken knuckles and no one's proud. Shattered glass, Shattered glass and no one's proud.

05-05-2011, 02:26 PM	#59
Spec •••••• Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 969	Plant a little seed and nature grows Niagara falls and the pyramids Everything you believed in as kids Fucking rainbows after it rains there's enough miracles here to blow your brains I fed a fish to a pelican at Frisco bay It tried to eat my cell phone, he ran away
	Digging: This Will Destroy You - Young Mountain

07-17-2011, 02:40 PM	#60
illska90 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Akureyri, Iceland Posts: 3	I need feedback please, if you'd be so kind the album is already out but we're starting to record again as soon as we've rehearsed the new songs ... so any review of the mix, sound, song, lyrics or whatever comes to mind would be greatly aprecciated http://soundcloud.com/danarbed/understanding-the-freedom-1 Understanding the Freedom Understanding now how it is I can and I will do whatever I please Learning so much in a short amount of time Going away these feelings that suffocate Can't you see? Or more like “Can't you hear?” I'm wide awake, though I may not be here but I am someplace else, Where you'll probably never see Happiness tires me I'm not afraid, but I am drained I know my soul is deflated I'll get some music and recharge it. I am free to stay happy Stay living, keep dying. I could do anything I'm free to do anything Don't want what I need Don't need what I want I can see myself bleed From poor decisions and circumstance I'm so glad, I'm not sad, it isn't any fun Goodbye stress I'll miss you less, than night misses the sun. Learning to use and falling in love with freedom I'm afraid when I open my eyes all this will be gone It's all so easy now 'Cause I know exactly how... Know what to say Finding my way There's only today No fucking yesterday!

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