|03-27-2007, 08:03 PM||#1|
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Avon, IN
Challenge 124 - Voting
if u v0te 0bAma then u l0vez 0sAma
Lil' jon - i kno its a rapper shutup f00l.
Runamok pissant - 3
burton and fag - 5
gayverge - 4
bowl of chronic - 1
bigdickbob - 2
this one was actually really close for everyone.
Last edited by Littlejohn; 04-04-2007 at 07:22 PM.
|03-28-2007, 01:09 AM||#2|
Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Haha it looks like I voted on the wrong challenge.
Last edited by ATC; 03-28-2007 at 02:18 PM.
|03-28-2007, 03:30 AM||#4|
Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
bowl of oranges 4
Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 04-03-2007 at 10:49 PM.
|03-28-2007, 11:24 AM||#5|
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
4th LJ - A decent piece overall including some stand out lines and some awkward ones as well. And even though i disagree with the sumation, I liked the overall direction. 7.5
3rd RAR - Pensive, brooding, passive, what it lacks in alacrity is doubled in mood. I image this could be matched quite successfully with a synthesizer 7.8
5th B&G - I'm not fully grasping this and the change in rhythm doesnt help. By itself the 2nd stanza has a good ring to it though. 7.0
1st CONV. - Nothing left unsaid. 9
2nd BofO - Beautiful opening and what follows is almost a nice 7.8
Last edited by Bigbadbob; 03-29-2007 at 12:26 PM. Reason: good challenge.... i liked them all
|03-28-2007, 12:22 PM||#6|
Join Date: May 2005
bowl of oranges-x
Last edited by bowl of oranges; 03-29-2007 at 08:00 PM.
|03-28-2007, 03:38 PM||#7|
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: some place
RunAmokRampant-2 the piece has well developed imagery, in the form of your repeated reference to the sun. This particular piece of imagery is, however, a little repetitive. In general im not too fond of the feel of the piece, but it is a good one.
bowl of oranges-4
Bigbadbob-3 It was good mainly, but in general i found it slightly too depressing. I can hardly fault the imagery but i've heard a lot of it in some form or another before. It's good tehcnically but lacks originality
If you want crits ask me.
Last edited by burton.and.gas; 04-06-2007 at 05:31 PM.
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