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03-27-2007, 08:03 PM
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cash money
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Challenge 124 - Voting
if u v0te 0bAma then u l0vez 0sAma
Lil' jon - i kno its a rapper shutup f00l. Runamok pissant - 3 burton and fag - 5 gayverge - 4 bowl of chronic - 1 bigdickbob - 2 this one was actually really close for everyone. Last edited by Littlejohn; 04-04-2007 at 07:22 PM. |
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03-28-2007, 01:09 AM
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Thru leaves,over bridges
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Haha it looks like I voted on the wrong challenge.
Last edited by ATC; 03-28-2007 at 02:18 PM. |
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03-28-2007, 03:13 AM
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Littlejohn - 1
RunAmokRampant - 3 burton.and.gas - 5 Converge - 6 bowl of oranges - 4 Bigbadbob - 2 |
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03-28-2007, 03:30 AM
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Planeteer 4 life
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Littlejohn 2
burton.and.gas 5 Converge 3 bowl of oranges 4 Bigbadbob 1 Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 04-03-2007 at 10:49 PM. |
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03-28-2007, 11:24 AM
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Lacks Originality
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4th LJ - A decent piece overall including some stand out lines and some awkward ones as well. And even though i disagree with the sumation, I liked the overall direction. 7.5
3rd RAR - Pensive, brooding, passive, what it lacks in alacrity is doubled in mood. I image this could be matched quite successfully with a synthesizer 7.8 5th B&G - I'm not fully grasping this and the change in rhythm doesnt help. By itself the 2nd stanza has a good ring to it though. 7.0 1st CONV. - Nothing left unsaid. 9 2nd BofO - Beautiful opening and what follows is almost a nice 7.8 Last edited by Bigbadbob; 03-29-2007 at 12:26 PM. Reason: good challenge.... i liked them all |
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03-28-2007, 12:22 PM
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words.
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Littlejohn-1
RunAmokRampant-3 burton.and.gas-5 Converge-2 bowl of oranges-x Bigbadbob-4 Last edited by bowl of oranges; 03-29-2007 at 08:00 PM. |
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03-28-2007, 03:38 PM
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Registered User
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Littlejohn-1
RunAmokRampant-2 the piece has well developed imagery, in the form of your repeated reference to the sun. This particular piece of imagery is, however, a little repetitive. In general im not too fond of the feel of the piece, but it is a good one. burton.and.gas-x Converge-5 bowl of oranges-4 Bigbadbob-3 It was good mainly, but in general i found it slightly too depressing. I can hardly fault the imagery but i've heard a lot of it in some form or another before. It's good tehcnically but lacks originality If you want crits ask me. Last edited by burton.and.gas; 04-06-2007 at 05:31 PM. |
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03-30-2007, 12:20 AM
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space
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1. Littlejohn
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