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Old 01-07-2007, 02:21 AM   #31
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You want some critique on your piece? It's fucking disgusting. Never write something like that again. Ever. I don't mean to sound like Pat Robertson, but it's so damn immoral...and I nearly puked. Penises in bleeding eye sockets? Go to your nearest mental hospital, you sick wackjob. Ew.
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Old 01-07-2007, 02:31 AM   #32
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Its not so much that its sick, its just attentioon seeking

LOOK HOW DISGUSTING I CAN BE ZOMG

just makes it boring. Its not even dark, its just so over the top that it gets ridiculous. Not really much good I'm afraid.

And on top of that, the descriptions were bland, there was a lack of finesse to the writing and you seemed content to match boring nouns with boring verbs.
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Old 01-07-2007, 02:57 PM   #33
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DeadReligion, you obviously aren't familair with Death Metal, Pornogrind, Goregrind, etc. My lyrics are tame in comparison to many of the bands that produce such a lyrics.

Now Surf, thank you for some critisism. That's what I was looking for. I'm not realy into changing the topic of the song, but I can see what you were going for when you said the nouns and verbs were boring. Next song I write I'll try to be more descriptive and use a bit less-simpleton words.
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Old 01-07-2007, 03:01 PM   #34
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Death metal is terrible. People that need to sing about cutting girls' eyes out and fucking their empty sockets belong in a mental home. Not on stages as role models for children. They shouldn't be that close to children.
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Old 01-07-2007, 03:05 PM   #35
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OK let's make a thread about it and discuss it there please...
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Old 01-07-2007, 04:09 PM   #36
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Well I'm finding myself offended. Cause one guy doesn't like a respectable genre of music I get my thread banned. I think that's a bit unjust.
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Old 01-07-2007, 09:24 PM   #37
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It's not banned, just closed.

Feel free to discuss in the thread I opened.
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Old 01-11-2007, 02:45 PM   #38
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Old 01-16-2007, 10:31 PM   #39
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Ban this duche....
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Old 01-20-2007, 08:56 AM   #40
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=510962
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=510774

Wrong forums and stuff.
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Old 01-20-2007, 09:25 AM   #41
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Old 01-20-2007, 09:54 AM   #42
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thanks man
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Old 02-18-2007, 09:12 AM   #43
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=512955

Might as well close it, its gone beyond real crits and its just there for the lulz now.

Also this one:

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=513756

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Old 02-28-2007, 10:23 AM   #44
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Old 03-13-2007, 02:11 PM   #45
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hey local S&L mod please move this

please

oh right we don't have a new mod how bad
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Old 03-18-2007, 03:44 AM   #46
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Old 03-19-2007, 09:12 PM   #47
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I've been campaigning for you to be mod for months.

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Old 04-05-2007, 03:24 AM   #48
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Hey, finally a post that's not complaining about something.

Long time reading, first time asker. I've got a question about multi-sectioned songs(example: Green Day's "Jesus of Suburbia," and "Homecoming") where it's like five songs put together into one larger bit.

I've been working on a few of them, and I'd like to bounce the lyrics to them off of people here, but I didn't want to seem like I was just trying to "get around" rules. It's seriously intended to be one multi-sectioned song, but I don't want to rub people the wrong way and think I'm a jerk.

So what's the thoughts on this? Do I perhaps have to crit one song for at least each section?
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Old 04-05-2007, 03:26 AM   #49
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If it's über long probably it'll be full of one-liner comment,s that's why I prefer to section even the long songs. But if you want to do it go ahead.

It's not like people care about this section of the forums anymore.
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Old 04-07-2007, 02:35 AM   #50
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It's blasphemy that there's not more action around here... Truely is.

So question two; Is this forum strictly for just posting lyrics for critiquing or could a topic possibly consist of a discussion about certain items of interest? Like, concept albums or something. (cough, no I don't have anything specific in mind, what would make you think that?!, cough)
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Old 04-07-2007, 03:07 AM   #51
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No man, you can talk about pretty much anything, as long as it involves lyrics/poetry/books whatever, but we try to keep things music related/word related, for purpose sake.

You can use community thread for anything else you want to talk about.

Otherwise it's an open forum.
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Old 04-07-2007, 04:00 AM   #52
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Is it alright to create a topic purely for the discussion, or am I to restrict it to the Community Thread?
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Old 04-07-2007, 03:50 PM   #53
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If it's related to what I said go ahead.

Otherwise if you feel like discussing pancakes, for instance, go to the CT.
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Old 04-08-2007, 07:06 AM   #54
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I think Mitch posted a song in several parts. A new one every few days after he'd gotten a few crits. Seemed to work well.

Disscussion-wise, why not? Its not as though we've got a mod to close it.

Speaking of which, could a mod close please? just stupid.

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=520047
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Old 04-25-2007, 05:21 PM   #55
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Why can't I post a new thread?
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Old 04-25-2007, 05:25 PM   #56
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cuz u r nub
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Old 04-26-2007, 03:47 AM   #57
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-.- dude ur fag

it says:

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so I'm like, wtf?
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Old 04-26-2007, 07:25 AM   #58
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You have to wait a couple days before posting a thread.
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Old 04-28-2007, 01:41 PM   #59
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Tojes! There is a crisis in the forum!

There's like ten threads by one guy, and it is getting in the way of my forum enjoyment!

Would you be a darling and close a few (or all of them I dunno)?
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Old 04-28-2007, 02:41 PM   #60
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Sure sorry hadn't seen them.

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