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Lacks Originality
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
Posts: 1,356
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CHALLENGE #104 SKIM (ends Mar13)
SKIM
v. skimmed, skim·ming, skims v. tr. To remove floating matter from (a liquid). To remove (floating matter) from a liquid. To take away the choicest or most readily attainable contents or parts from. To coat or cover with or as if with a thin layer, as of scum. To throw so as to bounce or slide: skimming stones on the pond. To glide or pass quickly and lightly over or along (a surface). See Synonyms at brush1. To read or glance through (a book, for example) quickly or superficially. Slang. To fail to declare part of (certain income, such as winnings) to avoid tax payment. |
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Safe spot. Warm spots.
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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GREAT GOOGA-MOOGA!
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Desolation Row, London
Posts: 16,337
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YOU CAN'T SKIM STONES IN YOUR BEER
The hippies want free love and the punks want free hate But it's no longer '77, and was it ever really '68? I fight the power every morning by waking up late As I'd rather smash sobriety than ever try to smash the state Because I'm happy as a Great War soldier on MDMA And my mercy seat is just a broken cubicle door away The pause button's broken so I have to let the CD play That's a bad metaphor for life but I like it so it'll stay Do you remember being a pre-teen tearaway? When everything adults said was just a white noise hiss But you can't watch the sky when you need your senses dulled And you can't skim stones in an alley's puddle of piss Do you remember all those wild days? When we explored with wonder and saw everything clear But you can't climb trees when the deadline's tomorrow And you can't skim stones in your beer There's a rapper on the radio, telling me he's for real But the song's crap except for samples of Curtis Mayfield And when your best creative effort's finding something good to steal Maybe you shouldn't make yourself out to be such a big deal I get drunk on disillusionment every single dreary day But I'm not reflecting the rain as pathetic fallacy's so cliche The madness in my method puts design in my disarray And my cynicism's the one belief I know I'll never betray Do you remember being a pre-teen tearaway? Playing drenched in sweat, never stopping to think But you can't bundle a grown man without getting arrested And you can't skim stones in a sick-filled sink Do you remember all those wild days? When every chair was a mountain range and you were a mountaineer But you can't make a den out of office furniture And you can't skim stones in your beer I'm as confused with where I am now as a fifties soldier on LSD How do I know people so indie they were conceived ironically? And I wonder if the only thing I'll get from my degree Is a shelf full of unread books to make me look smart intellectually But nothing's half as bad as self-pity to wallow in And full-blooded virtue is always topped by hollow sin These pills taste better than the official line you're swallowing If we ever go the same way, fuck you if you think I'm following I remember being a pre-teen tearaway But when did we lose our freedom and when did we gain our fear? Because you can't play tag on a crowded tube train And I can't skim stones in my beer But what's the use of remembering all those wild days? Because we can't ever go back and repeat the past And if we can't skim stones in our beer Maybe we should get a bigger glass Last edited by sketchyjoe; 03-08-2006 at 04:57 PM. |
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With your powers combined
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: California
Posts: 1,165
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This is me taking a risk...
- 1547 T.O.D. – Perhaps this was the wrong time to call it. You. I know you. I’d recognize the feel of those hands anywhere. Why you have left me? Perhaps there was a mistake from the beginning. Please, just tell me. It has been so long since anyone has spoken truth to me. That white coat wont protect you for long. “…started a second line and administered two liters of O-neg in the field.” “…start a central line and give her 5mg morphine. I need a cross table c-spine, CBC, Chem 7, And lets get a… she’s crashing! Charge 200. Clear…!” The electric shock. Please just skim my blood for Something, anything that would explain Why I speak, but no one hears me… Perhaps it was her time to die. “We did everything we could…” Last edited by Lowridenn; 03-09-2006 at 05:41 PM. |
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,461
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easy word to work with. Cool.
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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Got milk?
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Dear diary, Jackpot!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Essex, england
Posts: 310
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I shall soon make my entry..
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Resident
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Jurassic Park
Posts: 31,126
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It's not as obvious as it used to be,
They're always listening to me. Hanging off every word that I say. It's almost painful Like a deep muscle massage- You enjoy it cause you know That the pain's for the best. You can't afford to be listening to me. A job that pays in confidence, Makes it painfully easy. To avoid you at times like this. I can't afford to spend time with those sleazy, Fourteen year old prostitutes that you call friends. I'm on my way to the Gal of the Gotha. What a way to rephrase it, A march to the cross-hill. Things are only happy as long as I'm smiling. Stop smiling. I'm stumbling just to breathe in the scent. Tuck that parchment envelope Into the blouse you wear. Nothing's quite so confidential, When housed in lavender lingerie Mediocre restaurants are such A blossoming monopoly- It must be quite convenient, They cater to your taste so damn well. Of course it tastes like salt to us- But that doesn't bother you, Salt my wounds with your saliva The wounds, mind you, that originated, From such magnificently manicured talons. I'm on my way to the Gal of the Gotha. What a way to rephrase it, A march to the cross-hill. Things are only happy as long as I'm smiling. Stop smiling. I'm stumbling just to breathe in the scent. Emerald pools of majesty and the distinct smell of tragedy. I'll stop sounding eloquent when you pay the price. Blood on the windowsills wont help with the butchers bill. An counterfeit plaque is what says you're my wife. You skim quickly over these words. As if they're not worth your gaze. You have no idea how much it hurts, A horrible cliché. I'm on my way to the Gal of the Gotha It always comes back to the blood you forgot to bleed. I'm on my way to the Gal of the Gotha It always comes back to blood. |
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Digging: Brand New - Daisy |
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cash money
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Avon, IN
Posts: 990
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probably.
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Turning Water into Funk
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 1,572
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Maybe
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Things you own own you.
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 30
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Sure, why not. got a coupla decent reviews last time.
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You Need Sunshine, Vitamin... S&L Mx Sarcasm Princess. Look-out, I bite... Or does that turn you on?
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Inside a Bi-Polar Bear
Posts: 2,131
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Whats the deal with all the four letter S-Words...
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Praise to the Sinners
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Marlborough, Massachusetts
Posts: 902
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A Dove, A Dove
I miss my glove The gloss, the mull Never in vogue, Protected col, Hold, please, my love. I thought the sky, Drank all a flask, A tear, an eye, Up in wind, mine Numeral flies. Skimming clouds in search, Lost I am, My glove seems to lurch To far lands. Solitude is found, When at last, I touch ground. Last edited by conniption; 03-13-2006 at 02:00 PM. |
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You think you know ROCK?!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Gone schooling
Posts: 1,440
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Things Unsaid
My expected silence shackles my soaring wings And anchors my soul in the depths of the ocean. The sun barely skims the surface And looking upwards I concede to the tide. And I remember the time that I closed my eyes And it felt like I was going under. I fell a thousand feet And wished I’d landed in your embrace. Do you remember when we torched the cross? The fragrant ashes enveloped that fleeting moment. And I wish I could tell you now What I wanted to say back then. What a funny thought it is, that we spend our lives Trying to get to this, Some everlasting point of happiness And we come to forget the journey we’ve made. And I would share my room with you, If my door would close, And I’d show you what I think If the stars would stop their piercing gaze. “Had we but world enough and time” I would ask you to stay. Cause you have stolen my thoughts And you just won’t go away… Last edited by Jetpack; 03-13-2006 at 11:41 AM. |
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Lacks Originality
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
Posts: 1,356
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THE BRIM…TO THE BRINK
From the terrace rail The coolness gently rises Soothing is the lotus, riding A thousand noiseless ripples Ambrosia… skimmed by The ornate hand of privilege The rest will surely die Subservient to their station Tethered to inconsequence Picture the man of little means Wednesdays deathless effete Unseen voices speak a panacea So impelled, he’s set in motion The promise wholly consumes Sunset clouds gather the fading light His time to subvert runs short But does he follow or is he driven Woe to the Savior, paroxysm is His master now… Far from me to relieve This…..Pebble in my shoe |
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Registered User
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 4
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Hey, I'm new here so first post, wooh. I wrote this before reading the others then suddenly realised how out of my depth I was, but I figure I might as well try. Sorry if a broke any rules accidently here, I bleeped out the swearword.
PS I think up guitar parts as I go so and 'bowchicadownow' or anything like that is just I guide, if you know what I mean by it great, if not, ah well. ============================================== Have you ever read something, then read it again, You just didn't quite get what it means, Have you ever thought about way back when, Cause now nothings as good as it seems. I remember a time when the clock had no face, It didn't laugh when I checked my age, I'm not gonna b**** and whine as I remember a morning, The night after we took to the stage. When... you... peeled the skin of fat from the milk left out, After a night of partying ha-ard, When you downed the entire carton, tastes like lard, Then threw up and collapsed wiped out. No, its never as good now, with the wife and kids, Its never as good now with the traffic grids, woah yeah. <dow ta downa, dow ta dow> x 2 Standing, by the lake near my beach hut, Throwing, stones across the lake, like a cut Wondering, how I can make my demons shut up, About that night. When... you... peeled the skin of fat from the milk left out, After a night of partying ha-ard, When you downed the entire carton, tastes like lard, Then threw up and collapsed wiped out. No, its never as good now, with the wife and kids, Its never as good now with the traffic grids, woah yeah. <dow ta downa, dow ta dow> x 2 I'm not quite sure what to write here, to include it all or just one, I'm not quite sure who to fight here, instead of being trolls, can't we all just have fun. Have you ever read something, then read it again, You just didn't quite get what it means, Have you ever thought about way back when, When you were single and carefree, single and happy. ======================================== |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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The tide at twelve
In times of trouble I skim the water like a pebble's sigh that I must find My own level, my own level. I cast my eyes out to the ends of the world and I wait here on the banks of the River Time. I am adrift on hope and this too shall pass with the rest of love in the coldest water. A language of light For those that wish to speak A language of sight For those that wish to seek Find my own level This hollow awaits the force of the storm I am the spirit flowing from the mouth of the tide. |
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