Challenge 102 - Voting

pixiesfanyo · 02-07-2006, 07:56 PM

pixiesfanyo
sketchyjoe
bigbadbobbieo
atcharo
conniptionao
RunAmokRampanto
Silenceevolvos
Dfelon

lez go bitchos

conniption · 02-07-2006, 07:58 PM

pixiesfanyo 3
sketchyjoe 6
bigbadbobbieo 5
atcharo 2
conniptionao X
RunAmokRampanto 4
Silenceevolvos 7
Dfelono 1

Espanol es mi idioma favorita.

ATC · 02-08-2006, 12:16 AM

pixiesfanyatos -6 - Nice. Didn't grab me though.
sketchyjoaotos -3 - I could stand the rhyming(mostly) but the flow and writing hold it together.
bigbadbobbiatos -7 - Not bad. Just that it's less strong.
atcharatos -x
conniptionatos -5 - Didn't like the title. I like the content and how you've told it despite its lack of whoa factor.
RunAmokRampantios -4 - I critted this. *hint*
Silenceevolvos - 2 - Interesting structure. Well-written, except for the overkill at the end.
Dfelonios - 1 - Very well-written narrative.

Go Greek, bitches

RunAmokRampant · 02-08-2006, 12:38 AM

pixiesfanyo - short and pretty sweet. 3

sketchyjoe - the rhyming is aggravating and stale. 7

bigbadbobbieo - Have you written something similar to this? I have a feeling you wrote something similar. Anyway I liked it pretty much. 4

atcharo - this is almost a mixture of prose and poetry. When I read it I cannot help but read it fast because you've created quite a tone with this piece. Pretty good. 2

conniptionao - No doubt written well, just seems that there is still something lacking. 5

Silenceevolvos - Interesting to say the least. Not bad but not winning material unfortunately 6

Dfelon - Loved the story, you told it well. 1

sketchyjoe · 02-08-2006, 05:05 AM

pixiesfanyo - 7th
sketchyjoe
bigbadbobbieo - 6th
atcharo - 1st
conniptionao - 4th
RunAmokRampanto - 5th
Silenceevolvos - 3rd
Dfelon - 2nd

***DFelon204409*** · 02-08-2006, 08:41 AM

pixiesfanyo - 6.8 - Your language is good. No doubt about that. But I feel everything is too opaque. Your two primary established imagery sets are about allure and devotion and nature and greenness. Those two sets work well together as they're original but I'm having trouble getting a greater sense of what you're going for. Too hard to drag meaning out of. The use of the word "dilate" is awkward but the intent is awesome.

sketchyjoe - 7.0
bigbadbobbieo - 6.5
atcharo - 7.8
conniptionao - 5.9
RunAmokRampanto - 5.8
Silenceevolvos - 5.6
Dfelon- no

Rankings
1. atc
2. sketchyjoe
3. pixies
4, bbb
5. conniption
6. runamok
7. silenceevolves

Bigbadbob · 02-08-2006, 03:42 PM

6th... pixiesfanyo

3rd... sketchyjoe: Is this a BECK single?

bigbadbobbieo

5th...atcharo: That is one........ long..........sentance!

7th... conniptionao: Doesnt strike a chord right off... but I'll keep trying.

2nd.... RunAmokRampanto: for some reason I dont like the Bees metaphor, the rest is, how you say....supurb.

4th... Silenceevolvos: different.... I like that.

1st... Dfelon: Ya just cant miss with pastels

silenceevolves · 02-11-2006, 01:48 PM

oh, right i was in this.

pixiesfanyo - 3
sketchyjoe - 7
bigbadbobbieo - 5
atcharo - 1
conniptionao - 4
RunAmokRampanto - 6
Silenceevolvos
Dfelon - 2

pixiesfanyo · 02-16-2006, 03:28 PM

sketchyjoe - 5
bigbadbobbieo - 4
atcharo - 7
conniptionao - 6
RunAmokRampanto - 3
Silenceevolvos - 2
Dfelon - 1

02-07-2006, 07:56 PM	#1
pixiesfanyo huffing & puffing Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: idyllwild, ca Posts: 17,776	Challenge 102 - Voting pixiesfanyo sketchyjoe bigbadbobbieo atcharo conniptionao RunAmokRampanto Silenceevolvos Dfelon lez go bitchos Last edited by DFelon204409; 02-07-2006 at 11:44 PM.
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02-07-2006, 07:58 PM	#2
conniption Praise to the Sinners Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Marlborough, Massachusetts Posts: 902	pixiesfanyo 3 sketchyjoe 6 bigbadbobbieo 5 atcharo 2 conniptionao X RunAmokRampanto 4 Silenceevolvos 7 Dfelono 1 Espanol es mi idioma favorita. Last edited by conniption; 02-15-2006 at 08:44 PM.

02-08-2006, 12:16 AM	#3
ATC Thru leaves,over bridges Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 6,745	pixiesfanyatos -6 - Nice. Didn't grab me though. sketchyjoaotos -3 - I could stand the rhyming(mostly) but the flow and writing hold it together. bigbadbobbiatos -7 - Not bad. Just that it's less strong. atcharatos -x conniptionatos -5 - Didn't like the title. I like the content and how you've told it despite its lack of whoa factor. RunAmokRampantios -4 - I critted this. hint Silenceevolvos - 2 - Interesting structure. Well-written, except for the overkill at the end. Dfelonios - 1 - Very well-written narrative. Go Greek, bitches Last edited by ATC; 02-15-2006 at 09:27 PM.

02-08-2006, 12:38 AM	#4
RunAmokRampant Planeteer 4 life Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 4,461	pixiesfanyo - short and pretty sweet. 3 sketchyjoe - the rhyming is aggravating and stale. 7 bigbadbobbieo - Have you written something similar to this? I have a feeling you wrote something similar. Anyway I liked it pretty much. 4 atcharo - this is almost a mixture of prose and poetry. When I read it I cannot help but read it fast because you've created quite a tone with this piece. Pretty good. 2 conniptionao - No doubt written well, just seems that there is still something lacking. 5 Silenceevolvos - Interesting to say the least. Not bad but not winning material unfortunately 6 Dfelon - Loved the story, you told it well. 1 Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 02-14-2006 at 05:30 PM.
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02-08-2006, 05:05 AM	#5
sketchyjoe GREAT GOOGA-MOOGA! Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Desolation Row, London Posts: 16,337	pixiesfanyo - 7th sketchyjoe bigbadbobbieo - 6th atcharo - 1st conniptionao - 4th RunAmokRampanto - 5th Silenceevolvos - 3rd Dfelon - 2nd Last edited by sketchyjoe; 02-15-2006 at 10:43 AM.

02-08-2006, 08:41 AM	#6
*DFelon204409* i want tha gold Supermod Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: San Francisco Posts: 14,900	pixiesfanyo - 6.8 - Your language is good. No doubt about that. But I feel everything is too opaque. Your two primary established imagery sets are about allure and devotion and nature and greenness. Those two sets work well together as they're original but I'm having trouble getting a greater sense of what you're going for. Too hard to drag meaning out of. The use of the word "dilate" is awkward but the intent is awesome. sketchyjoe - 7.0 bigbadbobbieo - 6.5 atcharo - 7.8 conniptionao - 5.9 RunAmokRampanto - 5.8 Silenceevolvos - 5.6 Dfelon- no Rankings 1. atc 2. sketchyjoe 3. pixies 4, bbb 5. conniption 6. runamok 7. silenceevolves Last edited by DFelon204409; 02-17-2006 at 10:32 AM.
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02-08-2006, 03:42 PM	#7
Bigbadbob Lacks Originality Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Portland, Or Posts: 1,356	6th... pixiesfanyo 3rd... sketchyjoe: Is this a BECK single? bigbadbobbieo 5th...atcharo: That is one........ long..........sentance! 7th... conniptionao: Doesnt strike a chord right off... but I'll keep trying. 2nd.... RunAmokRampanto: for some reason I dont like the Bees metaphor, the rest is, how you say....supurb. 4th... Silenceevolvos: different.... I like that. 1st... Dfelon: Ya just cant miss with pastels Last edited by Bigbadbob; 02-14-2006 at 10:29 AM.

02-11-2006, 01:48 PM	#8
silenceevolves Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 63	oh, right i was in this. pixiesfanyo - 3 sketchyjoe - 7 bigbadbobbieo - 5 atcharo - 1 conniptionao - 4 RunAmokRampanto - 6 Silenceevolvos Dfelon - 2 Last edited by silenceevolves; 02-16-2006 at 07:00 PM.

02-16-2006, 03:28 PM	#9
pixiesfanyo huffing & puffing Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: idyllwild, ca Posts: 17,776	sketchyjoe - 5 bigbadbobbieo - 4 atcharo - 7 conniptionao - 6 RunAmokRampanto - 3 Silenceevolvos - 2 Dfelon - 1
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