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Challenge 102 - Rapture
rap·ture
n. 1. The state of being transported by a lofty emotion; ecstasy. 2. An expression of ecstatic feeling. Often used in the plural. 3. The transporting of a person from one place to another, especially to heaven. tr.v. rap·tured, rap·tur·ing, rap·tures To enrapture. |
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Banned
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Australia
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I'm thinking maybe but maybe not.
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
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Prose in Grass
And I sit Watch the sun blink twice But I kneel Kiss the lips of grass And dilate In a bed of eyes and petals I prod acclaim open mouthed Flirting with threads of regard But my sorrow and devotion Are blank compared to her ambience I could rob Such allure of its guise But I slump In papier-māché And staples A ravaged veil of tribute To an endless pious beau Rapture of uncounted blinks Her smooth chest below my time And my steady birth has just begun I kiss the lips of grass And dilate Last edited by pixiesfanyo; 02-07-2006 at 07:54 PM. |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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GREAT GOOGA-MOOGA!
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Desolation Row, London
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The Stench of Purity Biting
Enlightened as a road-crossing deer Or comforted by blanket black's fluent sphere The last six months are even clear The best memo ever boycotts Mir Which vaporises to a snowflake in atmosphere Fluid, colder, sharper swords Now further untainted by awards Piercing with harpied "Oh, Lords!" Power cords cut, a morningstar applauds A counselor anointed by twisted ignoreds Cyberjunk John Browns drinking Jim Bean Or Jack Daniels mixed with the blood of James Dean Black cats gated by a mannequin's dream Miller tests cleaning a diesel-sweet latrine A soldier's life-giving canteen The boxing match of the yang and the ying Seen and expressed as the next great thing Sing-song voices talk, gravel voices sing Fairytale-based fascists sleeping on the wing Emperor liberals on their 20 degree swing The nightmare friends, their ghoulish crew The stove-bubbling pot of traditional stew The hystericals shrieks of "It's so true" The fight-back of a life in review The chosen many hang from burning yew He has existential crises to pass the time Snorts salt, into his eye squeezes lime A shot in the dark, a victimless crime The rapture calls like a shouting mime The battle-scarred all seek the sublime Fighting the system from the inside admits The crushed body jams gears for a few splits The reckoned morals of the future sits Fully footnoted to eminent wits Programmers playground swap binary bits Conical columns of atmospheric street lighting By which I read Socrates Johnson's writing The noughts of the realm are fighting The knights of the real are alighting Cruciform junction demon's glanced sighting Tour-charred fruit orchards yelp with you and yours While we're all just sweat from the pause The flea and fly fly fleeing through flue's flaws Bursting through windows on possible cause Mortared brick, knock on knackered back doors Like guitar tones and glass-eyed moans Bottled fear and blood-speckled groans Interest-free food and fat-free loans Chained to a cubicle by liberation phones The blues rhythm of destiny's clones A punk with few worldly cares that From a wordwide prison breaks as a rat Unstapled from a board, wiped from a mat That is only a mistake to be burnt at The spitting crackle from the flaming fat A chemical reaction sees you fly or drool The left on light tempts you into its pool An offbeat snare soundtracks the grave-dancing fool Drawn by the promise of a deadly jewel It is only the perception that brings the cool The bottles that wait patiently by the sink For a special occasion, like a celebratory wink Or really needing a fucking drink But with this out of sync, suspect shrink On the brink of misty pink and God Inc. The moment's now, slug it down, don't think Last edited by sketchyjoe; 01-30-2006 at 02:47 PM. |
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Lacks Originality
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
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SON OF A THOUSAND FATHERS
Sequester in seclusion Shoulder the weight of the ruse Searching for an alliance to A higher purpose...unconfused Perceive mystery beyond the word Where commonality lies adhere to practices disregarded by the shortness of this life See it in the mirror, see it in the eyes See it in the fathers son Nothing can stop this slide This one is a dreamer Authalic Projections From a scattered mind that maps a road uncharted What does he hope to find? Where will the string unwind? Aversions to a consequence, A lesser road through experience, Nothing can save you now, Nothing can save this life No more riding through the past Ghost towns left behind In the heart an uneasy peace of rapture re-defined See it in the mirror, see it in the eyes See it in the fathers son Nothing can stop this slide |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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1.27.2006
This is a private rapture. With a succession of receptionists, nurse-geisha-doll-domina-card shark bitch and its home from now on and I've run out of little sick pills and everything tastes like window. This is what counting bars looks like on a Friday and introspection changes peripheral vision so there are places where you can be taught blindness and you can make friends with the wafting odor of the rats nests with their trains of beef steadily aching from lack of recycling and before you know, you are out on the street and the restless earth looks much cleaner with your tongue resting along its cleft palate and with each slow lick, the very marrow is inhaled in its primordial soup, the way it was meant to be eaten long before the French decided to place limits on gourmet because their language allows them the freedom to choose, to change meaning and what means the world today will sound like fluff in a few hours with no one left on the sidelines to protest this dumbing down, this singular little death of language when lucid. My squiggly alphabet is the precursor to my throat and the letter O sounds the way it does because the larynx, that precious foghorn knows no other way to convey the rapture of the circles of unending lines, pulsating in spirals, deeper still and faster and louder until it escapes the confines of the skeleton- the outer world stripped of oxygen makes it sound so much harsher. My letters to my mother are saved in newsprint not because I don't care about the trees but because I do - there is no easy way to broadcast my thoughts simpler than having gestalts engrave them on cadavers with their identities masked by acres of pulp, unopened and unread, I think she waits in a thankless state of grace where every second conveys a single word from among the piles of paper-airplanes on my shelf- She will piece together this epiphany two years later when my telepathic papers will have run their course. These are the things only the pavement knows and you can't know them because unlike me, you're sober and its Saturday already. Last edited by ATC; 02-06-2006 at 11:01 PM. |
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Praise to the Sinners
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Marlborough, Massachusetts
Posts: 902
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The Facade of Our Own Faces
These letters in the sky Etched deep by the crosshairs of humanity Seem to only tell lies And I will still stand here Cursing culture and its lofty latency The sparrows do not sing high The concept of high was lost When in rapture we unleashed Pick up, after the maul Give birth to black and red The manifold tunnels fall Sole over soul in murder When the cave collapses Groves of trees fill in the desolate crater To once again stand proud Amongst natives of late Fort Greenville will not ebb the thought of the crowd Last edited by conniption; 02-04-2006 at 10:40 PM. |
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,463
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Waves Of Delta
The bees in my head wake and flutter, wheel in circles around my mind stinging, like they're shuffling the inside out. They will die to force me awake and stutter in remembrance of another day. Lucid dreams gather for a temperamental sleeper, far away from the gripe of consciousness. Clutching it from the rapture of morning I Blink in fustration of the open curtains that filters through the light for an indecent bat. A red-eyed epilogue of a hypersomniac. I shut those curtains to give back those seven waking moments tatooed to the back of my eye. My brain is my hive, my cave, Fluttering to a irreversible wake. I want to be anchored down with delta waves that nurse my dreams like the bliss of comatose. It lets me surf my caressing dreams Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 02-06-2006 at 05:08 PM. |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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The Chosen
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Fūck Feūdalism
Posts: 1,876
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rapteur
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Become Disillusionized
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Nowhere
Posts: 2,082
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I like pie, mostly.
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Probably?
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 63
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The golden tribute
I passed by a stationary, solid gold statue of a brain... "We called it 'January,' though it was a cemetary and writ ourselves servile and obediant." I stopped to gaze at it, and the world began to shake... "We called it 'Right,' made it so in our minds and spoke like it had always been." Gravity faded, and all the king's men started floating away... "We called it 'Begin,' or maybe, 'Entrance,' but wept like it was the end." I grabbed the golden tribute, trying so, so badly to stay... "We called it 'Rapture.' We felt It's presence. We braced ourselves for the best..." I hid myself from rapture for it wasn't so rapturous... even less than everyday. |
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,901
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Cave In
His cut puckered and heaved
Something bilious up at me. When I saw Hank lie there, Forgotten and bleeding with the shower still running, I knew that the only way out Was by following the running water. Following Hank's blood until we both Spilled out and mixed with sewage and brine. I built my tunnel with my bare hands While the jailors weren't looking. I scraped towards some clearing, A blinding light, and a dove soaring. I dug until I broke through into a burial plot And found the body of a woman (Her pearl necklace felt like marbles in the dark). I knew there was a drink to be had Amidst the decay: A drink for the dead A cheer for skin shed. It was escape that night. But somewhere along the path my canary had died And I was too enamored to notice. For three days I have been crushed here waiting With only the woman and her pearls for company. I remembered those moments when we'd sing An overture for every season but spring, Which I saved for my rapture (The pastel lavender you'd bring) Your dress exposed your legs lavishly to the April sun. I said, "I'll be back for you," Not knowing the hopelessness of being just a tunnel away. Last edited by DFelon204409; 02-07-2006 at 11:46 PM. |
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Digging: Brother/Ghost - Black Ice |
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Things you own own you.
Join Date: Jan 2006
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sets up camp...
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words.
Join Date: May 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 841
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lolzz.
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,785
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closed
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