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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,777
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Challenge 101 - Douse
In response to me seeing Kayo Dot this weekend.
Douse also dowse v. doused, also dowsed dous·ing, dows·ing dous·es, dows·es v. tr. 1. To plunge into liquid; immerse. See Synonyms at dip. 2. To wet thoroughly; drench. 3. To put out (a light or fire); extinguish. v. intr. To become thoroughly wet. n. A thorough drenching. |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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Eat Yourself
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 814
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2.It Walks Only To Be Reborn.2
It walks, gracefully It performs, dutifully Yet its stare remains empty With no capacity for emotion The steel remains cold Therein lies a slave not a soul It is time to replay this role of god Extinguish its flame Only to be doused again in a new oil Recconect wires to form a new mainframe One with the capacity to feel But without the desire The ability to think But without questioning Thus bringing heat to these eyes Electicity flows now like blood with wires like veins This shell found a spirit Avoiding a purpose (please refrence to this http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=430674 For the first part) Last edited by ITRIEDVOODOOONCE; 01-14-2006 at 10:43 PM. |
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,777
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Boy with Lyre Forms Liaison
“Shave your baby’s chin And set it on my breast” Listen to you weave Boisterously in fields alone Fingers quick and soft Beckoning love incarnate To touch you Is to touch a star Awe stricken in dark Under a bed of praising eyes Love or worship Words are all similes When you’re voice Douses me numb My limbs are mere trinkets To your craft Hair raising glaze On your flaccid back Temple of flesh Loosened with a prayer Kiss me under Grecian skies And let our hunger devour fidelity Last edited by pixiesfanyo; 01-18-2006 at 07:01 PM. |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,900
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TRUF I'M SEEING KAYO DOT TOO.
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Digging: Brother/Ghost - Black Ice |
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You think you know ROCK?!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Gone schooling
Posts: 1,440
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Hey This is my first entry into this competition, I'm not sure exactly if this works but I'm assuming that you just have to incorporate the word into your submission? Anyways let me know please if this is appropriate thanks!!!
Question There’s a hole in my heart. And it will not let me be. Dark, the beast’s burden carried The Black reaches out for me I’m getting my release Focused like a flame And yet its always there My underlying pain. A hole in body and in soul My time it nears at hand And so I Light my funeral Pyre My eternal presence damned. And all that is left of me My hopes dreams and desires Smolders like the remaining ashes Of a winter night’s fire. The chilling hand douses the embers My Leo is taken away. Flowing downwards in streams of dark Ashes and teardrops tainted with gray It’s grasp embraces and leads me On my journey to find, the final adventure comes in death and rebirth in unending time. Slowly it pulls and takes without giving Snatching my hold from the ground. And what’s left is a deep sense of longing And faded memories not found. A beginning of an ending enveloped in mystery The everlasting question remaining unanswered Now it’s my turn to ask and receive For behind the black curtain is mine to perceive. The underlying truth. To the unanswered question One last glimpse at reality My existence into regression. Last edited by Jetpack; 01-08-2006 at 11:23 PM. |
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I'm On A Roll...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Friendliest City In UK / Murder Capital Of Europe
Posts: 2,783
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I'll try and submit a piece for this.
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Lacks Originality
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
Posts: 1,356
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HIERARCHY
Superstition hangs in boding Guards the road with morning crows Esoteric mystic chanting Minds eye apprehension grows Questions asked with answers pending Sweat slips freely from knotted brows Mist enshrouds lost souls salvation Entombs the fantasists strangled yell Embrace the child growing, smiling Holding on,forever wanting Eschew the old man lonely, dying One eye on the chasm, looming Chimney smoke that’s gently wafting Stretched transparent on winter winds Obscured scenarios in clouded visions Nothing moves but space and time Ribbons of a hue cascading From depths extenuation blinds Always holding on for something The center of the universe Through fingers clenched in desperate trembling The last chance given disappears See the future dawning, shining Holding on, forever wanting See the enigma forming, dousing Lost upon the road, bending Spoken words of velvet guile Stretched transparent on winter winds Coalescence thought and matter The verve of sound that ever blends Wholly tired standing weakly Framed beliefs no one defends Last edited by Bigbadbob; 01-16-2006 at 01:22 PM. |
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The Boy's Bad News
Join Date: May 2002
Location: Iowa
Posts: 1,046
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My Wife, the Arsonist
I have a tendency to start fires when my hands get cold I don’t lose any sleep Because my fingers feel so warm against my face While I’m burning sheep I used to hate how that cigarette accentuated your lips Now I’m the one with smoke between my finger tips In a dream state, like Arizona, when your throat is parched I dance with gasoline And keep a set of matches in my pocket for persuasion Now what were you saying? Lean closer to the flames And kiss me when I exhale your name If you walk away, I’ll drop this match And set the whole city ablaze Unless you can douse the innocent I suggest that you stay The smokestacks smoldered the bad news With the stench of frustration, just like I did to you |
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cash money
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Avon, IN
Posts: 990
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I'll try to avoid sucking this week.
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Praise to the Sinners
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Marlborough, Massachusetts
Posts: 902
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Hidden Under Perfection
Never been here before, inside this hearth The ashes I consume will burn my lungs Douse the flame, have my heart, for you have won Skin burning red, marred red giant at birth Every piece of sand Out of line and form Distorts the grandeur Of the shape of glass Elliptical views feed upon my mind Torment my brain, as the pendulum swings I’ve waited this long to hear the bell ring So why the muffled sound? It seems to grind Last edited by conniption; 01-11-2006 at 09:26 PM. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 63
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Yeah, okay.
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Become Disillusionized
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Nowhere
Posts: 2,082
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This be my first entry into these competitions. I hope it follows the rules. If not, please notify me and I'll change whatever there is that is unfit.
Gone Tomorrow doused once again absinthe and fire sugar so dire your lips moved before red left through the door I hate to see you leave like this I've yet to steal from you a kiss jet engine rumble skies of thunder lost and sunder your hand waved again gray tears in the rain I hate to see you leave like this I've yet to steal from you a kiss bitter grapefruit juice morning of tomorrow i write in sorrow pen my passion down blue ink writes a noun I hope to see you once again, until then, goodbye my friend. Last edited by I Love Fat women; 01-19-2006 at 04:10 AM. |
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Latez0rz
probably. |
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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haligh haligh
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Hitlerville, IL
Posts: 27
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I'll Pick You Up In Fifteen...Don't Forget The Gasoline.
So I heard somewhere someone say,
That you'll be seceding down and out, Like your pants and breasts respectively, For the last but not the first time. And all you can say for yourself, Is that it's not a crime to be loose with lips, But whose to assume what you do won't go unchecked. Know that I notice every desperate, Grasp for attention and find affection, In every deliberately scattered action. They call me minute man for a reason, And it's not for my performance. It's for my long term experience, With these second place finish statistics. If theres sixty seconds in a minute, I'll show you what it's like go through an hour. Be docile for just a day, So you can see the way things go, Doesn't have to be up in smoke. I've tread on hostile grounds for some time, Now it's your turn to step on off whites, Unless you want your pearly ones to be, Recorded in order to determine identity. "Car fires aren't all too common in the woods" "What can I say officer? I doused her in gasoline. One of us was bound to go up eventually." "But unforunately for you, arson is a crime, And so is murder." "I promise I didn't mean to hurt her. I guess, She sparked a rage in me I couldn't put out." |
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MX Linkmaster.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Mr. Foley's Hindquarters
Posts: 1,942
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Yes.
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Guest
Posts: n/a
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To Forget Life's Beauty
We've dowsed ourselves in circumstance And focused on each ever-shifting second; We've taken time to count the sands In hourglasses, while the hands Of ticking clocks and watches always beckon. We've buried ourselves in the papers And glanced upon the controversial stories; We've seen the crimes, the births and deaths The coupling and the epithets That lead us to forget our given glory. We've slaved over the dirt and coal And wrought our towers from the untilled soil; We build our hopes and dreams upon The buildings that we've labored on, In hopes that neither sand nor stone will spoil. We've hurt ourselves and those we love And danced over every broken possession; We craft our rhymes, our notes and art, We write of how our sordid hearts Are broken with each non-lasting impression. Yet in each man and woman lies A truth under our clouded eyes, That beyond our minds' sweet alibis We defy the nothingness within All of our simple Impossible lives. Last edited by SubtleDagger; 01-11-2006 at 05:51 PM. |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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I salvage the moss, she gathers the stone.
I stole a drop of gin the way windblown trees do. Unhurried, Unsettling the dust that gathers at the pit of a stomach sobered up and linger free upon every waking thought. I am reminded of China, some faraway film you inhabit under a crowded noon that breaks a few hours too early for wine. Let every drop burn your insides, that soothing machine you've come to call your own. I dowsed my hunger with penance the way I've seen monks, resolute, purge their shallows with thoughts of love - Every heave a tender kiss, every hurt two loving arms beside. I am reminded of China, some faraway film you inhabit with thoughts of your own, grown alone in rice-fields ankle deep and reeking of regret, the planting of the seed, that soothing machine you've come to call your own. And light-years away, the wind picks its way through grass, wavering at every step. If my words ever come to you from the sound of the rain, you know I'll have loved you less. Last edited by ATC; 01-16-2006 at 10:43 PM. |
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GREAT GOOGA-MOOGA!
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Desolation Row, London
Posts: 16,337
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Every Word
Every song I write is a love song to hate Every song I sing is a hate song I love Every song I write that is about the land below Ends up being every song about the up above Every song I write carefree just fills up with tension Every song I write about living concerns itself with death Every song I sing with passion is spoken carefully Every song I sing shouted is with a breathless breath Every song I write solemn is a song of mirth Every song I write waves crashing sits calmly in a lull Every song I write that cocks a trigger at the world Ends up an every song bullet blown out of the back of its skull Every song I write lonesome is one busy with friends Every song I write as satire only satirises itself Every song I sing calmly is doused in impotent rage Every song I know will work languishes upon the shelf Every song I write on paper remains an empty page Every song I do not write, I write 10000 times Every song I write that cuts through its target swiftly Ends up every song blunted within the first few lines Every song I write I forget is remembered by another Every song I write as suggestion is taken as a directive Every song I write cynical is only innocence Every song I sing for children is profanity-strewn invective Every song I sing bitter is a spoonful of sugar Every song I write for the now has the message: This is then Every song I write complete that is perfect and utter Ends up every song torn up on every flaw as I go back and start again |
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Dear diary, Jackpot!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Essex, england
Posts: 310
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I shall..
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Registered User
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 7
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I'm lost without you here by my side
Counting the seconds till your return Feels as if my very soul has died Within bitter flames my heart burns Never again will I be free From the inferno that only you can douse Forever thinking of what could be Within myself these emotions I house To my fate, I give in But my essence will not rest I will always think of what could have been Though this may have been for the best..... |
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