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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,463
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Challenge 99 - Devour
Devour (v.t) devourer (n.), devouringly (adj)
1. to swallow or eat up voraciously or ravenously. 2. to consume destructively, recklessly, or wantonly. 3. to swallow up or engulf. 4. to take greedily with the senses or intellect. 5. to absorb or engross wholly: devoured by fears On your marks, get set ..... GO! |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Less
Flying lambs in December's darkest skies gaze wide down to earth, staring at the shadows we project right past beyond our eyes. While we heal our wounds in the morass, among poisonous crimson clovers, we lurk through these mud puddles for our bloodstained blanket, to cover from the freezing rain, and watch the growth of grass. Slowly. I lost the grasp of her hand, She fled from my arms. In her eyes I found comfort, in her arms, dismay, It's her scorn that makes me swell, Her hands remind me of the failure in my endeavour, the grapevine talk that swallows us all. It was our vice, it is my disease, It's the shine in her eyes that kept me in awe. As we stared the murderous butterflies in the woods, she devoured their wings attempting to fly at her will. Sleep in this still-life for now, My princess of filth, Where we remain quiet, letting the flies encystment mistify our secret enlightment. Let's begin once again, hiding in the morass beneath eternity's bed, so we can mourn as one, standing in the stile, looking up from earth to gaze the flying lambs in December's darkest skies. Last edited by TojesDolan; 12-09-2005 at 11:11 PM. |
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,784
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****ty tits
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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Eat Yourself
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 814
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mmmm mmmmm
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cash money
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Avon, IN
Posts: 990
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Frostbite
This morning I slepped until The sun poured through my window sill and awoke me with my heart beating faster still From a dream about December With spinning cars and woolen scarves But I was happier in November With a slight breeze blowing fallen leaves Each tree outside, a looming ghost White and crisp; each treebranch froze The poets outside now speak in prose You wouldn't recognize the eastern coast Summer is a distant memory the same as the fall This slight breeze whispers to me So softly cynical "Look outside, kid, it's over I will devour all the hope in your words Remember how I comforted you in mid-October? Well now I'll strangle you with the frigid earth I will choke you with the arctic air and spread my newly found disease of apathy and dispair with every poet's heart I freeze." Last edited by Littlejohn; 12-08-2005 at 09:17 PM. |
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roflcopterz
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 406
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Voiceless Labiodental Fricatives
Do you see the hamper? Filled with dirty clothes Some soiled beyond comprehesion Others not Hide all of them Under your bed Exhume comprehension Purchase more fabric Make your own clothing Spilt food, spilt milk Extirpate your clothing Boil your fish. Wouldn’t it be cheaper? Twice flushing counterclockwise To remove excess waste Unfiltered cigarettes A nagging cough, an air headed feeling A lack of oxygen to the brain Please mother, go purchase some Quitting aids for your own well being I’m sorry, son, but I lack the money. I think, that you for me them purchase should Sorry dearest Mother, I respect you and I want you to live. But I cannot help you for your own well being. I lack funding for your help. However, would you care for an additional puff? No. Too bad. Boil your fish. Wouldn’t it be cheaper? To heat their bowl to the point of boiling Is this not chemical welfare? Halt chemical warfare A grayish haze, devouring ethics Honor thy father and mother A burning in the hand Falls to create A burning in the bed Rapidly spreading, spilt energy drinks, Your bed, the clothes under it. Black as tar (or turning so) Fumigated maternal foundation. Through a paternal medium. Boil your fish for that sense of calmness Interrupted by guilt Extinguish the fire Wait, don’t extinguish that. Extinguish your beloved mummy It'd save cash. Last edited by cytoplasmicglob; 12-07-2005 at 06:01 PM. |
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SKEET SKEET SKEET SKEET!
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Portland, Oregon
Posts: 3,045
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Could I get in on this? I might be able to have something up as soon as tomarrow.
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Guest
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From Diamonds To Coal
Winter weighs heavy on your aching shoulders And I feel it too. You carry the stains that your eyes washed away Like chains through the ruins of loves left to gray In basements untouched. Too much silence and you're left dead To all who don't know your heart best; It beats red in the cold, And all that is offered Are the blue-tainted midnights That trail through your veins. You're used to laments, Apologies spent on the telescopes You've turned toward idle windows, While I see your stars Fall and shine and fade With every passing day. I don't know. Your heart is always on display And mine lies under sand that falls Upon the cross-marked pages. It devours all my dreams of you With every shifting second, And all I can do is write these cryptic words To remember where my opaque heart Began to beat for you: From coal to dust to diamonds and back, I saw our shifting shapes; As sure as crimson turned to black, We'd never change our ways. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: California
Posts: 61
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Sorry for asking this - if this is not the right place to ask.
What do I have to do to get in these challenges? The rules thread (which is closed) says that contestants must vote to contine submitting lyrics, but what about for newcomers? I don't urgently want to get into this particular challenge, but its something I might want to do in the future. P.S. - The two songs already submitted are phenomenal, good work guys. |
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Guest
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If it's your first challenge, you can simply write up a song and put it in here. Be sure to include the word in it and also to vote for everyone else's when the voting thread comes around.
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Sciolist
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 226
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I Need a Title and Hopefully I Will Think of One Soon
I kept the ring that you made me next to the pillow and under a glass the flowers have died but there’s a scent of flesh that still lingers in the air inside. and it’s another token of another day of sand and feet and pencil bouquets a letter and a ring of the virgin white but I wonder where the flowers go when they die. Like a headache that crawls into my head through my eyes I sense there is something that has gone terribly right. if it’s me that let you down, please be polite and lead me downstairs by a silver thread tonight and keep me in the kitchen while you go to bed. I won’t last long with the cupboards and drawers (I have never been chained up like this before. I feel like a zero to sixty pulse that’s intense for a moment, but spent in an instant. the pressure against the backing will ease as soon as you become used to me.) and the silverware will cease to entertain. In a great release of devouring depth it will bring me again to my knees and my brain. The tile is cold but the chair let me go and how could I stop it if there’s a lesson to learn? And there's something to earn to satisfy your lock; where the key is in me but I can’t seem to find it- And I don’t know where to look. I’m not sure why it came as a shock; I feel the same as I did with the book of poems when you told me you kept my smile in a box with petals. But that ring that you gave me when you said that you loved me promised the morning that you promised to love me. Was it true that you loved me? And I wonder now if it was me that you saw, or if maybe I was different then. Last edited by WhatILivefoR; 12-07-2005 at 02:56 PM. |
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The Boy's Bad News
Join Date: May 2002
Location: Iowa
Posts: 1,046
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Might enter. Might even include the challenge word.
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musics
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: A State of Denial
Posts: 4,246
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Cold By the Fire
Sing to me your story, And I’ll chide you for your innocence. I’m a stones throw from hell And I can’t even warm my hands on damnation. Oh you’re young yet my love Just stay inside your turtle shell Till the surface of the world cools. Kiss me, I’m freezing I’ll devour the moment for warmth Tell me of your sorrows, And I’ll press myself to you to fight the chill. I’m in the winter of my guilt now, My palms are printed with the chain-link of the playground. Don’t fly too high lover, You’ll only fall farther from grace; Fall back into bed with me, Till the surface of the world cools. Kiss me, I’m freezing. I’m a stones throw from hell Yet I can’t even warm my hands on damnation. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: California
Posts: 61
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Rocco the Vengeful Polar Bear
There’ve been stillborns with more fulfilling lives And starfish with more withstanding spines Pinocchio told lies so cunningly discreet Compared to the blatancy of your deceit You’re as lonesome as a single grain of sand You gunna have some fun with your hand? Something’s wrong, maybe God forgot you You’ll never learn until your black and blue Still you’re shouting and whining like a little child While secretly stabbing us all with your guile Acting and lying, you’re such a ****ing clown Girlishly crying, just put on makeup and a gown So are you ready? You better be ready for this You don’t even know a pain like this exists Your pretty face to wretches, like milk gone sour When I leave you to Rocco to be devoured Get used to this, and this time sooner is best Because you’ll fail when I put you to the test Because the world doesn’t care, your on your own Complain all you want, but you should have known Don’t even act surprised We’re fed up with lies Don’t even act surprised We’re fed up with lies So are you ready? You better be ready for this You don’t even know a pain like this exists Your pretty face to wretches, like milk gone sour When I leave you to Rocco to be devoured Last edited by schwypees; 12-08-2005 at 07:56 PM. |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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The slow trees
The roots could never be as quick as the current, dragging elegies downstream. I wonder if any of that timber will fashion a casket and rejoin the earth, crammed down the mother-maw ? Will Mrs. Di Tomaso and the pines graze another's roots, a fir perhaps, another evergreen invited to yet another party without a curfew, sap-drenched soliloquys not withstanding, I'm sure they'll get along. I wonder if Mr. Downing himself will choose the log before lunch-time and stamp it 'For a little old lady's funeral' in his head, maybe chuckle at the thought. I presume such thoughts are common meal-time conversation subjects at timber mills. Talking shop can't be much fun or no one would talk about the Canucks circa Naslund's groin. Larger concerns must devour the mightiest twig. Alpizar may be draped in pine as we speak, a tincture stored in Costa Rica may be blood, could be blood. All those angels are just sick children, bathing insane. All those angels are just sick children, bathing in sane. Last edited by ATC; 12-10-2005 at 01:09 PM. |
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No stranger to pain
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 21
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Destruction of mentality
Into the recesses of my hidden violence the demension in which darkness transmits into the places i want to resist there's no use to try and kill it so let me cower from the flame I know my fate that is to be devoured place the blame only on myself Iknow my fate that is to have no power hopelessnes under defines the feel this type of thing sends your senses reeling And the only way for me to keep the peace is the thoght that one day I'll cure this disease I look to the horizon expecting a surprise 'n all i see is the fear with no name lured back into this twisted game try it,fight it ,the more it gets delighted see it, believe it,no choice but to percieve it. |
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