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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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Challenge 97- Wax
Wax
n. 1.Any of various natural, oily or greasy heat-sensitive substances, consisting of hydrocarbons or esters of fatty acids that are insoluble in water but soluble in nonpolar organic solvents. Beeswax. Cerumen. 3.A resinous mixture used by shoemakers to rub on thread. 4.A phonograph record. 5.To increase gradually in size, number, strength, or intensity. 6.To show a progressively larger illuminated area, as the moon does in passing from new to full. Waxen, waxing etc. are permissible. Waxwork, however, is not. There you go. Make like the bees. Last edited by ATC; 10-24-2005 at 11:18 PM. |
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Rose, I can still be your friend, but I don't love you anymore
It's not an experience matter.
It's the way conditions are set and marked. It's the actions fulfilled to achieve a purpose, The thoughts you have to predict my move. All in all, it's searching for a strayed shock. To expect the uncertain luck. I can pretend, Be the witness of your disdain against the weak. I can pretend, Become the design of your architectural plan. I can pretend, Be a tame beast sitting in your warm lap. It's the fear of experiencing unsconscious sleep, That keep me in awe, that keep me from dreaming, In a land of pixies and fairies, Where the coldest stars wax along a shimmering burning moon. A place where we don't care For the bruises in our arms, Or the broken letters we keep in our hands. I can pretend. Pretend that our lives can crash again. Just once again. Last edited by TojesDolan; 10-31-2005 at 05:53 PM. |
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
Posts: 4,039
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Cha.
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,463
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The Imagination Of Closure
I have managed, little Fawn. You know I left in between the days like the owls that grapple with the bending, twilight hour. Their wings give freedom to flee the lavishness of dawn while gravity staples me. I curse corrosive mouths just like Yours. "It's too easy to fill in the gaps". A voice as sour as yours, has a tongue gifted with a life of expected surprises. A word of wax compromises the day that's still not big enough for both of us. But large enough as your eyes lash out to sing a melody in staccato inspired gentleness. Such a flirt is cliche. . . contagious. So imagine, my feline, imagine the fall without wings where surprises will catch you and confess. Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 10-30-2005 at 12:57 AM. |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,905
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The melting point of wax means nothing to me
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Digging: Dead to Me - African Elephants |
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MX Linkmaster.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Mr. Foley's Hindquarters
Posts: 1,942
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~Kendra~
Good morning dear, the dawn has kissed us both Through muted tones, the sun will dry our clothes With a yawn, we stretch our cramped and crowded selves It's the time I cherish most In the fall, through the leaves we'd rummage Through fields full of wildlife and birds with colored plumage If mother nature shows her teeth and cries the grass to sleep We'll have a colored arc as homage Isn't it wonderful? Isn't this everything you've ever dreamed of? I've seen Jesus here, where the rocks meet the coast The altar made of flowers, where the willows bend and bow Amongst the rows of green, we'll squeeze the vines and spill the wine Give honor through this toast The days will pass, the moon will wax and wane We'll sleep as one, lift our spirits to the starry gaze Blend into the galaxy, buckle Orion's belt and wrestle Ursa minor And the sun will rise again Let's be invicible Let us start the world anew |
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∞ days deleted
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Ithaca is Gorges. So are vags
Posts: 12,034
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Rap.
The written end lines are for the sake of poetry while the slashes show the functional end lines The Reason Why Back Stoops and Soup Kitchens Were Invented I’ve never known where the sun is supposed to rise Never cared./ I know where it sets though, I lived there./ I’ve got a map with a red x and black lines convening On the center,/ the legend said we’re allied Enter dragon lair/ Now I strap a GPS to my back so I can calculate my position./ It weighs down my stance, My posture’s negative Disposition / Is ignored for the sake of Riding around the carousel/ With the hopes I’ll someday lift Barbells/ To videos of trim women Stair stepping/ I’ll need a couch so I can sit back, Get wax spitting/ We get ripped for the sake of Forgetting/ Every memory we've had about our moral's constant tickling/ We'd cut of our legs if it means we don't have to walk/ But thanks to hunger pangs, our bodies are already in shock/ For every car I’ve ever driven I’ve wondered 10 states In search of reason./ As they come, I interpret my thoughts on a basis of mood, integrity and season/ It’s unreasonable to think that I should move/ I’m plastered to the spot here with Gideon And Gulliver and that's the truth/ My mind runs marathons Backwards, twist tied to steeples/ I sit on benches with men in suits collecting Penance for past sins While bickering into cell phones with other faithless people/ I’m here for the souls left over/ After those with lives Get smitten by Russel Stoeffer/ I did that once But now I’m dead/ I sleepwalk you’re pets to get/ Nickels and dimes and trusts/ So when your kiddies are sleeping I invade the fortress/ - take my last paycheck Morality here is cheap/ so I cash in on Life’s greatest mystery/ We get ripped for the sake of Forgetting/ Every memory we've had about our moral's constant tickling/ We'd cut of our legs if it means we don't have to walk/ But thanks to hunger pangs, our bodies are already in shock/ We hate roaming and eating cold meals So me and the thousand gypsies call this place home/ We’ve never had a whole lot of Come on in/ We’ll find you a bed So you and a faceless hooker can spin/ Bottles at each other and sneak peaks at private parts/ On the internet these girls don’t have all the Scars/ Well I’ll be, not once did you kiss me/ It’s alright she said Your conversation was weak/ For every minute passed in the reddened dungeon/ I have to end up at another church With other faithless souls sharing A silent luncheon/ With other faithless souls sharing Our worst memory over coffee and cigarettes/ With other faithless souls Smoking stealing and building regrets/ With other Faithless souls Grabbing preteens through backdoors/ They way they’re raised they’ll thank you Lord/ That second boy will be surprised/ She knows what happens when you Rhyme thighs with cries/ We get ripped for the sake of Forgetting/ Every memory we've had about our moral's constant tickling/ We'd cut of our legs if it means we don't have to walk/ But thanks to hunger pangs, our bodies are already in shock/ We’re never really getting out of here But our bellies will grow/ As they eat up what we should already know/ About table manners, legal status and the pulling of hair/ Like I said before, this isn’t safe ground It’s a dragon's lair/ Last edited by Dancin' Man; 10-27-2005 at 09:30 PM. |
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words.
Join Date: May 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 841
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This is the way you wish the world could feel.
If you ever talk to me you better have the purest of intentions and the most shining golden heart. Else you'll melt under the pressure, like a glorified wax model i've crafted from a wretched unweilding block. Yes i see you glimmer and shine, for now. But remember you're a work of wax. You can bend a little but soon after there's no return you will break. Yes, you'll need my help. So get down on those fragile knees and promise you'll do me proud. I'll scrape you from the floor and set you back as one. Back to the way i made you. The way i'll always allow you to be. The way you are glorious. This is the way you wish the world could feel. Last edited by bowl of oranges; 10-29-2005 at 07:14 PM. |
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Absent Compass Roses
They all were gone and we were there And I'd swear our eyes met, counted time And lingered long on lonely rhymes, then left To try and compromise the space. Emptiness had always filled the place Directions would stay late on through the night. But we were lost and following Our foolish footsteps, circles on A map with no legend upon it. We knew That dawn would never show its face. Treading forward, always giving chase, Discovering nothing but where we walked. We knew that opposite us was the moon, And so long as this star perilously loomed Then north and south and east and west Were doomed. And she was a statue born of wax With all her old flames closing in To melt her sweetest paraffin. What would A boy know of a cryptic key? Romance was devoid of geography, False continents forsaking bordered lines. The stars were crossed, the planets gone. The constellations left the skies, Meandering in lullabies, and our Eyes refused to see the light of day. We longed for the celestial bodies' glow To counteract the hardships that we'd know. Directly overhead there shone the sun, And our love would remain forever undone Until north and south and east and west Were one. Last edited by SubtleDagger; 10-25-2005 at 08:47 PM. |
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Dear diary, Jackpot!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Essex, england
Posts: 310
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I'm going to put some effort into this one...
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
Posts: 561
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...me too.
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Eat Yourself
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 814
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yay wax, a noun
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 3,684
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whacks!
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,787
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Untitled # 3
I watch an apple fall from a branch Heavy with delicacy, splitting in its dive Its core openly resting in frail air I breathe in falters and moments contrived. I shake, lost in light hairs above your navel A moon poured hourglass makes me squint Lashes spread with a still giggle And whispered words leave shoddy imprints I sleep, wake and find wax dry on my chest Snow covering quietly with its white veil Winter drips into your room unnoticed Lost in this melody of timid contrails Craters of lost harvest look above Too a sky of faded oil and sand I watch my chest unfold in the horizon Gasp and clouds roll as my lungs expand Wasting fruits Wasting moments Opposites castrate my mind And I weep verbally into her open palms Last edited by pixiesfanyo; 10-31-2005 at 05:47 AM. |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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The Duracell Bunny Wish List
All is as promised, waiting In this epiphany. Trains, Ringed electric eels, my very own Heartbeat. A suit of paint sighs by the door, The Final Bar. Its ears fall off at the trembling note; I step Out the glass. The sky has been promised. So now, I want to change the world the way Mozart did when he pissed on the moon. I want to teach my heart to beat in 13/16. I want to learn to swim now That everyone can walk on water. I want to turn into Christmas. The past looks exactly like Jeane Dixon. It's tea-time someplace warm. I can feel it wax All the way through the power lines. I want to fall down the nearest rabbit hole big enough to have me whole. I want to blow six perfect smoke rings before breakfast. I want to have enough Time to kill. I'm tired of Halloween. Last edited by ATC; 10-31-2005 at 06:33 PM. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 63
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I'm melting, I'm melting... oh. Never mind.
Night falls. Due to an error in his Memorial Satellite System, Certain things cannot be recalled. But, there's distant echoes of: "Holy shit kid, your cigarette is on fire." And; wax figurines melting, Reforming, and oscillating. Day reincarnates. He reenacts that drinking game, Only faster and, In reverse this time around. He looks up- tile. He looks right- tile. He looks down- tile. He stares into- toilet. And the best thing about it all is Remembering... Remembering... Well, something. Last edited by silenceevolves; 10-31-2005 at 05:35 PM. |
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The Chosen
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Fûck Feûdalism
Posts: 1,876
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I hope someone can guess what I was listening to while I wrote this. It's not the same style as that band, but some consistant imagery. You'll get bonus points.
Frankenstein Peasants mass Lightning strikes Thunder claps To widows' cries Further the oaken floor Farther the hearkened fall Carmine moon Echoes pitch and tar While lights far off Dance and breathe I can't make out the master (Castor) So I look within We envy the skull Sockets bright and full Knotted bones Born of God and scars The blood produced Purple tinted red I can't make out a pulse Hunt it down again Peasants mass Fork and torch in hand The creatures mask Wait to breathe 'til skeletons clash Iron, ash, bone and wax I'd like to think I'm between the living and dead While ivory struck strings Haunt my love and hatred I'd like to think I'm between the living and dead While ivory struck strings Haunt my love and hatred We envy the skull Sockets bright and full Last edited by xKONRADx; 10-31-2005 at 08:39 PM. |
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With your powers combined
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: California
Posts: 1,165
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I apologize for the length. If this piece conflicts with the rules, please let me know, so I can make it right.
- The Final Preparation of Sodium and Chloride - Act I: Studies of [Saints and Scholars] Enter pretty girl with tears in her eyes and blood on her hands. Intoxication has become the ardent embrace That cupid has exhausted for so long now… [Excuses. I know…] It wasn’t supposed to end like this: The broken bones; The bloody mess. [The way you used to look at me. You used to.] Please understand, The fist-sized organ played tricks; A 0.92 solution of chemical paranoia. For now I’ll just lie here: In between the satin sheets that we graced for so long, Using my saline tongue [Sodium. Chloride. Oh, how Chemistry has become so predictable.] To heal your salted wounds. I just wanted to feel your fingers Scribble profundities across my back For one last Time. Tell me, dear artist: Do you understand mathematics? Because I realize that for the first time: This paper bag brings me no solace. Enter bloody boy holding his arm like a sling. [‘Don’t bother to say another word.’] How does it feel, dear scientist, To remove the heart of another nameless boy? And once again, [Enter sarcasm] lover; We find ourselves soft spoken In the pluperfect calm between cries. [In between the satin sheets That kept the secrets of our Crackerjack charade alive for so long.] Why must you keep taking your Metaphorical blade to my heart? Pause. Rewind. Act II: The Saline Compromise Enter girl walking towards the bed, younger, thoughts audible. Boy under covers. [‘Pull me in under the sheets.’] Your touch is so familiar yet so foreign, As you trace your fingers across my back. You remain an untangled mess of memories; Of soliloquies… I know the role; I understand my lines all too well: “Who would you like to be, tonight?” [Maybe, Cinderella..?] Your roaming hands speak in thespian tongues; Like phantoms of figurines laced in white. How does my sweat taste? Can you feel the desperation in my half-beating heart? Or in between my folded moans Of want; of lust? [Of something more than wax in repose?] [Perhaps… are we too young?] Her anger: The Thiocyanate Complex. To think I once believed in the innocence Those diamond-plated eyes had to offer. A revelation: I now realize that you are the serpent. Act III: The Serpent Forgive me, sly poet, For our filament affair Must end Like This. Exit girl. A crumpled slip of paper floats to the floor. Burn your letter, lover; While tear drops burst in tangents of this faded apology Dancing to the adagio pounding in my head. This last night we dined on poetry and wine Only to find you blinded by the siren’s screaming light. I have nothing left to leave you. [Perhaps my… perhaps not.] I am nothing But a bagatelle of information A prism of words A shimmer of consciousness In the smallest ripple of time. Footsteps in blue shift. Boy hides. Act IV: We are but Satellites Return to end of Act I. Play. Why must you keep taking your Metaphorical blade to my heart? Mathematics has fooled me once again. Understand this, despicable poet: The finality of mathematics Has become more beautiful than anything You could Ever Create. Boy faces audience, and in an apraised tone replies. In parting, I offer you my sadness: My unintentional And Only Masterpiece.* Exeunt. 10.28.2005 *Final stanza: Respectfully borrowed excerpt from Nadir of a Cycle Named After Eros - a poem by Reena (Saturnine Silence) |
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Senior Guard
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Under a crimson sky
Posts: 4,297
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Nothing ruins the taste of peanut butter like unrequited love
The sky's a silent mistress share a lover's tear madmen roam the streets in the city of good cheer "I once thought a thought," (Reason he fed and fought) "And then it all seemed so clear." Waxen features melt an expression of regret Recall forgetten sins misshapen silhouettes "I'd swear that I know," (voices long long ago) "the sun will always set" Crescendo to the break, The seconds inch away. And the night walks ever onward, to bed with cuckold day. "Her soul I kissed" (Smoke from his lips) "And saw it stole away." The sanguine tide embraces the midnight and the shore And ivory darts will mar since conscience is a whore Look beyond connotation past the words she said. Behind dillated eyes he saw the black and red "Don't think on it," (the words he spit) "since all my heroes are dead." Last edited by Scarred4Life; 10-28-2005 at 07:38 PM. |
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 12
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The Fallacy
It's a clarion absence of sound
that she inspired from a million points a day of static baptized all around impossible to capture in this moment she'll leave after Christmas day. The envy stays with every new year another idea mistaken for forever she leaves to disappear and yesterday's plot hangs on cold, just her element of choice My ambivalence is taken to heart as a flicker in the candle wax plays out a scene that glares into every frame burning the eyes to define me She won't make it pass the year... And her picture siphons brightness from yesterday afixed to envelope, we tiptoe around the chance of a lie, it bleeds from my mouth a beg mistaken for a prayer If only there was tomorrow... I'd waive the right of certainty |
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