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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,900
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Challenge 94 "Thrush"
thrush [1]
n. 1. Any of numerous migratory songbirds of the family Turdidae, usually having brownish upper plumage and a spotted breast and noted for a clear melodious song. 2. Any of various similar or related birds, as a water thrush or thrasher. 3. Slang. A woman who sings popular songs. thrush [2] n. 1. A contagious disease caused by a fungus, Candida albicans, that occurs most often in infants and children, characterized by small whitish eruptions on the mouth, throat, and tongue, and usually accompanied by fever, colic, and diarrhea. 2. An infection of the frog of a horse's foot, characterized by a foul-smelling discharge and often resulting from unhygienic stall conditions. |
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Digging: Brother/Ghost - Black Ice |
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,461
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Cap d' Hostel Hostage
The thrush spreads like blight so burn it. Swallow down the kerosene and throw down a match unlit so the pain can feel natural. Today my thoughts come away from this scene, sticking to the memories that glowed, once that match was lit candescent I laughed when my father brought out his gun loaded with the answers. Trapped in his own home I trace the edge of the room to the window. He watches but I know - Dramatic irony victimises those without insight and once again I remember another anecdote of times well spent at your expense. Host becoming hostage, a Cap d' Hostel losing authority, like a loosening knot tied by your spell. Just like your grip on my small world, or like your grip you held on that gun. "Don't distract me with my aim", you said. But my finger was already wedged in the barrel. Home is where you taught me not to give in. And so begins another tale, another journey to the back of my mind when you lit that last cigarette and although you are now long dead when I think of home, I think of you. Now the best part of the day is walking home. Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 09-07-2005 at 05:02 AM. |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 63
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a kinetic jaw of asphalt
twenty thousand dollars of curved aluminum crushed like a stick of gum in a kinetic jaw of asphalt. red and blue fills this black room that we call a city. and the lights, they dance across the scene to a silent techno beat. and the shadows talk though their mouths aren't moving. and the metal beings march on by in a salutory parade. and the shattered glass promenades until the scene begins to fade. enter hospital, where relatives crash and burn like a cynical, heartsick angel or a saint who could only afford to drive himself to hell. sobbing like a solemn thrush singing for it lost the nest it loved until that lovely vocal chord is crushed such a beautiful voice becomes stale noise. you could draw the curtains but it'd be futile emergency rooms are dark holes. you're condensed to something less than you were: it's making ghosts out of souls. and the doctors become voices lost in the air for all you can hear is the ceasing of the ekg beeping: you've lost what you held dear. there's nothing left to catch the love we precipitate oh, there's no comfort to be found in fate. Last edited by silenceevolves; 09-05-2005 at 04:50 PM. |
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rebukepunks.com/2008.html
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Location: Location.
Posts: 21,674
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What's required to join in? It was ages since I last did one of these.
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
Posts: 561
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My Medication Is In Need of a Cure
Every tradition since my first appearance
Is for my surroundings, not for myself Out of the womb and into my tomb I was blamed for my birth and the cause of my death So how come I’m smiling? You felt every prick that the doctor delivered But I saw the good that was given in several hues Mostly blue haze in multitudes Therapy dances on my dashboard That grass skirt always makes me laugh Memory is hanging from my rearview Looking back is worthless Yet, so are my instincts So I have to check in from time to time To see if I missed out Or if I should dive out Onto the pavement Hope for the best A poke in the eye, the seers made blind I do it for them, so don’t call me selfish Aiming to please is so unsafe Especially when you have the shakes It hit her in the head But was supposed to go to her heart So why don’t I weep? Because tear duct is another word for baggage Bags I don’t need to have under my eyes How unattractive that would be This medication needs a cure If I ever find one You will all be the first to know Keep secret, this thrush Hush, hush You wouldn’t tell anyone, right? You would? I knew it! I’ll go get my medicine and then we can sort this out I’ll go get it before you start to get to me Uh oh, you’re bothering me already ...where’s my medicine? Last edited by Disco Dragon; 09-02-2005 at 02:30 PM. |
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
Posts: 4,039
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This is too hard, I'll try anyway.
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I'm On A Roll...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Friendliest City In UK / Murder Capital Of Europe
Posts: 2,783
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Whispers Of Love
Another wet funeral morning, begun
With your soul-raising tones sung, Like a thrush praising the dawn. What matter the world outside? Who cares how many scrapes and scares? And how many chairs we sit and miss? When this vicious twenty four hour circle, A microcosm for life, and a metaphor for pain, Returns like a clockwork idealist train, Without sorrow I’ll awake, as another day breaks Like sunshine through the clouds, And your song piercing my dreams. You bring me back to a world I don’t want, With whispers of love that I need. Last edited by EmergencyRoom; 09-04-2005 at 06:55 AM. |
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,900
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Throat
A darkling thrush runs the velvet
Out of an Indian summer night - The colicky cries of a widow in flight How many times have I known you in previous lives? The wool worm speaks through cankers and brine: “My face is warm” your heart divine How many alchemies will I refine? Progress is slow and Hades dry But still I try to harvest above my height: An overture for every season but spring, Which I save for my passion (The pastel lavender you bring) There’s a drink to be had amidst the decay A toast for the dead A cheer for skin shed If I knew there was something beyond tonight I’d cry out like an infant eating paint chips The invalid’s delight Pillow talk, Sensible banter I found your laced bra hanging on the banister. But of all the things to enter chrysalis and mature after the mist Our burn lingers grandest: Beautiful and brisk Last edited by DFelon204409; 09-04-2005 at 05:32 AM. |
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Digging: Brother/Ghost - Black Ice |
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Why Bother?
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 104
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Ive never done one of these before, so ill give it a shot. I imagine it will be pretty bad (rquirements in writing limit its creativity!) but ill do it.
When do you have to write it by? |
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Moderator
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 28,237
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Say goodbye to the fall,
Welcome blissfully snow and storms, Lit your fireplace, Share your warmth. It is time for the cold to arrive. Slags in the chimney, Revive once lost images of my childhood. All my friends, all the games. All the stupid things I said. Images of me impaired, victim of a terrible disease: "It's the thrush" The doctor said to me. I shouldn't have been so brave, and eat those colorful 'shrooms. Now I feel so sick, I'm feeling the reaper swing her scythe. I want my mother here with me. I feel death sorrounding the house. I grew old and strong, Jus to see my descendancy know it's roots. It's time for me to leave. Sweet mother earth, Always be together with me. Last edited by TojesDolan; 09-04-2005 at 05:03 PM. |
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Digging: Giant Squid - The Ichthyologist |
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Why Bother?
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 104
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Attempt #1, Can edit from here so I will post the R.D. Then change it as neeeded.
When the morning light bursts through your door and the clock on the floor says its a quarter past four Do not rush listen to the ancient thrush If you get wind of what she is saying You might hear that shes praying.. for you Your life may be wasted Fate may be sealed perhaps if your right We can strike a deal Love me for life and I might want you back The promise we made is a secret saved from the graave Dry those tears you havce cried and hear the thrush sound it's song and know... it won't be long Softly whisper in my ear The words I long to hear Let me know that I no longer have to feear Tell me babe, that Your gonna love me, like you said you would and Your gonna love me Like you know you should Life goes by in the blink of an eye but its far too long Dry the tears you have cried and listen to the thrush sing it's song Tell me babe, that (chorus) Your gonna love me, like you said you would and Your gonna love me Like you know you should |
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-1up!-
Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 9
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Candle lights flicker on,
linger on, stutter, perish. City's out of breath, wavering, pondering how much is left, time remaining, before the murky waters flood the basements of our childhood's shelters. Where did we neglect, forget, neglect to paint everything perfect? How did we atone, pardon? Why did we depart, with such a burden? History won't tell who's failure, departure, caused the decaying of our children's homes. In time there will be a longer path from womb to tomb, but right now we will watch and cry, faces buried in inapt hands, where blood still lies. You thrush, hush, no more cradles are swayed by your unholy voice... The graveyard was delighted with your deadening choice. Hold my hand as I weave the sand, hold my hand as we leave this land. (My regular account is -1up!-) Last edited by -1down!-; 09-05-2005 at 07:25 AM. |
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words.
Join Date: May 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 841
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my spot.
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RRRRAAAAWWWWRRRR!!!!!
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,862
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Infanity
Within a chaos theory complex Of jamais vu epiphanies What you have as known, but yet to be said Comprises the delinquencies, that you choose to dread An alternate abstractation Of our promised ascension Tasting the tedium of your doubt Always refusing to remember what it’s all about As subconscious as it seems It’s with you in your dreams Somewhere in your memory You'll find a new low The questions are buried below And we'll reap the harvest that we have sown When we take a dose of the unknown Living to forget, living just to regret This lie Is this my only calling? Is this all it’s meant to be? Or is my beating heart Only meant to deceive Despite it all I swear I've never felt more alive Being overtaken by the breeze Of divinity's sighs But what’s the point, in this blank canvas When the paints are not provided Filling in the blanks with remains Of every tear that's sighted And you're never lost for words As the words are lost on you Teaching fish about water Coercing silence on the slaughter Insignificant skipping pulses Are only there to warn her... |
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,777
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/expect something happy?
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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Registered User
Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 3
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Damaged
Thousand birds migrating and singing And the numerous times I've heard that song It's like thrashing as an infection Something I can't get out of my head Chorus: The birds sing their melody As clear as the pathway home Heading home on the route To the brightness of our future Clouds are not filled with rain It's going to be a good day It's a beautiful view from up above I just hope I can make it there I'm cursed with a disease And i'm not doing all that good Chorus: The birds sing their melody As clear as the pathway home I fall down into the bottomless sea Into a place where I can be free It's more clear than it could ever be Chorus: The birds sing their melody As clear as the pathway home I sink deeper and deeper in the water And I thrush until I die And I sing until I die Last edited by OutlawGene; 09-04-2005 at 08:04 AM. Reason: Adding a title to the song |
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Dear diary, Jackpot!
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Essex, england
Posts: 310
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Thoughts of dead branches cascade around my mind
Like the leaves long since torn from their rests at the skyline Now all hope of the warmth they provided has faded We lay, visible to the world that we hated And the eyes that could pierce, if anything sharp lay behind The breeze barely awakens my cynical sight The tinny sound of my headphones echoes in my ear Wake a thrush, with a song it would rather not hear Sometimes the silence is so melancholy, I almost don't complete my journey Compelled to lay down by the roadside, and weep just to taste the salt Sometimes I think myself so lucky, I'm not cursed with company Determined to savour every second that I have alone. It's late, and I'm stoned. |
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Guest
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Ad Infinitum Sentencing
Safety sings of soaring wings And sails upon the sunset, A thrush in thermal decadence. Rusted screws and metal grooves, Nails and keys and karats All carved in diamond architecture. Carry me to sheltered rings Around your careful fingers, Far from steel irreverence. And ink conceived of quills Will spill on empty pages. Words will wear upon the paper, The letters leaving imprints Of our ill-conceived departures. We faltered in the end again, We closed our weighted eyelids And dressed in deadbolt deviation. While science locks and confiscates In silence's horizons, We'll fly to twilight's refuges. Captivity marks the days Not free of this entrapment. But your hands are vacant cells, While mine are callous cages. Last edited by SubtleDagger; 09-05-2005 at 09:43 AM. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 21
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My Innocents
"Fate Has Betrayed (My Innocents)"
My Beloved, My Betrayal of Fate Her Loving Heart, has Thrushed me Throughly, And For Now I Must Embrace.... Yet, I am Innocent, I have been punished, For a crime I didn't commit. I now know, our Silence Must Haunt our sins, For, Suicide was upon Our greed of innocents ... Indeed, I am Now Forever withheld, My soul Passing through the gates of hell. Fate has been a b*tch, For this Deasese was part, ... Shalt I Forever be without? Obviously this song is about, Fate... whom Punishes him. So he Commits Suicide.. (A Crime He Did'nt Commmit) becuase it was fate that ruined him. |
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Lacks Originality
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Portland, Or
Posts: 1,356
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PAST THE PRIME
Your time is now done Pocket your hands or Suffer the strap It’s staring you down Avowal your missteps Inculpate to the wind Proscribe, for that is your gift But know this… On the wing This fight goes to the swift Majestic the Crow In a field of thrush Heads bent to the ground Minds sorely adrift The black hearts CRAAW Will shatter their sense Moue to their twitter Reap their last breath For too long I’ve bent under decree Worries ever gnawing, never thawing I’ve defended with purpose Not once did I flee. In the final analysis Will see who blinks Ideals wither like leaves, gently falling Who will be left standing Who’s tasted defeat Last edited by Bigbadbob; 09-06-2005 at 01:50 PM. |
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