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Old 05-03-2005, 10:06 AM   #1
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Challenge #87 ~ REPLIES

Working on a challenge word. I will have it posted soon. Something everyone can HATE!!!
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Old 05-03-2005, 10:50 AM   #2
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why is there so much animosity with the new join?
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Old 05-03-2005, 12:38 PM   #3
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who knows, but the word is beguiled, eek!
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Old 05-03-2005, 02:12 PM   #4
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I like the word.

And I think there's animosity because all the n00bs are used to getting crits in the S&L section that tell them they're great, crit back k thx, and then they show up here, and their stuff is pretty mediocre. So the vets are bored of critting crappy songs, and the n00bs are frustrated that nobody likes their stuff.
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Old 05-03-2005, 02:19 PM   #5
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Perhaps i shouldn't have enetered a challenge with one of my first peices. Bound to get killed by everyone else. But i would like to see what people think of my work as i'm quite proud of it.
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Old 05-03-2005, 03:49 PM   #6
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Perhaps i shouldn't have enetered a challenge with one of my first peices. Bound to get killed by everyone else. But i would like to see what people think of my work as i'm quite proud of it.
It's ok to enter with your "first piece", I did. Everyone hated it!!! but I got better.
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Old 05-03-2005, 07:27 PM   #7
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Perhaps i shouldn't have enetered a challenge with one of my first peices. Bound to get killed by everyone else. But i would like to see what people think of my work as i'm quite proud of it.
Yours is pretty good, though the rhyme scheme is a bit wierd.
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Old 05-03-2005, 07:29 PM   #8
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And I think there's animosity because all the n00bs are used to getting crits in the S&L section that tell them they're great, crit back k thx, and then they show up here, and their stuff is pretty mediocre. So the vets are bored of critting crappy songs, and the n00bs are frustrated that nobody likes their stuff.
No, there's animosity because the "vets" circle jerk and when the n00bs don't e-fellate them it hurts their egos and they get all pissy about it.
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Old 05-03-2005, 07:33 PM   #9
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Worst name ever. ^

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Old 05-03-2005, 08:02 PM   #10
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Anyway, if you homeboys, and girl, were to make an album of cover songs, what songs would you pick?

Mine (Hard Rock/Heavy Metal Versions, of course):

1. White Room - Cream
2. In the Air Tonight - Phil Collins
3. Heartbreaker - Pat Benetar
4. Rebel Yell - Billy Idol

...Probably more, but those are all I can think of right now...
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Old 05-03-2005, 08:26 PM   #11
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No, there's animosity because the "vets" circle jerk and when the n00bs don't e-fellate them it hurts their egos and they get all pissy about it.
Clearly, you live up to your name. Go write about it in your livejournal, k?
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Old 05-03-2005, 08:28 PM   #12
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Clearly, you live up to your name. Go write about it in your livejournal, k?
Nah, that's alright, no one cares enough to read it anyways
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Old 05-03-2005, 10:49 PM   #13
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Oh my god, shut up you! And while you're at it........leave. Nobody likes you because you're a kid.........an emo kid...........another emo kid. So leave now before you taint the rest of us.


Please.
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Old 05-03-2005, 10:59 PM   #14
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Old 05-03-2005, 11:22 PM   #15
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Oh my god, shut up you! And while you're at it........leave. Nobody likes you because you're a kid.........an emo kid...........another emo kid. So leave now before you taint the rest of us.

Please.
Oh ok. I think I'm going to go and make myself bleed because I'm a gimmick account rofl

P.S. I do get jokes.
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Old 05-04-2005, 12:00 AM   #16
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Oh ok. I think I'm going to go and make myself bleed because I'm a gimmick account rofl

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You're not funny. Go away.
 
Old 05-04-2005, 01:14 AM   #17
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ive mostly given up posting in the S&L forum for lyrics. There's only a handful of people in there that actually put effort into the crits. Well that's what I feel after my short 6 month experience on the boards. Also my first song was posted in here too. Was pretty terrible but I don't regret it at all.
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Old 05-04-2005, 06:21 AM   #18
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It's always terrible, but that's what helps the most. If you don't hear your errors, you can never correct them.

Beguile though, another crack *** word. Just doesn't have a flow. Oh well, infinitely better than the last. Speaking of which, I never got my rant about it...

Is it really fair to allow a word from a foreign language be used? I mean, the only reason it is even considered part of the english language is because some *** pirate (DD, looking at you), probably decided to use it ONCE to be cool. The word is German. Lust is german, the combining of two completely different words (Wander and love) is widely used throughout German....christ. I felt I had to write German to make it fit!

So. If I win a challenge (that's the punch line, HA!), I'm picking Rattenfaenger. So bite me.

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Old 05-04-2005, 06:21 AM   #19
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Anyway, if you homeboys, and girl, were to make an album of cover songs, what songs would you pick?

Mine (Hard Rock/Heavy Metal Versions, of course):

1. White Room - Cream
2. In the Air Tonight - Phil Collins
3. Heartbreaker - Pat Benetar
4. Rebel Yell - Billy Idol

...Probably more, but those are all I can think of right now...
I'd pick these, metal 'em up a bit and adapt em for female vocals.

AIC - We die young
Jefferson Airplane/Sanctuary - White Rabbit
Bob Dylan- Ballad of a thin man
The Kinks - Waterloo Sunset
Screaming Trees- Julie Paradise
Agalloch - Desolation Song
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Old 05-04-2005, 03:00 PM   #20
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Lust is german, the combining of two completely different words (Wander and love) is widely used throughout German
how wrong have you really failed to notice that the english we speak now is basically a mixture of Latin, Sakson, French, Dutch, and German lol
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