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A Penguin in the Desert
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Ventura, CA
Posts: 732
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Challenge 85 - Thrive
1 : to grow vigorously : FLOURISH
2 : to gain in wealth or possessions : PROSPER 3 : to progress toward or realize a goal |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 932
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Time Machine
Time riddles a rhyme hidden in a punchline. Pokin' fun at my life, refusin' to shine. Some say its meant to be, It's written in the sky. They're confusin' my stars.. with someone else's sign. and I'm not laughin' at your joke. (Chorus) Take me beyond the flow of time, Oh time machine of my design. Help to fix these mistakes of mine... I've been searchin' for you high and low. Can you take me into those moments, From a long time ago. I find myself questionin' all the things, Diggin' up history.. that has got to be wrong. And I'd run around playin' God, If it were my hands spinnin' on this clock. Help me - rip a hole in the fabric of time. I'll sew it a beautiful patch, With my own threads of fate. I could re-stitch my own past, Knit in it a desire to reminisce. Come in, sleep under this blanket of bliss. (Chorus) Take me beyond the flow of time, Oh time machine of my design. Help to fix these mistakes of mine... I've been searchin' for you high and low. Can you take me into those moments, From a long time ago. Opportunity knocks on all of these doors. And I can't stop the clocks, To change the lives they've torn. Tryin' all the rooms that can't be opened. The locks are jammed and can't be broken. I've tried turnin' all the handles I pass by. But I'm like an onerous pendulum, Runnin' up and down the halls of time. (Chorus) Take me beyond the flow of time, Oh time machine of my design. Help to fix these mistakes of mine... I've been searchin' for you high and low. Can you take me into those moments, From a long time ago. How can I thrive in this life When it's hard enough Just reasonin' with myself to stay alive. Don't wait, I'm not looking forward to.. Tomorrow's pending heart ache. ::may edit a little here and there until due date:: Last edited by Corupt2057; 04-01-2005 at 12:34 PM. |
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Senior Guard
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Under a crimson sky
Posts: 4,297
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Alright...I think I may enter something
Black Rose and Pure Mother He awoke to a bitter autumn, gave in to sweet desire He loved the lines on her lips while his world was on fire Madre del dio abbiami misericordia She tore away his future her skin was midnight-clad He tried to live forever what else did he have? All flesh is ash her face tells blissful lies How can this black rose be worth my sacrifice? Thrive on the emptiness that grows with every frown Paint me my destiny a thousand shades of brown Pray for us sinners, at the hour of our death Sing a final hymn through the cold and fear Why trust your future to a Blind Seer? Amen Last edited by Scarred4Life; 04-01-2005 at 04:02 PM. |
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
Posts: 4,039
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W3rd
Black Tie Let's make a formal engagement out of this. We can dress up, pretend we dont have problems. I'll bring the sob stories if you bring the wine, And feed you heartbreak over dinner for two. It's not that I'm a glutton for my sorrow, I just bury the past under empty plates. A toast to memories I used to dwell on. Raise your glass and thrive on my inhibitions. And I'm getting fresh as my breath turns sour, You can hate me cause I'm such a loving drunk. You have an appetite for tuxedos stained black and white, And while I'm still speaking easy, do me a little favor? Knock me out and trace my outline onto the ground, Make me look like I'm something special, Not just another marble statue in the crowd. So when morning comes, And I'm all undone, I can feel original. Maybe this migraine and my hangover will cancel eachother out? Last edited by A_Perfect_Sonnet; 04-06-2005 at 10:26 PM. |
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Paradise Lost
Everything spins and twirls And I lose sight of the world! I awake to the sound of water I lie on a warm sunny beach Is this a new world? Is true heaven in reach? I am astounded by this place I get up and walk awhile This world is so peaceful I have no choice but to smile The warm days turn into cool nights Brought in by an ocean breeze The glow of the sunset to the west As if this world was made to please A little off shore nature thrives Plants grow freely, animals roam Perhaps to a Garden of Eden, To heaven I have been thrown! I’ve lived here for years now This world is still perfectly thin No surprise in outcomes No victory in what I win nothing to set goals for no expectations soar The beach, I once loved Now fills me with no more pleasure All I think is a little discontent Would be as grand as treasure What’s the point in living If I’m not fighting? How can this be a perfect world? When everything is so sure How can nothing be wrong? When everything rises over mediocre Once the mighty ocean lulled me at night Now it’s lost it's delight This dreamland I’ve found myself in This place I dwell I must face reality This paradise is hell Last edited by Rushfan2112; 04-05-2005 at 03:44 PM. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 932
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don't promise
just do it ;-) |
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Fleet, Hampshire, UK
Posts: 134
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might do
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roflcopterz
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 406
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will it sit there on an equal scale?
will it be paid for by any bail? or does it exist? will it flourish or will it fail? will it cause a long and lengthy exhale? does it exist? you aren't me. but I am you. I am everybody's. Everyone is mine. It's all mine. But it's yours too. I don't like this. I don't like this. has it ever worked out in the past? do you think that it will ever last? is it turning red? does it bind walmart in rusted chains? does it ever lead to any gains? I think it's turning red. you aren't me. but I am you. I am everybody's. Everyone is mine. It's all mine. But it's yours too. I don't like this. I don't like this. I don't want to be you. You want to stand tall. I want to stand tall. Let's play a game of whack-a-mole. Hello Mr. Hammer, whack us on the head! get 50 points to reach your goal! just leave our rubber souls dead. 1 point, 2 point, 3 point , 4 point 1 point, 2 point, 3 point, 4 point 1 point, 2 point, 3 poin, 4 point I think I see some yellow too. |
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
Posts: 561
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The truth came from my glass of wine
Sipping past the little white lies Unveiling an honest tongue Numbing sensitivity Relishing in honesty Every word smells like my insides The scent is too strong to hide And now you wish it all undone You swallow past your inner thoughts Until the spite gets spat back at my face Zen can’t win when an ill will kills And the spills from the blood of my conscience fills The space lacking guilt that can’t ever be rebuilt The glass chips, one drip hits the floor You slip and I sip some more My lips let loose a quip that gets me kicked right out the door How far will I get before this ship goes on and hits the shore My anchor just swam away Now I’m catching each word I say Letting them thrive under my tongue My heart sets in a glass today Life was better when my mouth was afraid And now I wish it all undone Last edited by Disco Dragon; 04-02-2005 at 01:23 AM. |
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Guest
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I will edit those post soon to insert a really crappy song. I haven't written in like 3 years, but some of my works were praised here.
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,905
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The Professor's Son
The hydra is a beast of reticence:
My father studied it in Greek Mythology, Watched it thrive on its own goring, Splitting, then wringing Heracles' intended pain With its infinite coil. My mother dissected it in her lab, Oberved it regenerate and persist. But, they managed to come home from the University And ignore it even though it's there Screaming for attention like Grandpa's brine encrusted fingernails And Grandma's gaudy, slipping cleavage At my brother's wedding. Grandpa wanted Mark to marry a scholar, So he could watch his children flourish. Grandma was glad he found June, A girl whose smile could linger over A tombstone and reverse the wilting of flowers But whose mind panted after long division. My father was just glad Mark hadn't Repeated his family's history of mistakes While my mother was disappointed June's genes wouldn't encode an appreciation for Nabakov. And, there I wached the professors flounder Over the weighty silence of their conversation, The swallowed sentences of their emotions. And their tendency to never lie, But never tell the truth either. They wordleslly hacked at each other, Terrified to see the other growing Two heads for every one cut off, Only to realize their skin wasn't green and scaly Just in time for Mark's funeral. After the ceremony I decided To become an Astronomy major. I thought I could find out What answers that night's crescent moon could hold. After years in the observatory I now know: It cradles nothing. Last edited by DFelon204409; 04-05-2005 at 10:17 AM. |
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Digging: PSY/OPSogist - Kings Of Sleep |
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Feb. PPOTM \m/
Moderator
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: In a theater near you
Posts: 43,312
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Psychotic Life
Man, I'm going to get slaughtered
![]() I stare as the waves break softly on the silhouetted shores Reminiscing about the way things used to be, when we thrived We used to get along cordially, it was a comfort all shared Now I only contemplate the divorce offered by that pile of knives Your delusions are my reality, and it’s impossible to cope With the conflict presented by these splitting minds The war in my head thunders, pounding me into docility The waves still crash quietly in an arrhythmic time It crescendos in a grand cadence, body driven by convulsions Of a psyche psychotically satiated with morbid lies Cruel nightmare of reality, using delusion to deceive Bully inside my head, works to drown the strangled cries The final battle is swift and quick, wise tactics defeat The illustrious tyrant, whose reign kept him blind The fantasy is only as real as the desire the drives it Desire never dies, but fades in the malevolence of lies Self-hurt is always the solution and never the crime The root must then be in the web of societal ties Which suppress existence though it suits us fine Blissful ignorance of the quotas running our lives |
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MX Linkmaster.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Mr. Foley's Hindquarters
Posts: 1,942
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Snaggle-Tooth Rock
It's cold outside but your fingertips still grease my windows every night
I saw you coming a mile away And smelled you twenty more Jingle-cup, my lips still tingle No I can't spare you any change So they say it's just another Forgotten in the shuffle Decoration for the alleyways Like they really needed anymore Jesus himself could only take 40 days alone And desert sand is softer than a concrete home Made daddy proud and became a boxer With a mean right hook and a drinking problem And the story's almost over Enough paper bags to rebuild the tree Where squirrels and birds could thrive and eat And just perhaps they'll look down and see A life-sized ornament that looks just like me |
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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,905
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CLOSED IN 3 HOURS
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Digging: PSY/OPSogist - Kings Of Sleep |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 932
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She's a closed
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