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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
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Challenge # 80: Continuum
Continuum
pl. continua (-tny-) or continuums A continuous extent, succession, or whole, no part of which can be distinguished from neighboring parts except by arbitrary division. Mathematics. A set having the same number of points as all the real numbers in an interval. The set of all real numbers. er.. Yeah bitches. People aren't able to enter. You know who you are. Have fun guys ![]() |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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You Need Sunshine, Vitamin... S&L Mx Sarcasm Princess. Look-out, I bite... Or does that turn you on?
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Inside a Bi-Polar Bear
Posts: 2,131
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*Signs self up for entry into challenge.*
/also loves Frances the Mute A parade of alter-ego's / Child-like cut paper clippings / Fading away the older they grow... - Grrrr!! Can't write. Will try again later. My 'Try again later': Old People’s Home.. © 2004 Cooper Beilby We’ll sit for hours staring at graveyard walls. The beating of my heart stops again. A fractal mandate of these old monarchs. Glazed over eyelids are fighting the controls. White flowers grow in the winter Tyrants with scepters, blow for blow. Covered in snow I can’t move my... Mature scarecrow, shrouded with mist. The funeral marches. Watch them turn to old gulls. Bickering amongst crumbs, And old flecks of dust. A continuum marches. Hear them grow old and dull. Bickering amongst crumbs, And external rust. We’ll cut their powers starring in funeral homes, The beating of my heart stops again. A withered band-aid covering their grazes. Raising their eyelids as another of them goes. White flowers grow in the winter Tyrants with scepters, blow for blow. Covered in snow I can’t move my... Mature scarecrow, shrouded with mist. Last edited by jurialmunkey; 12-22-2004 at 12:57 AM. |
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
Posts: 4,039
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im gonna be gone and wont be able to vote for this thread
![]() /pulls out at last second Last edited by A_Perfect_Sonnet; 12-23-2004 at 09:59 AM. |
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 4,461
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hmmm interesting word. Im up for the challenge
Adam(n)'s Apple Your reincarnation doesn't pay tribute to its former displays Of what it should've been Today In this modern day Time and age carve out new moulds and create new fillings Life now takes a different kind of battery You've come too far forward in this generation I point to the dim light in the deepest corner There's your faith, tucked away for no one to see The ignorant cease to wear blindfolds and continue to compose wry excuses Because the point has become so blunt That its presence has all become mush When beliefs suffer from malnutrition will chaos erupt? The stream will stop flowing from the pollution that oozes From cracked pipes of our very foundation Clogged from our blackest arteries I smile at the recognition You're the only one with a halo on your head Mine has fallen around my neck and has begun to choke Eyes downcast I ask Is this the deicide that we've caused? A continuum has slowly unfolded Bearing poisonous bitter fruit I see you leave Guarding your faith so close to your heart Adam ate that apple Just a mirrored reflection Of the masses Shall I use my halo As a noose? You've come too far forward in this generation I point to the dim light in the deepest corner Look back and see We all became lost in the forest, So we cut down all of the trees So save yourself the time with offering us your rapture The light we have lost We cannot capture Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 12-24-2004 at 02:00 AM. |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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EraTasm Music
Join Date: Dec 2004
Posts: 177
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REND
Swallowed by transient white vessel through no orifice passed There stand menhirs three in the damp and shapeless throat A dark pyre of lost will undigested by dull brightness A complexion oft mistaken for southern stormclouds Wind weathered thrones for the seating of none Except in the appirations of a senile king Beneath the misty drapes, there is only ash A shadow of the grass once living Red consumed, now mere ashes in white purgatory Continuum develops at the feet of the three Static, watching the world conjur its fall They take time to lament the dying embers Last edited by atremore; 12-17-2004 at 08:58 PM. |
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I seriously am going to start banning you morons if you don't stop posting replies in this thread.
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Love is a hoax.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 72
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The Vines Were Strangling The Trees
The vines were strangling the trees who wished their fate upon me. I could feel their eyes glaring. Please don't leave me here. The moss acted like a blindfold, but I could still feel them staring like an omniscient demon, hell-bent on destroying me. And I could hear the sound of guns as your rubber soles hit soil. I hoped that bullet was coming for me, to take me away from this place. I knew it wasn't. Thankfully, I was wrong. And then she was the statue in the middle of the park, right outside of the branches reach. I was the nervous character standing there, admiring. Her stone eyes shone with such heat they melted me. Hand-in-hand on the beach, I liquefied and floated out to sea. Out into that continuum of opaline blue, Whose hue was only matched by her eyes, Whose tide was heading away from the shore where she was standing, contently, waving goodbye. And I could never admit how vulnerable I felt as she sang out to me angelically, And I could never admit how vulnerable I felt as I started understanding what she was saying; there were only so many times she could save me. |
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Ish Kerioth, The En Passant Detractor
Set onto black from barren white To snare a savior's wretched scribblings. He waits, Shadowing his every step, Holding fast with baited breath, Entwined in his hook, line, and sinker. With trenchcoat smiles and empty lies, He ventured out from Kerioth To Babylon. With careful chapped and stalking hands, Past metal fields and asphalt lands, Revelling in selling secrets. Charred smokestacks of stone and ash Will watch the sea's horizon line, Craving for that water's beauty While waters wish for suns to shine. The traitor's idol softly stood In textbook definition on His black square. The standard that the feeble follow When hearts will turn from full to hollow, Emptying their clinging clots. A continuum of crass entrapment. Flee the streets and seek your shelter. For seas will sing and suns will burn, Smokestacks will mourn in endless swelter. He walked in two unknowing steps Under two sly and watchful eyes, And the two former friends addressed In their two seperate, long goodbyes. Last edited by SubtleDagger; 12-19-2004 at 12:15 AM. |
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Thorn in my side
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all roses have their thorn they are as sharp as a knife their cuts are forlorn each day is cut from your life Chorus you bleed from the rose the Continuum of life is *forever* whispered after the loss you seem to doze your life will be always be severed Verse the thorn in my side putting everything else on hold the pain will never reside you feel nothing besides cold Chorus you bleed from the rose the Continuum of life is *forever* whispered after the loss you seem to doze your life will be always be severed bleeding *forever* echo |
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
Posts: 561
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"The Deal For Being An Idealist"
This shackling bastard
That secludes my continuum Seems bound to break me Stuck in a rhythm That defiles continuity While my blood becomes my only stability So I can pay for my pleasure And owe my finder her fee Still falling for every dream An idealist to the end But how I live is inconceivable An impression born from misdirection A concept I still can’t comprehend North of the boundary That splits my soul Is a danger to my defense One million fingers Point out my own missteps A trait I’ve come likely to detest While searching for water Beneath an electric fence How can I blame this all on you? I have an answer but I haven’t a clue My thoughts spill, spoken Because my mind has been broken And hammered until it oozes truth But I will continue falling Because it’s the quickest way to the end There’s no more room for stalling A pause would be implausible I will not wait to believe that I am dead Last edited by Disco Dragon; 12-20-2004 at 09:33 PM. |
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roflcopterz
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 406
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The matador, he taunts the bull
with red cloth made from a knitting spool and the knitting spool is made of plastic and the plastic is made from oil the oil is made from animals decaying underneath the surface the surface is made of dirt and rock and some dirt is waste from gastropods decaying gastropods deposit nutrients into the grainy dirt and the grainy dirt has nutrients tapped into by the root from sliced down trees; tough and fibrous factories produce some tissue the tissue is coated in phlegm and mucus and the mucus comes out from the lungs mollusks indirectly correlate to the lungs there are mollusks living in unfortunate people's lung pulmonary gastropods oxygen depleting, they breath out of your breaths in. take up surface area, unnatural emphysema begins don't get a bad cold, or your buddies might go away lay their eggs into aveoli hatch on a separate day Inhale some salt now every day though some nasal spray congratulations, you've got a way to salt those gastropods all day hypertonic, they shrival up, their larvae will not hatch a continuum of sluggies melting will let your breathing relapse. mollusks indirectly correlate to the lungs there are mollusks living in unfortunate people's lung pulmonary gastropods |
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 109
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SACKED
Naïve allusions, like sad refrains Inject a nonchalance, that shadows each day Innuendoes launched, from crooked smiles Brief glances, hooded, can’t hide the guile A haunting lamentation, which shatters the peace Colors the backdrop, with brooding unease Gravitate to the corners, to slip through the cracks Grasping at wraiths, that don’t care to grasp back What is darkness …but an absence of light What is death…but an absence of life Conjecture the continuum, a linear path Allegorize briefly, for the feeble to grasp Sacrifice knowingly, for a name on a wall Slam the door closed, let burned bridges fall What is void…but an absence of space What is lacking…but an absence of faith Cloaked in awareness, of being cut loose Dance with the insipid, who tighten the noose Knowing discreetly, without giving to spate What is peace…but an absence of hate |
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RRRRAAAAWWWWRRRR!!!!!
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,862
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yeah, just a basic hippie-esque song about freedom i just wrote.
This is the 2nd full song i've actually put to music. Not brilliant lyrics, but does go brilliantly with music. i may aswell enter this one in tho, not gonna hav time to write another one. ----------------- FREEDOM SONG ----------------- When you open your eyes And find youve been bound by bars You'll butcher yourself on the steel fence Find your call of the wild I'll stand by my principles As them stand by me to I'll gut the face of authority While onlookers stare into oblivion shapeless, thoughtless Freedom, Freedom Freedom, Singing Songs About Freedom Freedom, Freedom Freedom, Singing Songs About Freedom The secluded sites of sacred ruins keep me alive A continuum of prison cells have stood above Once majestic, Now smashed onto the ground A desolate wasteland of failed dungeons I'll live by whatever causes no harm to me or you My victimless crimes Spare no pain from you Tragic, Cowardly Freedom, Freedom Freedom, Singing Songs About Freedom Freedom, Freedom Freedom, Singing Songs About Freedom These shackles of sadistic selflessness will surely be the end of me But this wrecking ball bound to my feet will somehow set me free Last edited by d0ped0g; 12-23-2004 at 09:35 PM. |
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Where Is Your Boy?
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Wenonah, NJ/Pensacola, FL
Posts: 56
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My first lyric contest - this is a screamo song that i just wrote on the 21st and here ya go everybody - and please don't bash my song too bad I wrote it while I'm going through some rough stuff right now - and for anyone who cares 'my only one' is Kacey Carpenter she's my perfect princess - the stuff in "" in the song is stuff she's said to me
"For My Only One" How I try to keep on moving along this line Follow the path - just connecting the dots in my mind Point to point and line to line seeming all the same Everything I thought I knew - how soon it all will fade "I'm so glad this won't end" How I wish I never went and did those things I never meant I wish you meant the words you said How I try to move along acting like I'm fine Not showing when I smile I'm really sobbing inside Covering the wounds and bullet holes shot in my heart Stuffing it with tissues where I see the marks "I love the way you love me" Oh, I wish we never met - Dammit! Let me wish you back wish you into my arms again. How I try to pause the motion of time and space Freeze everything in the useless continuum of days Open face and open heart and open mind Oh my god I wish you were still mine "You're Mr Right not Mr Right Now" As I keep asking how Everything ended up this way I gave it my best every day I wish I would never hurt again I wish I would never hurt again I try to go on without what I knew And it's so hard when everything reminds me of you Don't let up, don't give in, I can't make you do Anything I ask even if I want you to Hours and days and months and years All along my doubts and fears Wishing everything was right Wishing you were here tonight I'll wait right here for you. Last edited by meberle7; 12-23-2004 at 06:12 PM. |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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LILY'S SONG
I’ve tasted you through a photograph Held my breath until the last Opened my eyes to soften the blow You’re not perfect after all I wrote a letter in your name Dipped acid in crimson ink Braille helps to lessen the sting You’re not perfect after all I breathe you through a plastic mug Licked my lips to preserve the drop But my heart knew everything all along You weren’t perfect after all I touched you through satin and silk Empty gestures to your empty eyes Continuum brings harmony You were never perfect after all. I watch you as I leave the floor Unrequited and in the ground Six feet to kill the loss You were far from perfect after all. I listen to you through the water chimes Breathing only tinkles with sound I’d rather leave than hear your voice I loved you inspite it all. I’d rather leave than hear your voice I loved you inspite it all. |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: hello, upside down train in the river
Posts: 30,982
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Continuum
Cought in the continuum once again Constantly in the cycle of inconsistancy Each time as random as the next My life changes with the pages of the text The hade fades, but returns in quick vex Break me open See what turns inside Tear me apart Continue to rape my pride Cought in the continuum once again The constant cycle of stabs to the back Each time more painful than the last The seas and oceans of betrayel are vast Into the shadows and haunting I am cast Break me open See what turns inside Tear me apart Continue to rape my pride Feeling the hate as it rips down my spine Spit on your future as you have done likewise You think it's funny you fucked up my life Lives caught in this continuum of strife |
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