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11-21-2004, 03:36 PM
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Challenge 78 - Voting
Eleventeen
zeppelinfan2k3 addicted_tochaos RunAmokRampant 6495 Disco Dragon You guys suck. |
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11-21-2004, 03:40 PM
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Feb. PPOTM \m/
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: In a theater near you
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Eleventeen
zeppelinfan2k3 addicted_tochaos RunAmokRampant 6495 Disco Dragon Yeah, so did your word  |
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11-21-2004, 05:13 PM
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
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Eleventeen
zeppelinfan2k3 addicted_tochaos RunAmokRampant 6495 Disco Dragon Yeah so did your mom.........all night long. (God I hate myself.) |
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11-22-2004, 07:12 AM
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
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Eleventeen - about 5 syllables more than 2 haikus, i think. Average imagery, nothing jumps out at me. 4
zeppelinfan2k3 - 'hole into the heart of the soul'. thats the first time i've heard that combo of three common words. good storytelling. 2 addicted_tochaos - eyehateyou RunAmokRampant - haha, that made me laugh. scotch fingers cheating on each other. kinda like a joke i heard about a toaster and a fridge. man,i m kinky. i'm not sure you used the word right but its an entertaining punk song. 3 6495- me likes. 'intrusions into august,...fall' being my favorite part. blind to 'design' or is it 'resign'? 1 Disco Dragon - asked to be DQ'd so long, suckers .... god help the bad wit Last edited by addicted_tochaos; 11-27-2004 at 06:20 AM. |
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11-22-2004, 09:10 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: hello, upside down train in the river
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Eleventeen
zeppelinfan2k3 addicted_tochaos RunAmokRampant 6495 Disco Dragon Tehe  |
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11-23-2004, 04:55 AM
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Planeteer 4 life
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Eleventeen- Not bad, not bad, a little short but I dont really dig those styles much anyway but good job 4TH
zeppelinfan2k3- nice, this one comes in for a close second place. The only crit I have is that you use too many 'sion' words. Other than that, pretty good. 2ND addicted_tochaos- very nice. I like the 'take the library out of the book' line. Very nice imagery used. 1ST RunAmokRampant 6495 - Pretty decent. Nothing else much really. Used the word nicely though. Tough choice between this and zeppelinfan2k3 3RD Disco Dragon -Apparently Disqualified Last edited by RunAmokRampant; 11-28-2004 at 05:28 AM. |
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Digging: Daitro - Y |
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11-23-2004, 03:26 PM
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
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Eleventeen
zeppelinfan2k3 addicted_tochaos RunAmokRampant 6495 Disco Dragon ive vote never to use tirade as the challenge word again, may i suggest "pimpmobile" for the winner? |
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11-26-2004, 09:29 PM
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
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is someone gonna close this? i think its been a week
edit: NVM |
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11-27-2004, 02:48 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
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#3 - Eleventeen: This had such a deep powerful message but surely could have been better developed.
#4 - zeppelinfan2k3: Not to say the writting is bad but I didnt get a lyrical feeling at all. #1 - addicted_tochaos: I just dont have enough time to absorb this. I want to vote before it closes and I've been outta town for a week. But where awppwlinfan2k3 fails to conjure a lyrical feeling this one succeeds. #2 - RunAmokRampant: I picked up from the part that starts with Tirade. I couldnt connect with the first half but did with the 2nd. 6495 Disco Dragon: DQ'd? to bad it was my fav Last edited by 6945; 11-27-2004 at 02:55 PM. |
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