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i want tha gold
Supermod
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 14,901
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Challenge 77 "Scotch"
Scotchy scotch scotch. I love scotch.
Scotch verb. 1. To put an abrupt end to: The prime minister scotched the rumors of her illness with a public appearance. 2. To injure so as to render harmless. 3. To cut or score. noun 1. 1. A surface cut or abrasion. 2. A line drawn on the ground, as one used in playing hopscotch. noun 2. 1. (used with a pl. verb) The people of Scotland. 2. Scots English. 3. Scotch whisky. adjective. 1. Scottish. 2. Tight with one's money; frugal. |
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Digging: Brother/Ghost - Black Ice |
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The Chosen
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Fûck Feûdalism
Posts: 1,876
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------------------------------------------------------------ Thank you Zeus, and Jesus too swimming. drowning in a symphony of scotch as the elongated ovals, the ones tied together high- and alone in the bass clef, the ones more often called crayola, fall through the low cover of clouds. the reds and oranges of the longer wavelengths of the electromagnetic spectrum also bounce back down to illuminate the brain and rejuvinate it from its 2:30 am static decent. ah. i hope i will shortly be back. but dont hold your breath. Last edited by xKONRADx; 11-02-2004 at 12:25 AM. |
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Greyskull
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Winchester, VA
Posts: 4,039
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Cloak and Dagger [fast breathy whispers] The cold is inside me, something is behind this. I wish I wasn't here, but where else is there? What was it they said again? I cant remember, what's wrong with me? This cold inside me, I'm losing hope. There's nothing here for me. There's nothing here, there's nothing here. [/fast breathy whispers] GO. Blue blood soaks a page covered by obsession and remorse, Confessing the way my chest burns when you are near. My body scotched by thoughtless emotions that drive This pen to bleed with threnody, and scream for invitation, but you've never let me in. It's so difficult to breathe when you're all choked up. My lungs are withering, when can I get away? Consciousness is just another way of saying That you know you're still alive, But when your heart reaches its final beats, You'll begin to waiver, and close your eyes. The worst thing you could do is say you didn't care. Well I'll show you, I'll show you all that my affection isnt just A flower, it's a rose with hardened thorns. Prick your finger, milk the wound, watch my sorrow pour, You ruined everything, I will not love you anymore. Last edited by A_Perfect_Sonnet; 11-01-2004 at 10:27 AM. |
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huffing & puffing
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: idyllwild, ca
Posts: 17,784
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A gray tainted cloud cover Glimpsed between her hairs While a straw stuffed lover Gives the other boys a scare The silhouette of her wings Paints his expression every dawn Randomized disillusions Stitched into water drips Down a darkened hallway Her confidence begins to slip Moments of pleasure Scotched in this scene Last edited by pixiesfanyo; 11-02-2004 at 04:33 PM. |
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Digging: Do Make Say Think - Other Truths |
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Bananas in pajamas...
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Iowa
Posts: 561
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Shadows make for good company
Only if you loathe the sun Stick your neck out into the light For a chance to test your self-esteem Just for it to be put onto the guillotine I have slept through meteor showers And no one bothered to stir me Comatose through the event of my lifetime And all I have to show is a random dream To substitute for a better memory Flashbulb memories Forgotten friends Days of twilight All set the trend Mistaken for an outcast all of my days The signature beneath my flesh was written by another But it was all in pretend, the ruse is over Skin has been shed but my identity remains I hoist my shell upon my back, buried beneath the rain Like scotch on a wound Unwanted, but necessary Days dissolve Onto a page In a scrapbook With just one face Last edited by Disco Dragon; 10-28-2004 at 11:06 PM. |
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that dam good? Sire!
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: van isle
Posts: 20
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The Lawyer's Song
long and dark and deep sea green eighteen years (and single malt) assumes the burden of fault and fears i'd worked so hard to aquire what is that awful noise about a movie? a topaz lacquer watercolour clinks and glistens (always listens) this glass of liquor's warm and nice isn't that funny (because it's on ice) ok ok. we'll go to a show. lemme grab my jacket long and wet cuz an octopus jet has wrapped it in rain and romance isn't that pretty? the shriek and bang are mute indiscretions (i've **** in my pants) my head on the wheel her head in my lap some glenfiddich scotch did the trick i think tomorrow i'll be sick. |
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who's messin with me?
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 390
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Dwelling
my knees are wet from kneeling at your tombstone too tipsy on scotch to drive, so I just walk home the sky is changing from black to blue you would have loved the colors, I would have too if only I had known half of what I know now I would have changed if only we had seen what was happening we could have changed stumbling through what was once our lawn I look up at the house it seems alive in the light of dawn memories haunt every inch of oak and plaster memories of tears memories of laughter if only I had known half of what I know now I would have changed if only we had seen what was happening we could have changed sitting here alone sinking in my sorrow numbing my thoughts as today becomes tomorrow |
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MX Linkmaster.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Mr. Foley's Hindquarters
Posts: 1,942
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^ *cries*
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I <3 mosh
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: MA
Posts: 420
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There's No Need to Worry When We're All Dead
I can't remember the last time I looked at myself in my bathroom mirror. Nor can I remember the last time I didn't wake up in the middle of night spitting up blood. Ah yes, now I recall that I punched out my mirror a good two weeks ago in a fit of rage. I'll be ****ed if I know what I was angry about but it's not that big of a deal. The glass, though, has scotched the bottom of my feet raw and I refuse to clean up the crimson shrapnel mess. I figure the more I tread on it the more I'll be immune to it. That's the outlook on life everyone of us should have. The more we go through and the more we put up with, the more we don't care. The more we become immune to the non-important, non-vital things in our life. The more we become immune to love. The more we become immune to sex. The more we become immune to our slow, thought-out decay. Our simple passive-agressive ways have assured us all spots in hell but at least there we can smile. Last edited by TrailOfTragedy; 11-01-2004 at 02:21 PM. |
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aspire
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: chicago
Posts: 3
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the walls are to high in this box full of toys
fell in your hole again
you made me stumble on my feet the secretss in your closet leak out and choke me in my sleep went behind my back took a knife to cut my throat you kissed me on the lips and left me comatosed look where you've put me I sit alone with my empty thoughts how's let you trick and conquer me lay me to rest while my body rots wake me from this dream cant you see your killing me reinstate my sense of feeling so in darkness i can see release me from this painful process take me from the torture that you breathe lure me not into temptation i wont let you bring me down and watch my body bleed what have i done to deserve this? whats this all about? my lungs have filled with dust, the words just wont come out wind me up and let me go stare as i do turns and backflips for you feed me words of prostitutes put me back into your box of useless objects that you portray as pleasure for yourself |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: hello, upside down train in the river
Posts: 30,982
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Taking something
Always for nothing Not a scotch on my soul But a wound that is deep My soul it bleeds I cannot breathe Can't you just Take it away Always waiting far behind Do you care? - Oh never mind Why can't I see - Am I blind? Somethings been taken - I cannot find Burning deeply in your eyes Failing abruptly as I trie My mind has lost track Of my happiness - Or my lack There of - Cannot come back Finally I let my pain go free No more lies - I'll only be me |
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Perti darned cool shucks
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: MN
Posts: 1,504
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One Bourbon
One Scotch and One Beer! |
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Guest
Posts: n/a
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Prisoner Of The Coldest War
Hair in her face, Like the last tattered soldier, Away without leave From the platoon's formation; Seeking sweet refuge Far from the dark untamed jungle, In cabins exempt from the storm. The foundation does Little to hide her complexion, Which tells of The trauma from casualties of war, As if scotches on porcelain, Or a dead tree's dark branches perforating Pure blue skies before bleeding them dry. And her eyes are The shrapnel that cascades my legs As I attempt to move On from the minefield I've lied in, And I'm drowning, As the medics issue the amphetamines; Reason overcast by twilight's crimson clouds. With the endorphines rushing All four walls collapse, Reveal barren fields endless In every direction. Alone and deserted In infinite vacancy Yet accompanied by her In my delusive dreams. But I will wake. Returning to the grasping of Dreams that aren't lasting; Retreating the frontline, A slave I'll remain. Refusing to fight My omnipotent captor, Instead seeking faint sunshine In the torrential rain. |
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MX Linkmaster.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Mr. Foley's Hindquarters
Posts: 1,942
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"A Beautiful Day for Homocide"
Red eyes, always watching Always plotting evil deeds Careful dear, just be aware I know exactly where you sleep You were fun But just for a while My heart was scotched and drunk from spouting of blood Time to paint you on the tile There is no other option No fix-it-all concoction So breathe one last time Enjoy the taste of life Oblivious to creaking boards And reflection off the knife It couldn't be a more beautiful day To get this out of the way You're prettier now We get along fine now Glad that we could talk this out Glad I cleared up any doubt That I couldn't be without You Glad that we could talk this out were Glad I cleared up any doubt the That I couldn't be without best You were the best Red floor, chalk-outlined The site of evil deeds This is where, we can share Our plot; eternal sleep There is no other option No fix-it-all concoction So breathe just one last time Enjoy the taste of life Oblivious to creaking boards And reflection off the knife It's such a perfect night For a double homocide |
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.plasticgangster.
Join Date: May 2002
Posts: 2,132
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wait
dont ignore me like this i can see your shoulders tense whenever i speak as though you cannot bear to listen wait do not leave me like this i can see you wiping tears from your scotched face as though you dont want me to know you never say what you mean you never tell me how you feel so why should i believe you screaming you dont love me you dont love me wait supress your anger now i can see this spiralling out of control and im not strong enough for this wait because i shouldnt have to lose you like this if you never say what you mean and you never tell me how you feel why should i believe you screaming you dont love me you dont love me |
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tastes like haaate
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: tx
Posts: 4,989
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It's just in my head
I keep telling myself But I keep wishing she was dead Every smile that she throws at me Doesnt seem to be heartfelt It feels more like a dagger It's so fake Being truthful never was her forte so we keep up the act but not if I can help it I'm tearing the script to shreads, to hell with it I always knew this was a disaster She better pray for mercy, cause this bottle of scotch I've been sipping is going down her throat the hate and angst is coursing its way through my veins it will feel good, I guarantee it oh how that magnificent liquid is gonna burn what a wonderful experience she better enjoy it too that ungrateful wretch if I've put up with the feeling for years, I think a couple minutes shouldn't be too stressful you're an alcoholic anyways not really that good |
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Thru leaves,over bridges
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Vancouver, BC
Posts: 6,746
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SCHIZOTHYME
we're sorry for every lie that's been told while you were sleeping Dont hold words against the silent we've only said them in our heads I told them you keep your heart in a pillowcase and your eyebrows turn red at dawn We never remember what was said but we aim to forget. We've appeased everyone who hurt and wished that they would die Dont hold thoughts against the infinite we've only heard them in your head I exchanged fairy tales with the king of cheese and painted shadows on his walls Now the cheese tastes like satin sheets And i'd rather be in bed. We've lived inside your painted walls and dream for you and China But the Chinese dont know greater walls and Mandarin's .... I played aloud with your fragile eyes and drank your poisoned scotch I dont remember taste or sight But i can hear for two Sentience Obeisance deliverance for us all. Let us make up your mind. Let us think for you. |
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