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Old 10-25-2004, 07:36 PM   #1
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So Far Away


hey peoples this is an older song i wrote tell me what u think eh


So Far away

Why do you feel so far away
Why each time I reach, you fall away
Every time I try to love, you ran away

Why do you try not to like me
What have I done to make you tired of me
I just want to give you everything
You wont let me know if you understand
I grow more impatient each day passing
I'm about to break down
So low I cant come back again
That’s not what I want

You make me feel a certain way
I love your smile, but you take it away
How much harder shall I try

Call you almost every night, to show how I care
I just want to hear your voice, but your silent
I wonder if you really know how much I care
If you come see into me, you’d know
So I can only explain things that seem so strange

Why do you avoid and not talk back to me
Why do I have to keep going for you
All the way to hell to protect you
Why can’t you see this, why prolong my suffering
What did I do to deserve this
Why can’t I be with you

I pass time by myself


Only wishing to be with you
I stare at your picture, and kiss your face
This pain I'm feeling is tearing me apart
I need you, so please come to me
Let me love and take care of you
Please

I'm breaking down, no putting back together
I'm about to crack, I feel it’s breaking through
You are the cure for my disease,
So please
Care for me….
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Old 10-25-2004, 07:47 PM   #2
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anyone have any comments
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Old 11-01-2004, 05:24 PM   #3
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well see if i every crit anyone again
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