my demo song, "Into Oblivion"

swedelead · 10-14-2004, 06:47 PM

That is really good work on keeping your rhythm constant. I dig the emotion you put into your singing however you should have someone else sing it because you are a little flat for the most part right through. Awesome spine chilling chord progression. Keep on rockin.

guitarist532 · 10-16-2004, 06:01 PM

Good work man.

frankenstein203 · 10-25-2004, 06:51 PM

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Good work man.

dude look on the guitar forum I posted at least 40 times trying to tell you to PLEEEEAASE tab it for me so I can cover it for you and you can see what it COULD sound like. I really wanna learn this song, the guitar sounds amazing in it.

IwantAcookie · 10-25-2004, 07:56 PM

good guitar work, singing could be improved...a lot, if your the singer have someone else sing while you play. I would have enjoyed it a lot more with a good singer, but other than that it was pretty good.

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10-14-2004, 06:47 PM	#2
swedelead funk/metalhead Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Edmonton Posts: 143	That is really good work on keeping your rhythm constant. I dig the emotion you put into your singing however you should have someone else sing it because you are a little flat for the most part right through. Awesome spine chilling chord progression. Keep on rockin.

10-16-2004, 06:01 PM	#3
guitarist532 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 48	Good work man.

10-25-2004, 07:56 PM	#5
IwantAcookie For-shizzle Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 781	good guitar work, singing could be improved...a lot, if your the singer have someone else sing while you play. I would have enjoyed it a lot more with a good singer, but other than that it was pretty good.