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08-14-2004, 03:30 AM
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Someday - Please Crit
It's time to show my thoughts again
Write them down using paper and pen Tell you how I feel (about you) Tell you what I think (about you) I still pray that someday I will make things better Someday you will read this letter {Can't quite get a last line to fit here} I hope that you reply I really think we give it a try Second time it's always best We sit down and forget about the rest I still pray that someday I will make things better Someday you will read this letter {Can't quite get a last line to fit here} Two weeks have passed I still have no reply Maybe you don't want to try Maybe I should curl up and die I feel so alone without you I keep making plans for two If only you were back in my life I still pray that someday I will make things better Someday you will read this letter {Can't quite get a last line to fit here} Someday I will make things better I hope you read this letter I will make things better Someday you will read this letter OK let me know what you think and could I have some help with the last line of the chorus. Cheers |
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08-14-2004, 05:09 AM
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Last edited by shaunybaby; 03-20-2008 at 05:17 PM. |
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10-23-2004, 10:32 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Greater London
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i agree wit shaunybaby
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