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Old 07-19-2004, 10:07 PM   #1
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Forget this one....

little bit of alcohol and the insane clown posse equals my rap dawg

follow the leader to get your motherfvckin throat slit
herd all the cattle, no battle, cut out all your tongues quick
nowhere we settle, my metal's gettin all your domes hit
livin your life in rewind, define the devil's walking stick
bit in the pit of your stomach like i was a drill bit
bleedin and seethin from breathin bullets in your lung sh.it
i refuse to lose my life if it's my path i choose it
if it's my strife then it's my right and noone will ever move it
inside my brain, hard to maintain but i will never lose it
if your homicide is dramatized then i will have to move quick
cause the feds and pigs need heads and things just to fvckin prove it
to make sure they won't attain personal gain i just remove it
clean the scene and take with me the tragedy because i smooth sh.it
and i'm undercover you all suffer by this and your clueless

undercover thug with an undercover club
leave you under covers and you're fvckin body numb
undercover job, i ain't no motherfvckin slob
leave you under covers and you're fvckin body robbed

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Old 07-19-2004, 10:10 PM   #2
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it was an honest try at rap lyrics



leave me alone... i'm white


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Old 07-19-2004, 10:22 PM   #3
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haha! White rap! YES!!
It's much better than all of the pop/rap/hip hop/ whatever they wanna call it, bull****.
It's still rap though...from a white boy....NOT a fan.

nice try. Alcohol does crazy things doesn't it?
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Old 07-19-2004, 10:28 PM   #4
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Hey white-boy rap can be good, if your the Beastie Boys. Every other white rapper has to quit because they've done it, and no other white boy can be good at it like they are. But this was a fun read anyways.
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Old 07-19-2004, 10:59 PM   #5
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Beastie Boys..Intergalactic Planetary! etc... etc... etc...
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Old 07-19-2004, 11:11 PM   #6
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Hah, not the best any, not b a long shot, but hell it's better than I could do, sober or not.

WHat happened to your old SN?
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Old 07-19-2004, 11:21 PM   #7
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ehhh eminem is a **** head and should be shot but you gotta admit hes got skill with puttin words together....he can free style with the best of them
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Old 07-19-2004, 11:26 PM   #8
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The best rapper ever, in case you were wondering, is MC Supernatural. Saw him at Lollapalooza, and he was absoultely incredible.
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Old 07-20-2004, 01:14 AM   #9
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Toxicferret - I posted the new threads in like every forum with the new otep video warhead link and got banned, for advertisement or something. Whatever. I just gotta remember I stopped at 776 posts on that account and I'm good. I'd just gotta add things up once in a while.

BTW, I happen to be a fan of rap... well some of it. Like Wu-Tang, D-Block and so on. I can't stand that "radio rap to get bi.tches as.ses shakin" junk like Ludacris or Nelly or something. But Eminem... ask just about any black guy... is plain and simple the best rap lyricist around. He can freestyle the **** out of anybody. If he wasn't good he wouldn't be on the new Jadakiss album, or on any of Dre's sh.it. I don't care too much for his 3 mainstream CD's but his underground sh.it kills everything. And his workm with D12 is flawless.

Anyone like ICP, or anything Psychopathic?
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Old 07-20-2004, 01:15 AM   #10
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And the best rapper ever is....


Me motherfvcker...


what the ****'d you think I was gonna say.
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Old 07-20-2004, 08:34 AM   #11
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This made my day. Its actually pretty good, better than all the mainstream rap. I also like some rap. My favorite rapper is Zack de la Rocha from RATM. But the label my band is going to be signed to (once we find a damn drummer) is a very political label, and a lot of the artists are rappers, and they are really good.
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Old 07-20-2004, 09:56 AM   #12
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Its got a few gratuitous swear words in but thats what raps all about. If you feel stupid being a white rapper I suppose these lyrics would work on something slipknot-esqe.

Could you please crit my song cataracts. I don't know how to make a link to it but you shopuld be able to find it pretty easily.
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Old 07-20-2004, 10:24 AM   #13
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Does anyone think these are actually good?


Bassaholica - the best rappers are the ones that rap about political issues and mathematics and stuff. Killing people is lots of fun though.
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Old 07-20-2004, 10:54 PM   #14
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Sorry my pizzles but the dizzle gots to bizzump this shizznit so y'all can check out my bumpin rap yo, my naizza's
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Old 07-20-2004, 10:56 PM   #15
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Old 07-21-2004, 07:26 PM   #16
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fo' shizzle dudizzle this iz da bizzle!! [what did i just say? hope i didn't offend anyone] LOL. this is actually nice, i like some rap/hip-hop sh.it too, the more underground and serious stuff. the sh.it we see on mtv just sucks...so 7/10. lol...
this is good:
undercover thug with an undercover club
leave you under covers and you're fvckin body numb
undercover job, i ain't no motherfvckin slob
leave you under covers and you're fvckin body robbed
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Old 07-21-2004, 08:19 PM   #17
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ya i gotta say rage is the only ap il lisen to and thats not really even"rap" by most peoples standards
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Old 07-21-2004, 08:20 PM   #18
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ya i gotta say rage is the only ap il lisen to and thats not really even"rap" by most peoples standards and 311s good too and chilli peppers can do it to(giv it away)
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Old 07-21-2004, 08:21 PM   #19
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sry bout that it like posted while i was typin
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Old 12-23-2004, 05:54 PM   #20
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Toxicferret - I posted the new threads in like every forum with the new otep video warhead link and got banned, for advertisement or something. Whatever. I just gotta remember I stopped at 776 posts on that account and I'm good. I'd just gotta add things up once in a while.

BTW, I happen to be a fan of rap... well some of it. Like Wu-Tang, D-Block and so on. I can't stand that "radio rap to get bi.tches as.ses shakin" junk like Ludacris or Nelly or something. But Eminem... ask just about any black guy... is plain and simple the best rap lyricist around. He can freestyle the **** out of anybody. If he wasn't good he wouldn't be on the new Jadakiss album, or on any of Dre's sh.it. I don't care too much for his 3 mainstream CD's but his underground sh.it kills everything. And his workm with D12 is flawless.

Anyone like ICP, or anything Psychopathic?

Im all about the wicked ****. ICP is my favorite, I like ABK a lot too. But Im down with all of it, Twiztid, Zug Izland, Esham, Dark Lotus, everything. Me and my roommate Mike just went and got hatchetman tattoos a couple months ago. I wish I wouldve seen this sooner though, I started a Psychopathic thread and I just got a bunch of **** for it. Its cool to know theres another ninja around here though. Check out my thread we can talk more.
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